Hellfire

[Moderator]

I'm setting the spell to permanently rejected since it is so simple.
The triggering isn't very good and it spams effects.
Practise spellmaking

 

[Lambdadelta]

Did you like... use a camera to take a screenshot? LOL

 

[mckill2009]

post triggers

 

[Orcnet]

uhm, better screenshot?

 

[zv27]

Post triggers man !!!

 

[Maker]

Trig

• Frost And Flame Breath
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Hellfire
  • Actions
    • Set Caster = (Position of (Triggering unit))
    • Set Dummy = (Target point of ability being cast)
    • Unit - Make (Triggering unit) face Dummy over 0.01 seconds
    • Set FacingPoint = (Facing of (Triggering unit))
    • Unit - Pause (Triggering unit)
    • Unit - Make (Triggering unit) Invulnerable
    • Wait 0.01 seconds
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 10, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Wait 0.01 game-time seconds
        • Set Assault_Strike = (Dummy offset by (100.00 x (Real((Integer A)))) towards FacingPoint degrees)
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect at Assault_Strike using Abilities\Spells\Human\FlameStrike\FlameStrike1.mdl
        • Unit - Create 1 Assault Strike Flame for (Owner of (Triggering unit)) at Assault_Strike facing Default building facing degrees
        • Unit - Add a 1.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Last created unit)
        • Unit - Add Hellfire to (Last created unit)
        • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Human Blood Mage - Flame Strike Assault_Strike
        • Unit - Cause (Last created unit) to damage circular area after 0.00 seconds of radius 700.00 at (Target point of ability being cast), dealing 1000000000.00 damage of attack type Spells and damage type Normal
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_Assault_Strike)
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_Caster)
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_Dummy)
    • Unit - Unpause (Triggering unit)
    • Unit - Make (Triggering unit) Vulnerable

Caster paused, why?
Caster invul, why?
Leaks: damage...at (Target point of ability being cast)
Damages allies, but that can be excused I guess.
The damage is too much.
Not MUI due to using wait.
Too much Flame Strike spamming.
Quite simple spell.

It's not that bad, but the idea and execution could be better

 

[zv27]

Trig

• Frost And Flame Breath
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Hellfire
  • Actions
    • Set Caster = (Position of (Triggering unit))
    • Set Dummy = (Target point of ability being cast)
    • Unit - Make (Triggering unit) face Dummy over 0.01 seconds
    • Set FacingPoint = (Facing of (Triggering unit))
    • Unit - Pause (Triggering unit)
    • Unit - Make (Triggering unit) Invulnerable
    • Wait 0.01 seconds
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 10, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Wait 0.01 game-time seconds
        • Set Assault_Strike = (Dummy offset by (100.00 x (Real((Integer A)))) towards FacingPoint degrees)
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect at Assault_Strike using Abilities\Spells\Human\FlameStrike\FlameStrike1.mdl
        • Unit - Create 1 Assault Strike Flame for (Owner of (Triggering unit)) at Assault_Strike facing Default building facing degrees
        • Unit - Add a 1.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Last created unit)
        • Unit - Add Hellfire to (Last created unit)
        • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Human Blood Mage - Flame Strike Assault_Strike
        • Unit - Cause (Last created unit) to damage circular area after 0.00 seconds of radius 700.00 at (Target point of ability being cast), dealing 1000000000.00 damage of attack type Spells and damage type Normal
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_Assault_Strike)
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_Caster)
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_Dummy)
    • Unit - Unpause (Triggering unit)
    • Unit - Make (Triggering unit) Vulnerable

Caster paused, why?
Caster invul, why?
Leaks: damage...at (Target point of ability being cast)
Damages allies, but that can be excused I guess.
The damage is too much.
Not MUI due to using wait.
Too much Flame Strike spamming.
Quite simple spell.

It's not that bad, but the idea and execution could be better

IRON MAIDENNNNNNN !!!!!!!!!!! Forever

 

[Magtheridon96]

lol the dummies have HP bars
2/5 for now. If u fix up all the bugs, i might give u a 4/5 or maybe a 5/5 if u somehow manage to surprise me. Work on it

 

[88WaRCraFT3]

I have seen this on Youtube ! :/

 

[adishaireen]

you know...i....i don't know very much how to make spells...but...i started with simple spell....sorry for the leaks....

and the trigger name......i suppose to make frost and flame breath...like jakiro do.....but i changed my idea to make hellfire....

and how to capture screenshots without camera????hypercam???no...i didn't have that thing....

 

[Nillere]

you know...i....i don't know very much how to make spells...but...i started with simple spell....sorry for the leaks....

and the trigger name......i suppose to make frost and flame breath...like jakiro do.....but i changed my idea to make hellfire....

and how to capture screenshots without camera????hypercam???no...i didn't have that thing....

