Goddammit.

[~Void~]

Yeah this was a school paper, I was supposed to do a "reflection" at the end, but I couldn't be bothered to do a full one, so just pretend my half-assed attempt at reflection isn't there.

 

[NinjasDontFight]

Was I suppose to be annoyed by the guy your talking about or the the fact that I'm reading the fracking thing? xD

 

[DarkIron Dwarf]

Wow this guy does sound like a asshole.

 

[hawk_767]

haha, gotta say that's pretty goddamn entertaining. In a writers eyes, I can see a few grammatical mistakes, however those are hidden by the fact that you used so much voice. very impressive. If you are ever to write a book, I suggest one of those ones where you give your opinion on different topics in life. And stories about your life. I think that would be very entertaining.

 

[~Void~]

Thanks. I make some grammatical errors, but I'm only in high school, and not exactly very book smart

 

[hawk_767]

haha hey nothing wrong with being in high school. I'm only in 9th grade thank you very much.

 

[Dreadnought[dA]]

Well apart from the fact I'm slightly insulted by your use of the lords name (he's hurt more than I am ) it wasn't that bad.

 

[brad.dude03]

The use of the world 'goddamn' basically makes this story. I mean, it's not my style, I prefer satire, as in serious writing about a humerous subject, but hey, this works for you, run with it.

I enjoyed it.

 

[Mor)L(unE]

Makes me think of a punchline about D-rob about the haird thingy (if its not based on reality that is)

You know? that guy is supposed to be a gardener in his spare time, but he seemingly failed to see that the largest concentration of weed, in the entire city is growing on his goddam face!and im not reffering to the stuff that gets you high cause that would be rather awsome,


Pretty good reflection anyway.

 

[~Void~]

Dude, if I had weed growing on my face, that would be awesome. Not only would there be weed growing on my face, but in the event that my face caught fire, I wouldn't have to worry about anything because I would be high as a motherfucker.

 

[Traxamillion]

Dude, if I had weed growing on my face, that would be awesome. Not only would there be weed growing on my face, but in the event that my face caught fire, I wouldn't have to worry about anything because I would be high as a motherfucker.

ROFL, so true...

Not to mention you wouldnt be in pain from the fire.

 

[Mor)L(unE]

i was talking about regular weed, you know.. the stuff that your mother hates when it grow in your garden again, not the stuff you get high off

 

[Traxamillion]

oh, the weeds that "are not" fun. Gotcha.