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[Apheraz Lucent]

Your knowledge of English is poor? Your imagination is low? You are at the right place! By following the requirements below, you will get unique and free-hand descriptions about just anything!

Requirements

Hero Class/ Name/ Description

In order to get a matching class name, you will need to provide me following info:
1. Elemental (Fire, Ice, Thunder, Poison, Nature, Universal, Frost-Fire, None, ...)
2. Hero Type (Carry, Defensive, Supporting, Offensive, Combined of _ and _, ...)
3. Hero's Model (Succubus, Peasant, Sorceress, Purple Spider, Sylvanas, ...)

Example of request:
Hi, I need a Hero Class description about my hero that uses the Sorceress model, elemental is futuristic, and her type is defensive/offensive. Thanks forward.

In order to get a proper name for your hero, you will need to provide me following info:
1. Hero Class - If possible
2. Gender (Male or Female)
3. Hero's Model (Succubus, Peasant, Sorceress, Purple Spider, Sylvanas, ...)
4. Name Length (Long (Jaina Proudmoore) or Short (Jaina))

Example of request:
Can you create me a hero name for my hero, using the presets: Class is Naga Sorceress, gender female, model is naga summoner, and a short name length?

In order to get a good description for your hero, you will need to provide me with:
1. Hero Class
2. Hero's Model
3. Hero's Abilities (Chain Lightning, Storm Bolt, Purge, Thunder Nova*)
*When posting custom abilities - write what they do.
4. Description Length (Long or Short)
5. Description Style (Warcraft 3 Style, Street Language, Funny Description, ...)

Ability Description/ Ability Name

In order to get a description for your ability, you will need to provide me following info:
1. What it does (Example: Summons 3 elementals, fire earth and ice. Each has ability: Fire reduces armor, earth does splash and ice slows. They last for 30 seconds.)
2. Length (Short or Long)
3. Usage of less known words (Such as Repercussion, Punitive, Atonement, Altruism, ... TRUE or FALSE)

Example of request:
Please, write me an ability description that does the following: The archer channels a spell upon single target. Every 0.5 seconds, she shots an arrow at target, dealing damage. Lasts as long as it is channeled, or until target gets away from her for 700 range. Can channel for up to 2/3/4/5 seconds.

In order to get a name for your ability, you will need to provide me following info:
1. What it does (Example: Summons 3 elementals, fire earth and ice. Each has ability: Fire reduces armor, earth does splash and ice slows. They last for 30 seconds.)
2. Elemental (Fire, Ice, Thunder, Poison, Nature, Universal, Frost-Fire, None, ...)
3. Length (Short or Long)
4. Usage of less known words (Such as Repercussion, Punitive, Atonement, Altruism, ... TRUE or FALSE)

Example of request:
I need an ability name that does following: It's similar to fan of knives, but it poisons enemies it affects. It slows and deals damage. It's neutral/poison elemental. Short and no usage of less known words.

Quest Description / Quest Names

In order to get your description, you will need to provide me following info:
1. Main Goals (Example: Find and kill 10 banshees, and 10 skeletons. After it, go to ____ and finish quest.)
2. Style of Writing (Warcraft Language, Street Language, Funny,...)
3. Usage of less known words (Such as Repercussion, Punitive, Atonement, Altruism, ... TRUE or FALSE)

Example of request:
Quest description is needed. You have to find a mystery box and ask Jaina to open it. Afterwards, you get some items from it. I wan't the Street Language and no usage of less known words.

In order to get a name for your ability, you will need to provide me only:
1. Quest (Tell me of your quest and goals of it.)

Example of request:
You have to find a mystery box and ask Jaina to open it. Afterwards, you get some items from it. Later, you will have to return them back to box and leave it where it was, it was a gift to Gods. Can you description?

