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Haiku Poems In Da Hause!

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Ralle

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OK I would like to see how good you are at making poems. The form is called 5,7,5 syllable (heiku). So first a sentence with 5 syllables and then 7 and then 5.

I start:
The Taurens stomps
Mashed bodies on ground
The Horde Power!

Not that good, try it for yourself!

(this is not a haiku)
 
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This is really lame
John Doughtree says its so lame
As does Asasin eight fifty




asasin is only 1 sylabble cas i made it up and its not a real word so :D

(this is not a haiku and that word has three distinctive syllabyles. Your last stanza has eight syllabyles.)
 
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Marine walks through trees
Lictor awaits in darkness
suddenly he's dead
 
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First of all sillies
It is really spelled 'haiku'
If one is proper

The second thing dudes
Is how simple they can be
If they have no point

Now try if you wish
To try rhyming with a fish
Or even a dish
 
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"The second thing," dude?
Can't you count the syllables?
Malufa's lost it.

(Yeah, I forgot to write dudes, thank you for pointing that out to me.)
 
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Guys, seriously, please write haikus properly. Rasmus told you how to in his first post and I have pointed it out many times since then, so I know the knowledge is out there. Haikus are a very serious form of art and I am starting to get pissed off at the lack of respect for them.
 
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Please stop posting crap
I don't want to see more junk
Those are not Haiku
 
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