Well, don't excuse for the leaks, everybody makes mistakes now and then

And to take a screenshot, there's a button named Print Screen, should be named "PrtSc" on a keyboard, or atleast it is on my keyboard

But the spell is actually nice, if you just gave the dummy the "Locust" ability, and cleaned up the leaks etc., it would probably end up rather good

 

[Magtheridon96]

ur new at spell-making, and this spell that you made, well... it's not bad for a beginner! Imma give u some rep to encourage to continue with more creative ideas. Just give the dummy the "Locust" ability in the object editor, and remove the waits. Instead of waits, use loops to time the spell correctly.
Use a loop that executes every 0.05 or 0.02 seconds (Anything in that range)
Also, create a variable for the caster:
Set Hellfire_Caster = (Triggering Unit)
Using natives a lot repeatedly can cause alot of leaks. Try to use variables instead.
Good luck.

 

[NinjaofWind]

Hmm. Okay your a beginner? well... This isnt quite bad for a beginner i mean like when i first started making spells i really sucked bad at doing triggers. But since you are a beginner i think i like it just because your beginner and you know how to do nice spells. Keep on working the more practice the better (3/5/+rep)
VOTE FOR APPROVAL

 

[Enelance]

and how to capture screenshots without camera????hypercam???no...i didn't have that thing....

omfg. Take screenshots is definitely impossible without hypercam. Draw your screenshots with a pencil and send us as a paper airplane

 

[Orcnet]

omfg. Take screenshots is definitely impossible without hypercam. Draw your screenshots with a pencil and send us as a paper airplane

LOL! funny comment

@adishaireen

hey I can help you with your problem in taking screenshots and how to reveal them in warcraft III.

yes like what Nillere said earlier, to take the screenshot press the "PrtSc" (Print Screen) button on top of your keyboard, then to reveal the screenshot of your picture you should go download Irfanview, here is the link for faster viewing:
http://www.irfanview.com/main_download_engl.htm
you definitely need this since this program can reveal warcraft3 screenshots and for you not to use your camera for the picture, LOL!

 

[Magtheridon96]

if u have a mac, u most probably won't have a PrtScreen Button like me lol
Instead, u have to press Command-Shift-3 (for full screen shot)
or Command-Shift-4 (For cropped screen shot)

 

[GIANT_CRAB]

omfg. Take screenshots is definitely impossible without hypercam. Draw your screenshots with a pencil and send us as a paper airplane

An attempt to troll?
Spammy comment?
Nonconstructive comment?

Reported.

Instead of giving such useless comments, you should have taught him how to improve the spell.

 

[Skycraft]

When your getting a picture, hit Print Screen, open up paint, paste it, save it, and there's your screenshot.

Also, post the trigger in hidden tags when you upload your spell.
It could help

 

[Ganondorf]

omfg. Take screenshots is definitely impossible without hypercam. Draw your screenshots with a pencil and send us as a paper airplane

You know that's not helping... like at all.

@creator of spell: Print screen button located next to the scroll lock and to the F12 button. Then paste it into paint, and save it. Simple as that.

 

[adishaireen]

i have update my spell.

check it out.

 

[Marsal]

What is that?

• Animation - Change (Triggering unit)'s animation speed to 1.00% of its original speed
• Animation - Change (Triggering unit)'s animation speed to 100.00% of its original speed

Since this is just a simple trigger with no timers or others this has absolutely no effect.
Also you only destroy the last special effect of the loop. Insert the destroy after the creation or just simple add the ability a target point effect.
Also

• Set FacingPoint = (Facing angle from Caster to Dummy)

Too simple to be approved.

 

[Magtheridon96]

Your spell is still too simple to be approved as Marsal2000 said.

I think you should refer to some other GUI spells to see how good
triggering is done.

I'm encouraging you to progress and develop some good triggering
skills, so please don't give up.

The trick: LOOPS

You should create a trigger that runs every 0.30 seconds instead of
using that loop.

Also, you should make your spells MUI by adding an indexing system.
(Refer to some spells here on the hive to see how it's done. - The
indexing systems are usually in the beginning of the cast trigger and
all over the loop)

I hope you find the time to fix your spell, cuz it has a lot of potential.

For now, since it's leakless and probably MUI , all i can say is Good Job

 

[Adiktuz]

Fix your other spells up to approvable state (at least based on comments) first before uploading a new one...

This...

 

[adishaireen]

why, adiktuz???

 

[Adiktuz]

because its better if you learn to fix first the problems on your previous resources so that you won't do them again, minimizing the resources that you might need to be fixing during a certain time (its definitely easier to focus on fixing/updating one resource at a time than doing a lot)...


and it also reduces the amount of spell resources that needs fix...

 

[adishaireen]

owh....focus to a one resource....

 

[Deuterium]

you could check some of the tutorials in my signature to improve your coding

 

[adishaireen]

you could check some of the tutorials in my signature to improve your coding

thanks...