Item Description / Item Names

In order to get a Lorelei description for items, you will need to provide me following info:
1. Increases/Decreases (Enlist what does the item, what it adds, which stats and how much)
2. Icon used for item (Link an image or tell the path of image (Example: BTNWindWalk))
3. Upgradeable? (TRUE or FALSE)

Example of request:
I need an item description. It adds 10 agility, 10 intelligence and 25 strength. Can cast Cyclone for 3 seconds upon any organic target.

In order to get a name for item, you will need to provide only:
1. Description - If possible
2. Icon used for item (Link an image or tell the path of image (Example: BTNWindWalk))

Example of request:
Requesting an item name. It doesn't has a description, but it uses the icon of ,,Talisman of Evasion". It should has a normal name, like casual jewelry.

Help me: Tell me what more requirements would you like to add!

 

[Lich Prince]

Woa! Very nice, seems you spent alot of time writing that to sound perfect as your descriptions. I'll give it a try. How about a sexeh Jaina-only archmage description?

1. Archmage
2. Jaina
3. Blizzard, Summon Water Elemental, Brilliance Aura, Mass Teleport.
4. Medium Rare
5. Abit loreful.

 

[dead-man-walking]

What about this one:
,,I'd kill for some styling gel"

You stole it from Bookworm Adventures ):

 

[-SoulBurn]

That might be hard ;p and i can fill you if the hero name fields with enough information, so i'm giving you the hero description fields too.

That's a hero name request.
Hero Class - Infector (this will not be the official class name, but might give you the idea)
Gender - who knows? it's a creature ;x
Hero's Model - don't fund one yet
Name Length - preferencially short, but can be long
Hero's Abilities - Stomach Worm (a bad buff that deals dmg over time 'till killing) - Bug ( summons a bug that can bite you and give you another bad buff) - Super Worm (same as stomach worm, but more powerfull and when the infected unit dies, it will explode and worms will fly in every nearby unit infecting them too)

Notes:
-Most of the names are pretty bad, i'm planning to change them ;p
-This hero is far from finished, it will have like 7 abilities. It will be some sort of disgusting creature that will spawn wurms and parasites and will spread diseases etc

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Lich Prince:
This female Magi was sent by the Magocrats of Dalaran to watch over the volatile Arthas' forces while she was still young. She uses her arcane powers to help her allies and friendly forces whenever Humanity is imperiled. Although her powers are not often used directly in combat, this experienced sorceress is a heartening sight upon any battlefield. Weaving her intricate enchantments, this elegant young lady is calling upon shards of ice from the air to crush her enemies, or summons a helpful elemental made of crystalline water to defend herself and her allies. With all the magical powers at her disposal, she is able to aid and crush with a wide array of specialized conjurings and magical effects.

-SoulBurn:
A creepy thing that terrifies both allies and enemies is nothing less than a wicked parasite addict, as his powers crush right through enemy's armor. Worshipers of this being call him the Infecter, as his mastery is of summoning pestilential bugs and worms to warp into the stomach of those who dare to defy his will. Still, this rotting corpse was once a Zombie that has made the final transition into true 'undeath'. Though the Infecter has been known to revel in the gore of single combat, he generally prefers to manipulate and beguile his enemies from the shadows.

dead-man-walking:
Yes, it is from BKA. Still, I found it fitting.

 

[LunarLite]

-subscribing-
will stop by later, for i need help with fitting descriptions.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

UPDATE: Now, there are Ability Description / Ability Name descriptions!
UPDATE II: Added Quest Description / Quest Name descriptions!

 

[Na_Dann_Ma_GoGo]

So do you do item descriptions as well? Best with some simple background lore

 

[Lich Prince]

I bet he will.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Bump

 

[dead-man-walking]

Heh. Maybe I can help you if you get overwhelming queue of requests.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Heh. Maybe I can help you if you get overwhelming queue of requests.

Unfortunately, I see none of requests at the moment -.-'

 

[LunarLite]

just wait a bit AL, when i get home (in aprox 3 days)

i'll have loads of requests for you ^^

 

[MikeyDN]

I will also have alot of ´quest´ requests in maybe a week or two.

