High elf citadel - first terrain

[Tobbe_Hunter]

Here's my first terrain posted on the internet. Please tell me what you think, and how I can improve it.

 

[Slaydon]

Nice, but something is missing on the path

 

[Tobbe_Hunter]

Nice, but something is missing on the path

Hmm... yeah, you're right. I'll see what I can do.

Thanks.

 

[~Void~]

There are gaps in the light....

 

[Slaydon]

you should take away those ligths

 

[Tobbe_Hunter]

Ok, the I'll fix the light. Thanks guys.

 

[Nbah]

Everything is too spammed, you need more height variation and a better citadel design. Also fix the lights, either take thema away or make them seem like a huge burst of light (aka no gaps and a bit stronger)

 

[johannesr]

I think its quite nice for a first terrain, but yeah it seems a bit spammed.

 

[Ziggen]

The first thing I noticed is the rocks, they're just... no. Too dark for the tileset of the terrain. And yes, the light must be fixed. But it doesn't look that bad otherwise.

 

[Celaquil]

For a first terrain, this is really nice. Let me be the first one to rep you ^^

And do listen to the advices given to you, since there are so many going it isnt really nessecary of me to repeat them

 

[Ziggen]

Guys, this isn't his first terrain. Look what he wrote, it's his first on the internet. Just wanted to point that out.

 

[Tobbe_Hunter]

Thank you everyone. I really appreciate your tips
And yes I've made a couple of other terrains but they're not very good.

 

[Hawkwing]

I'd like to see a more professional camera angle.

 

[Dark Master]

Ha, you got Keiji`s word `that is good to place different types of trees` too hard.
Bad rocks IMO
Rays are not helping this terrain to get better.
Tropical plants at Fall?!
OFF-TOPIC
I sense something dark in Force...

 

[thedeathunterxx]

lol hawkwing xD he said and i quote on quote

" I'd like to see a more professional camera angle "

lol this is a First terrain...how proffesional can u get ! lmao

but back to the point. Its actually a good piece for a first terrain. The atmosphere is bright and cheery. However there are points you should aim to fix.

The scaling is on check, but i think you should first make the trees a bit scaled smaller in accordance with the castle. It doesn't seem to fit.

add a denser fog, by using 0 Z and 4000 y perhaps ? and consider adding mountains in the background. A new style of mountains is using Steinslord rocks.

 

[Hawkwing]

I don't expect something professional, but I'd like to see something more professional. This is essentially a straight-forward view. I want to see something more exciting.

 

[~Void~]

It's kind of "in" right now to take a shot looking very slightly down on the terrain from an angle turned a little bit clockwise, that's Raid's fault

You could always go for the same kind of thing as I mentioned above except looking up at the castle. I don't see that too often.

 

[Nbah]

I always set my cameras with 120 Field of View. It just makes the view's more epic.