[GUI]Small Ice Spellpack v1.1[MUI] - Requested

[Moderator]

12:14, 14th Jun 2010
Hanky:
Looks fine enough for an approval. I just found three points which could be improved. First of you could fix the green buff icon of the frozen shield spell and you could also improve the index system of your spells. Last but no least you have to fix the tooltip of the frozen shield spell. There's one dot to much.

But well your spells will be still useful for some people. So I'll approve your two spells.

 

[Septimus]

Frozen Shield doesn't seems to work at level 1.

I activate it at level 1 and nothing happen at all, the creep doesn't have any life deduction.

I also suggest you to increase the aoe of Frozen Shield, right now it only work against melee unit (It only effect range unit if you go close to it).

There is also a pretty good documentation and the script seems to be clean.

This is a example of a good submission. However, the icon definitely have to be remove; whether it was request spell or not.

Rules submission clearly explain it.

No custom icons are allowed in the map (that is not the purpose of the map!).

I recommend you to put a direct link to the custom icon that you think it was suitable for this spells in your documentation or at your spells description at this site.

Keep up the good work.

 

[baassee]

Well sept, it doesnt seem to work at level 1 cause it does 0.3x intelligence so maybe that's the problem.

Alright I'll increase aoe and damage a bit, maybe adding like a value + 0.yx intelligence

Icon will be removed for next version, still can't find a fitting icon :/

thanks for comment

 

[Septimus]

You are welcome.

Extremely low intelligence make it deal 0 damage, so it was recommend that you set it to deal min 1 damage if the int is below the damage point.

 

[Kingz]

Just make it deal:
*value* + *inteligence factor* damage.
That way there is a minimal damage factor

 

[baassee]

Just make it deal:
*value* + *inteligence factor* damage.
That way there is a minimal damage factor

Fixed

Updated!

 

[Kingz]

Hmm, i only didn't like the Frozen Shield, i don't know the effects are simply lacking, to the point that i barely see the eyecandy and the fact that unit's that get damaged by it don't get any effect attached to them
Only my opinion but i would have implemented and circling effect for it...
Still this is a request so my opinion you shouldn't worry about

 

[baassee]

Hmm, i only didn't like the Frozen Shield, i don't know the effects are simply lacking, to the point that i barely see the eyecandy and the fact that unit's that get damaged by it don't get any effect attached to them

they have an effect attached on there overhead :O

well yeah, it's very similiar to immolation but the eyecandy shows up if you change the test hero model but maybe I should make a dummy with attach and inscrease size

 

[Rmx]

Really Basic and rather simple spells, still i like basic spells .

Try to do a Spellpack Baassee i like to see ur own work, also i won't
review it coz it was requested.

Keep it on coming

 

[breebree123]

well. .all the spells are a bit easy. .but still nice

 

[Deuterium]

the screenshot seems nice i'll check it later!

 

[Dark_Dragon]

nice job! and well i can like simple spells as well, as long as they are usefull, leakless and bugfree 4/5 from me quite good in my option and keep it up!

Greets!
~Dark Dragon

 

[baassee]

thank you all for your lovely comments, I appriciate it

Well rmx I'll try ^^

 

[thereallywhitekid]

I'll probably rate it a 4/5

 

[Malcous]

Cool spells

 

[Deuterium]

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1. The frozen shield would look much better if it was actually a shield and not an aura.


2. The Frozen Shield buff icon shows green... fix that.


3. When you cast Ice Lance, the "icebergs" don't disappear totally but their tips would still be noticed.



[+]

4. MUI


5. Leakless


6. Simple yet useful!



All in all, nice job!

 

[baassee]

Will fix and the ice bergs are a common problem, not by me, made by blizzard!

 

[Aspard]

Even you say so, there is no an attachment to the creeps during the Frozen Shield. Neither in script nor in object manager. Also I can see pixels when I use Frozen Shield, it's caused by summing the hero aura and this "glacial" aura taken from the Hive.

However, spells are done well as always, yet simple, I'd like your posion spellpack much more. 4/5

PS. Btw, why don't you check your PMs?

 

[Deuterium]

but i guess there's a way to fix the icebergs :S i was thinking of destroying the unit... but i noticed u did that...

 

[Kingz]

Nulling the special effect should remove it instantly and remove nothing

 

[baassee]

Nulling the special effect should remove it instantly and remove nothing

what a, you're sick!

The units are the ice-bergs ... maybe if I attach the ice on them instead of having 'em as model maybe work :S

 

[Kingz]

I thought you were talking about special effects
Try removing the units from the game not killing them?

 

[baassee]

Try removing the units from the game not killing them?

I'm avoiding any kind of wait system

Well I can make another trigger to make that still don't have time now. Working on a spellpack and a map

Maybe when I'm done with the pack I'll go

 

[Rmx]

WOW working on a spellpack ............ i'm waiting for it.... it looks promissing

 

[Mage_Goo]

Well, the ice berg problem maybe caused because you forgot to destroy the effect. I've use that effect in my spell, and it not show the problem.
Btw, this is a nice spell, the idea are pretty original, triggering is MUI, but maybe you should add more effect when damaged by Frozen Shield. Current is like no effect.

 

[baassee]

1. Well, the ice berg problem maybe caused because you forgot to destroy the effect. I've use that effect in my spell, and it not show the problem.

2. Btw, this is a nice spell, the idea are pretty original, triggering is MUI, but maybe you should add more effect when damaged by Frozen Shield. Current is like no effect.

1. There are no effect, it's the units current model.

2. Workin... not enough time

 

[calex3]

nice and simple....as it should be! maybe effects could be better....but that's only my opinion....good to see you back +rep

 

[baassee]

hahaha calex this is one of my very old spells that got deleted and asked DR if he could undelete it so he did

bla effects here effects there, no need oh wait yes for the shield need to be bigger but I'm to laze to fix it

haha thank you