 

[Bloody_Turds]

any chance you can work directly from a map? i got quite a few heros/units/items that could use better descriptions, and maybe a couple name variations (optional)


ill give credit in the map for your work

heres an example using the mountain king: but please dont use my color scheme as its probably pretty bad

Mountain King

Tanky melee hero, with exceptional strength and defensive capabilitys.
Can Learn:
Storm Bold - Single target skill, with damage, stun, and short range
Thunder Clap - Instant Aoe, with damage, and slow
Bash - Chance on attack single target, with damage and stun
Avatar - Self target, bonus: Hp, dmg, armor, Spell imunity

Note, that i want the following information included, and not much about the history.
Its primary atribute
Its attack range
Its primary role
any bonus skills it has besides hero abilitys, should be mentioned in the paragraph part (Ie shadowmeld)
Its abilitys, and their descriptions

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

The Mountain Kings are tough little warriors that are capable of showing enormous defending and protective skills. Their race's preoccupation with mining precious minerals is a total reverse from their way of battle, as they prefer and use lightning powers to their aid.

Primary Attribute: Strength
Hero Type: Defensive Killer
Attack Range of 100


The Mountain King can learn:
Storm Bolt - Short ranged and single targeted agile spell that damages and stuns.
Thunder Clap - Instant cast of thunder wrath that damages and slows nearby enemies.
Bash - Some of his attacks will passively stun target and deal greater damage.
Avatar - A transformation to the greater form with increased damage, health and armor, followed by spell immunity for a duration.

Are they good? Tell me what you wish to change.

EDIT: Special Event! Check descriptions I've done for CeDiL at the following link:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/idea-factory-462/maiev-shadowsong-warden-172631/#post1643837

 

[Bloody_Turds]

prettymuch i want it almost exactly how i gave my example, with the exception of color coding, which should probably be that gold color that tooltips usually use for hotkeys. im going for really basic, yet informative hotkeys, because when you have 80+ heros, you dont really got time to read them all do ya?

i know im not leaving much to creativity, and it is alot of work.. but if you have nothing else to do, i would really apreciate the help

when it comes to the spells themselfs (not the brief hero descrip of them), i dont mind fairly imaginitive descriptions, aslong as it looks nice, and contains all the important values for that spell, since at that time uve already bought the hero.. and theres only 4 spells for you to read..

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

You want them to look like this?
__________________________________________________________________________
The Mountain Kings are tough little warriors that are capable of showing enormous defending and protective skills.
Can Learn:
Storm Bolt - Short ranged and single targeted agile spell that damages and stuns.
Thunder Clap - Instant cast of thunder wrath that damages and slows nearby enemies.
Bash - Some of his attacks will passively stun target and deal greater damage.
Avatar - A transformation to the greater form with increased damage, health and armor, followed by spell immunity for a duration.
__________________________________________________________________________

 

[Bloody_Turds]

no i want them to look exactly like this:

Mountain King

Tanky melee hero, with exceptional strength and defensive capabilitys.

Can Learn:
Storm Bold - Throws an electric hammer, stunning and damaging a single target.
Thunder Clap - Slams the ground, damaging and slowing nearby enemy's.
Bash - Gives a chance to stun, and damage an opponent on attack.
Avatar - Growing considerably for a duration, gaining armor, hit-points, damage, and spell immunity.

with the exception of using cffffcc00 color..., for the atribute, and skill names

@ your input "The Mountain Kings are tough little warriors that are capable of showing enormous defending and protective skills."

the name of the unit lets me know its a mountain king, i dont really want that.. its just extra reading and filler data.. along with tough little warriors, now i know its small!! and tough kinda hints twards strength.. but not plain enough

the only relevent bit of information from that entire bit is defending skills, and i am still left wondering:

what is his primary atribute (so i know which items are best to get him, before i get him)

what his attack range is.. this is a big deal, although because of the instant aoe slam most people would asume hees melee, but thats not always the case, and they shouldnt have to read that far for it..

im going for maximum functionality, with minimum filler while still looking nice aka
Short, sweet, and to the point

if you think you can match my description with lets say, arch mage, ill be willing to let you do the tooltips, if you are still willing ofc

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

When you want to look EXACTLY like that:

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Um... what should I do there, when that's exactly what you want?
I am a bit confused.

