Exiles of Numenor

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Moderator: -Kobas-
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Date: 09-Jul-13 (12:56:08)

Critical Errors:
-> Map presentation is poor or missing.
-> Map interface and overall graphics are of low quality.
-> Excluding script, everything about your map must be presented in English language.
-> Everything about your map has already been seen and was often better created.
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Personal Comment:
-> Story is really bad. You ruined J. R. R. Tolkien masterpiece.
Map Status: Rejected

(1/5) Unacceptable

 

[Legal_Ease]

Credits are kind of a must. This looks like fantastic work, but you may not get approved without proper credits. I don't want to see that happen. Also, you should post some screenshots. Screenshots are optional but they greatly increase the likeliness that a person will download or review your maps. I understand you might have some internet issues, so I vote that this remain pending (or approved if a moderator so desires) because Theoden might not get a chance to be online as fast as some of us.

Also, your preview screen looks bad - low resolution. Try to find a high-res version of that image. It would look much better.

 

[Footman16]

Well I played this and was getting a bit excited about playing a Lotr campaign. I wasn't let down per say but I found it a bit lacking.

1. The spelling and grammar stand out quite a bit:
ur - our
u - you
campaing - campaign etc

You should also have 2 spaces after a full stop. It makes it look cleaner and more spaced out. Also this doesn't look to good either !?!?!?. You should only use an exclamation mark or question mark not both and certainly not spammed.

2. Terrain. It is all right but could use a bit more direction to it. If you want you can look at my maps and terrain to get the idea.

3. Hero spells. You really should put a proper a description for them based off of the Blizzard ones as a base line standard.

4. Quests, triggers and cinematics. These need to be improved drastically. You should try to read as many tutorials as possible when you can and learn to create proper Quest requirements etc that work. I'm also able to start some cinematics twice through an easy glitch that anyone can do. I also destroyed the base in the third mission with just my heroes even though you were supposed to go to the docks. It is easily difficult that is what I'd put for the description.

I haven't listed everything as I didn't play through the entire campaign but there is a lot of room for improvement and polishing. This is your first map as far as I can tell and it shows promise and is quite good for such a start with some things that most new map makers can forget but please improved everything suggested in order to get this approved. Legal_Ease made a good point about the description it is a must; you have to give people the respect for making the models that they deserve.

Overall 4/10 mediocre with potential to be much higher and very good.

 

[Daffa]

Have fun and im so sorry because i havent gave credits to noone.But i thank the hive and its members for all this turtorials,models,skins and icons i used

Please make a credit list containing used models, skins, icons and other stuff such as systems, it's in the http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/beta-rules-information-710/map-submission-rules-228244/

Also, make a better description, and add screenshots. Use http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/map-description-generator-1-2-a-224558/ for easy description making.

 

[DivineLight]

Greatings to all in the Hive.I'm Theoden[KoMe] an ex shaman-member-cheif of clan KoMe which has been disbanded about 1 year ago by me .I work in map since then.

what's that?

 

[Daffa]

That text Should be in an introduction thread at introduction forum.

 

[DivineLight]

yeah..
no credits, bad description
~Vote for Rejection until fixed

 

[-Kobas-]

Terrain is decent, for a change but everything else is poorly done.
Poor presentation.
Missing DISBTN icons.
Some passive abilities have BTN icons.
Abilities are really bad.
Abilities and Items descriptions as well as other subtitles in cinematic are horrible.
In 1 word you ruined J. R. R. Tolkien masterpiece.