Forest of Honour

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12:04, 27th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
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[-Kobas-]

Please fix next few things so I can approve your map:

• Item Drops (instead of 2 items for 1 unit, make 1 for 1)
• Trees should be placed next to each other (Remove empty space between them)
• Map borders are horrible, increase map size a little (Add shadows fog, whatever, look bad this way)

 

[Eldubs]

The terrain looks a little plain for me. Otherwise good concept. 3/5

 

[Marcin013]

Please fix next few things so I can approve your map:

• Item Drops (instead of 2 items for 1 unit, make 1 for 1)
• Trees should be placed next to each other (Remove empty space between them)
• Map borders are horrible, increase map size a little (Add shadows fog, whatever, look bad this way)

Ok I will fix this.

 

[ironman47]

Omg you mispelled your map title! (very tacky) Should be Forest of Honor

 

[Eldubs]

Omg you mispelled your map title! (very tacky) Should be Forest of Honor

Wrong.

 

[light bolt30]

Honour, Honor; there are two ways of spelling it depending which region you're from.

 

[Eldubs]

Honour, Honor; there are two ways of spelling it depending which region you're from.

Right

 

[ironman47]

Honour, Honor; there are two ways of spelling it depending which region you're from.

Oh, gotta consider people from all over the world here on the hive
I've never seen it spelled that way before. But I have noticed people sometimes spell color > colour.

 

[Eldubs]

Oh, gotta consider people from all over the world here on the hive
I've never seen it spelled that way before. But I have noticed people sometimes spell color > colour.

Same with defence defense

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

And armor = armour, favorite = favourite. So, how about talking about the map now instead of regional differences in spelling? o_o

 

[Slayer14]

Same with defence defense

Yeah, I've used "defence" sometimes too. "Stay away from de-fence!"

 

[Lucas232]

Same with defence defense

Yea i can't stand that lol, i'll join a game which i think is Defence but my friend will spell it Defense xD. but oh well.

 

[-Kobas-]

Please stay on topic, I am still waiting for ya to update map.

 

[MrStormyZ]

just downloaded it
the layout seems good for a potential Melee map, Creeps are fine as I saw,
and Items drops also seem balanced.

What you can improve is
I see you've made more use of the Ashenvale Doodads but some of them do not give the impact the Lodearon ones do such as the rock, also considering that you might wanna use the sunken ruins mushrooms instead of the Ashenvale ones as they give a better look on this tileset
You've haven't put any doodads in the way/path there is much empty space
some Doodads are not properly placed, if you observe the south Western Gnool camp ,look at the big rock above it, the shrubs come out of it I don't think that gives a good impression.
Then we can move on to the East and West Central Creeps spot ( spider )
I see you've removed Boundaries but the end isn't giving a look as it's totally straight, maybe make it totally plain or make it somewhat curved.
more Trees are needed at start points, if you do play Melee there is something called IMBA BM, more trees will be needed to be able to wall of the base.
and lastly you might want to raise and lower the ground a bit in the path way as it looks very plain.


EDIT : drop item bug found the Golems of the spots may drop different items as one is set to lvl 3 and other lvl 4

so my rating is 2/5 until update

 

[-Kobas-]

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Forest of Honour
Created by Marcin013 ; Uploaded by: Marcin013

Review

MrStormyZ explained errors left to fix!
I would like to add few more!
-Ramps look horrible, use rise lower to edit them...
-Red Creeps drop only 1 item...
-There is no above lvl 6 drop, what about artifact...
Map status: Rejected

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