Also, you spelled a word wrongly.
capabilitys -> capabilities

 

[Lich Prince]

Apheraz bro, he wants simple descriptions. Just write a fitting sentence, mention the hero's main attribute, and color the attributes'/abilities' texts.

 

[Bloody_Turds]

i want you to do what i did, except spell the words right XD, and for a large quantity of abilitys, as i said that was a sample.., i have a map with 80+ heros that need that done...

Here is the latest version of my map.. if itl help you decide on taking the request
Please dont host this version public however, because it isnt ready for gameplay (i dont mind if you share it though)..., you can goahead and work from this version, and once you get all the heros done, ill transfer their tooltips on over, and if your still up for it we can do item and ability descriptions

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Okay. I am asking for your permission to free edit all heroes' descriptions and spell descriptions at the same time. And one question, should I work within the map or somewhere else?

 

[Bloody_Turds]

permission granted.. lol i wouldnt have posted the map otherwise, however i would greatly prefer that you followed the guidlines i posted like in the example for mountain king.

goahead and work in a text document, as im going to be transfering the descrips over manually to my current version, so i can work on it while u work.. a text doc will save so much time

 

[InfinateAnswers]

Quest.
1. Panda Brewmaster forgot to restock the bar owners stock and hes in trouble.
2. You have to collect boar tusks, eyes, and liver for the ingredients.
3. The Panda is a Free Loader and Lazy.
4. Quest name is Restocking but i cant think of a good dialog for the panda. (Dialog as in what he says to you) His friend a hunter tells you that the panda needs help, the hunter is a sterotypical aussie (Crickey, Blimey, and sterotype phrases for australians)

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

In order to get your description, you will need to provide me following info:
1. Main Goals (Example: Find and kill 10 banshees, and 10 skeletons. After it, go to ____ and finish quest.)
2. Style of Writing (Warcraft Language, Street Language, Funny,...)
3. Usage of less known words (Such as Repercussion, Punitive, Atonement, Altruism, ... TRUE or FALSE)

Where is the 2 and 3?

 

[InfinateAnswers]

Hes lazy so his speech will be slandered like n' for and. But he wouldnt know many big words.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Variation 1: ,,Stupid" Panda
I wish I no lazy. Bad wish. Small boss of his bar yell me for nothing. Me forgot to bring him boar tusks, eyes and livers. Sou... You looks an adventurer. Go catch me some those. I will nap till you get that. Here. zZzZzZzZ...

Is it good or to quickly rewrite another one?

 

[InfinateAnswers]

haha i like it. But start out with like i made a bad mistake and im in big trouble. And then he notices you (cus he was talking to himself) and he asks for help and tell you what to do. And the quest starts with his friend telling you to help the panda.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Please help my miserable friend, he's around here somewhere, he never gets *that* far away, no, his wisdom is... very limited. I've heard that he would get a dump from his job with another mistake, please help him to not fail. Thank you, you will be rewarded!

I make stupid error, Boss make big noisy. I still hear my ears if I have do that. I wish I no lazy. Bad wish. Small boss of his bar yell me for nothing. Me forgot to bring him boar tusks, eyes and livers.
Hey... You looks an adventurer. Go catch me some those. I will nap till you get that, rite here. zZzZzZzZ...

Later:
You save my paw. I likes my paw, an me gives you sumthing shiny...

