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03:28, 22nd Feb 2016
HappyCockroach:
Firstly I got to say I would love to give this model 5/5 rating for how nice it is to have a female troll with such rich features adding to the troll race. The idea of using the Furbolg Elder texture here was great, and turned out nice. And it's clear to see how you tweaked animations to fit your concept. Now, some aspects that would do better fixed, and some aspects that need to be fixed:
- Recommended fix: A rider should embrace its mount animal with its legs. The troll's current pose isn't consonant to that idea, she's rather 'standing up' on top of the mounted animal. This image for instance, shows a more plausible pose.
- Recommended fix: The tiger's armor pads look too voluminous, and their textures aren't fitting very well with the rest of the model. They'd do better following the same pattern the tiger's mask does right now.
- Obligatory: many attachment points in your model aren't attached to any bone. That makes it impossible to attach weapons, armor and such to those. Please fix that.
That's it, basically. Your model is lovely and will surely be very useful to many.
19:27, 3rd Mar 2016
HappyCockroach:
You did the changes required, so approved. It's a pretty well-done model, of great creativity and usefulness.
HappyCockroach:
Firstly I got to say I would love to give this model 5/5 rating for how nice it is to have a female troll with such rich features adding to the troll race. The idea of using the Furbolg Elder texture here was great, and turned out nice. And it's clear to see how you tweaked animations to fit your concept. Now, some aspects that would do better fixed, and some aspects that need to be fixed:
- Recommended fix: A rider should embrace its mount animal with its legs. The troll's current pose isn't consonant to that idea, she's rather 'standing up' on top of the mounted animal. This image for instance, shows a more plausible pose.
- Recommended fix: The tiger's armor pads look too voluminous, and their textures aren't fitting very well with the rest of the model. They'd do better following the same pattern the tiger's mask does right now.
- Obligatory: many attachment points in your model aren't attached to any bone. That makes it impossible to attach weapons, armor and such to those. Please fix that.
That's it, basically. Your model is lovely and will surely be very useful to many.
19:27, 3rd Mar 2016
HappyCockroach:
You did the changes required, so approved. It's a pretty well-done model, of great creativity and usefulness.