 

[D3athM3at]

I need like 27 heroes description will you be willing to make all of them? because i think this would take much time.. but i have some of my ideas and i could help you with some descriptions

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

I can make all of them, if they fit my style of writting, which is quite large and adaptable. So, tell me a preset of 1 description, information of others, and just wait some time to make them. But please, preset isw a must, to know how to write them.

 

[D3athM3at]

what do you mean in your first post with "1. Hero Class " in Hero description box?

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Hero Class: examples*
*Drow Ranger, Slayer, Paladin, Archmage, Crypt Lord, Psy Warrior, Skirmisher, Elementalist, ...

 

[SoD.GoDLike]

Hmm

A creepy thing that terrifies both allies and enemies is nothing less than a wicked parasite addict.

It just doesnt sound good in my ears, sry

 

[D3athM3at]

Here all heroes with all requested information:

All Agility heroes

Name: Archer. Proper name: Felore
Hero Class: ranged damage
Hero Model: Archer
Hero Abillities: Thunder Arrow (deals damage after 3 seconds and slows movement speed), Rapid Fire (passive attack speed), Cold Arrows, Marksmanship Training(increase base range and gives dodge), Trueshot aura.

Name: Demon Hunter. Proper name: Shadowfury
Hero Class: melee damge/ stealth
Hero Model: Illidan (without wings)
Hero Abillities: Wind Walk, Poisoned Blade(slows attacked units movement speed and has chance deal bonus damage), Mana Burn, Assassin training (crit/dodge), Instant Poison(shadow strike customized)

Name: Night Elf Runner. Proper name: Maiev
Hero Class: melee damge/ stealth
Hero Model: Night Elf Runner
Hero Abillities: Shadow Step (blinks behind enemy target deals damage), Dash(Increases movement speed but takes more damage), Backstab(deals additional damage when attacking from behind), Hide(customized Wind walk), Evasion.

Name: Warden. Proper Name: Nalmeena
Hero Class: melee damge
Hero Model: Warden
Hero Abillities: Flash Bomb(reduces target chance to hit), Shuriken(damage long casting range), Fan of Knives, Shadow Strike(Critical strike), Blink.

Name: Blademaster. Proper Name: Moogu'thy
Hero Class: melee damge
Hero Model: Blademaster
Hero Abillities: Evasion, critical strike, Berserker, Bladestorm, Burst of wind(increases movement speed of all units around him when used).

Name: Sea Witch. Proper Name: Lady Serpentra
Hero Class: ranged damage
Hero Model: Naga Sea Witch
Hero Abillities: Frozen Lightning(customized forked lightning), Aura of the Sea(increases movement speed/hp regeneration rate and gives chance to restore health), Frost Arrow(slows enemy target movement speed(not auto cast)), Brain Freeze(Silence one target), Witchcraft(increases attack speed and improves all other abillities giving them additional effect)

Name: Wolf. Proper name: Jag
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Dire Wolf
Hero Abillities: Howl (reduce enemy units attack damage), Critical Strike, Bite(chance on hit to reduce enemy movement speed), Spirit form(metamorphosis turns into spirit wolf(Feral spirit model of far seer skill)), Leader of the Path(Improves all other abilities and gives bonus movement speed)
Extra: description should be something like once wolf had his path but humans killed all his friend wolf and he seeks revenge etc..

Name: Shaman, Proper Name: Wolfsong
Hero Class: melee damage/supporn
Hero Model: Shaman
Hero Abillities: Lightning Claw(when used attacks will deal bonus damage), Flaming Claws(every x attacks increase attack speed), Call totem(calls totems around shaman with different abilities (seeing invisible, armor aura, attackspeed/movementspeed aura, healing/mana restore aura)), Chain lightning, Bloodlust.

All Strength heroes

Name: Mountain King. Proper name: Aggronor Thunderhammer
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Mountain King
Hero Abillities: Storm Bolt, Thunder clap, Bash, Avatar aura(damage aura and gives chance to increase all attributes for short duration), Thunder Spirit(increase attackspeed/movementspeed gives chance to greathly increase attspeed).

Name: Tauren. Proper name: Bor
Hero Class: melee damage/caster
Hero Model: Tauren
Hero Abillities: Enchant Weapon(passive attack speed), Earthquake(remade thunder clap and have chance to stun), Ancient Shockwave(creates 2 spirit taurens behind caster and all 3(tauren and 2 spirit taurens) casts shockwave dealing damage), Ground Slam(remade thunderbolt with shockwave missile), Pulverize.

Name: Fel Orc Rider. Proper name: Tau'rok
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Fel orc rider
Hero Abillities: Unholy Aura, Cleaving Attack, Battle Cry(Battle Roar), Sharpened Weapon(reduce armor on hit), Ensnare.

Name: Death Knight. Proper Name: Lord Soulrender
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Undead Arthas no horse (same as arhtas with frostmourne)
Hero Abillities: Death Coil(Deals damage to enemy and heals self), Blood aura(chance to restore percentage health on hit), Soul Torture(Silence and movement speed slow), Aura of Blight(-armor and -damage aura), Frost Armor(Armor aura)

Name: Captain Proper Name: Eldin
Hero Class: melee damage/defensive
Hero Model: Captain, Swordsman
Hero Abillities: Harmstring(slows target movementspeed/deals damage), Shield Slam(damage stun), Revenge(have chance to deal damage to attacker(works only if attacked from melee range)), Commanding(increase strenght), Leadership(damage, movement speed, armor, attackspeed aura)
Extra: description should be something like.. noble knight who is leader of all human soldiers who protect human kingdom etc...

Name: Dreadlord Proper name: Mullioch
Hero Class: melee damage/caster
Hero Model: Dreadlord
Hero Abillities: Darkness Aura(attack/movement speed increase), Rain of fire(same as default but not channeling), Vampiric Aura, Sleep, Charrion Swarm
Extra: One of few vampires still alive and something about he hunts at night or whatever..

Name: Beastmaster Proper name: Gaz
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Beastmaster
Hero Abillities: Breath of fire, Hack(low range stun/damage), Combat Mastery(crit/dodge), Wild Aura(movement/attack speed aura), Deep Wounds (chance on attack to reduce targets movement speed and deal damage overtime)

Name: Infernal. Proper name: Flamehallow
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Inferno
Hero Abillities: Breath of fire, Flame Aura(-armor aura), Molten fists(Bash), Inferno stone(when used infernal burns to death and respawns to targeted location where infernal stone drops this heals 20% of his maximum hp), Release Flame(remade fan of knives)
Extra:One of few demonic beasts left from second war with scourge ... he stayed alive using his brute force and his demonic flame etc..

Name: Mountain Giant. Proper name: Gar
Hero Class: melee damage
Hero Model: Mountain Giant
Hero Abillities: Hardened Skin(increases armor), Jump(jumps to targeted location dealing damage and stuning everyone there), Hurl Bolder(stun/damage), Stone fists(low chance but high damage critical strike), Rage(when used increases damage done by percentage of his life but loses 1% of max life every second)

All Intelligence heroes

Name: Keeper of the Grove. Proper name: Ceredwyn
Hero Class: ranged caster
Hero Model: Druid of Talor
Hero Abillities: Nature Wrath(one target damage), Blessing of Nature(healing over time), Freedom of nature(aoe damage, aoe heal), Aura of the Nature Wrath(Thorns aura), Entangling roots.
Extra: some say hes one with the nature etc.. he controls nature force to protect from its enemies etc..

Name: Spell Breaker. Proper name: Tenris Mirblood
Hero Class: melee defensive/offensive
Hero Model: Spell Breaker
Hero Abillities: Silence, anti-magic shell, Feedback, Magic Glaive(ensnare also burns targets mana), Exploit mana(Deals damage depening on targets lost mana)
Extra: master of mana or smt..

Name: Archmage Proper Name: Aran
Hero Class: ranged Caster/support
Hero Model: Archmage
Hero Abillities: Blizzard, Fire Bolt, Freeze(pushes enemy unit and then freeze it), Water elemental wall(creates water elementals acting as wall infront of caster), Meditation Aura(aura which gives chance to restore mana on spell cast)
Extra: one of head mages from human clan etc..

Name: Priestess. Proper name: Kera Lightbinder
Hero Class: ranged defensive/healer
Hero Model: Sorceress
Hero Abillities: Holy Light, Inner fire, Brilliance Aura, Blessing of Salvation(Divine shield), Holy Wrath(damage)
Extra: Bringer of ligth some say she is apprentice of god etc..

Name: Blood Mage. Proper name: Kelen the Destroyer
Hero Class: ranged caster
Hero Model: Blood Mage
Hero Abillities: Phoenix Strike(stun/damage), Ring of fire(aoe damage/pushback), Soul Burn, Flame Nova(same as Frost nova just does not slow), Phoenix Spirit(Reincarnation gives additiona effect to other abilities).
Extra: some say he once was phoenix and now have its powers etc..

Name: Spirit Breaker. Proper name: Aki
Hero Class: ranged caster
Hero Model: Spirit Walker
Hero Abillities: Astral Spirit(deals damage depending on casters mana to enemy or heals friendly unit), Spiritual Grave(Reincarnation, Armor aura, Increase base mana and mana regeneration), Soul rip(hex but turns target into wisp), Mist Aura(-attck/-movment speed aura to enemy attack/movement speed aura to friendly), Spirit Bolt(stun/damage)

Name: Lich. Proper name: Ras Frostwhisper
Hero Class: ranged caster/damage
Hero Model: Lich
Hero Abillities: Frost Blast(stun/damage), Frost nova, Frost armor, Flame inside(bash/ passive attack speed increase), Frozen Power(Chance on hit to release cone of cold, allows to see invisible units)

Name: Necromance. Proper name: Soulslayer
Hero Class: ranged caster
Hero Model: Kel'Thuzad (Ghost)
Hero Abillities: Howl of Terror, Book of Souls(fan of knives different missile), Death Bolt(slow missile speed, high damage long stun duration), Hate Ward(Summons ward that greatly slows all nearby enemy units movement/attack speed), Siphon Soul(drains mana from target if target have less mana then draining amount then deals damage).

Name: Far Seer. Proper name: Thrall
Hero Class: ranged caster
Hero Model: Thrall
Hero Abillities: Forken Lightning, Chain Lightning, Healing Wave, Thunder(deals damage in targeted area slows movement/ attack speed and silences everyone in area), Purge

Name: Ancien of Elements. Proper name: Larodar
Hero Class: melee caster
Hero Model: Ancient of Lore
Hero Abillities: Fire Mastery(creates ring of flames which traps all units withing area), Water Mastery(heals all friendly units and deals damage to all enemy units within area), Earth Mastery(deals damage and stuns all units within targeted area), Air mastery(creates tornados and thunders within targeted area dealing damage), Mind mastery(Increases base mana and mana regenaration)

If you think i missed something or you dont understand what i meant just tell me. If you dont want to use that extra part which i wrote then its ok do it your way.

You chose length whats better for you. And try make all heroes description style more like Warcraft 3.

 

[Bloody_Turds]

just wondering how the progress is goin, ive got plenty of time

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Okay, here is the preview of the Archer, Felore. Just to tell me do you like that way of writting or not.

In hidden shelters of Ashenvale's forests, a pair of fearsome eyes gaze upon anyone who dares to ruin the sanctity of the Ancients. With her charged bow, Felore's speed is very durable, almost unmatchable in combat. Archer's rapid thunderous and cold skills are capable of outmaneuvring even the quickest of foes, and her dexterity blasts upon enemies and their ranks. Considered as the fastest archer in Kalimdor, she leaves falling corpses and blood in the air, as she places another shot on her bow.

I would like to ask you where you found one name: Nalmeena

 

[InfinateAnswers]

I need a discription of 3 heros i have. I have a already written one and base yours off of it.

Juggernaut

Name: Hero of shield; Proper name: Juggernaut
Class: Tank, High damage low AS, Melee
Abilities(There are much more but these r the first few): Blacksmithing: Increases armor by 10 every level. Holy Shield: Near invincible, magic immune, increased HP. Armor Curse: Lowers a units armor.
Current Description: Juggernaut, the Hero of Shield, came from the land of snow, he is a strong man who creates his own armor. His blacksmithing gives him the power to fortify his armor with the magic training he has.

I am just going to post this and get the rest later since im short on time.

 

[D3athM3at]

Thanks for the archer description and about that name "Nalmeena" i dont know i just make hero names randomly if it sounds good enough I name it that way.. if you dont like this name you can offer me other name i can change it.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

D3athM3at, well, there is a video on youtube with my map, containing hero spells. There is the Naga Slayer called Nalmeena, so I just thought... nevermind ^^
So the Archer is good?
Also... I noticed that the Spell Breaker is exactly like mine :S

InfinateAnswers, how u espect to make you descriptions when I have no info?

 

[D3athM3at]

Lol spell breaker was my first hero on my map and i changed it alot since i created it and it still needs some hes one of the weakest heroes. And about archer its kinda random at some parts but works for me.. I like your style.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

she leaves falling corpses and blood in the air, as she places another shot on her bow.
This is my favorite part ^^

Shadowfury is a dark, shadowy warrior which is shunned by the greater Night Elf society. He made a pact, long ago, to fight against the forces of chaos using his own terrible powers against it. Shadowfury blinded himself so that he develops 'spectral sight' that enables him to see demons and undead with greater clarity. Althrough he is one of the most powerful warriors in the Ashenvale, the Demon Hunter is always maligned and misunderstood for making his selfless pact with darkness.

 

[InfinateAnswers]

InfinateAnswers, how u espect to make you descriptions when I have no info?

Oh idk mayb hit the "Reveal" button with the info on my hero, but thats what id do idk you may have a better approach

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

I need a discription of 3 heros i have.

Um... I don't see those requests :?

 

[InfinateAnswers]

I need a discription of 3 heros i have. I have a already written one and base yours off of it.

Juggernaut

Name: Hero of shield; Proper name: Juggernaut
Class: Tank, High damage low AS, Melee
Abilities(There are much more but these r the first few): Blacksmithing: Increases armor by 10 every level. Holy Shield: Near invincible, magic immune, increased HP. Armor Curse: Lowers a units armor.
Current Description: Juggernaut, the Hero of Shield, came from the land of snow, he is a strong man who creates his own armor. His blacksmithing gives him the power to fortify his armor with the magic training he has.

I am just going to post this and get the rest later since im short on time.

........ its right there..

 

[D3athM3at]

"Shadowfury blinded himself so that he develops 'spectral sight' that enables him to see demons and undead with greater clarity." lol
still this is much better then my poor english..

BTW when will you put more descriptions ?

 

[InfinateAnswers]

Aki the Spirit Breaker
In his ancestral ruins, Aki, the last of his kind, swears to avenge his brethren at all costs. In his years of training he has learned how to sense spiritual energy surrounding all life. He manipulates this energy to kill whoever stands in his way. His fallen brethren protect him with their energy, so he may complete his mission.

I gave it a try =) i read lucents descriptions and i think this is good. I like it =)

 

[D3athM3at]

well this description sounds so anime style to me ..

 

[InfinateAnswers]

well this description sounds so anime style to me ..

Its a spirit breaker they deal with spiritual things, And i like anime >.>