elven siege

[Moderator]

19:51, 29th Oct 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Gameplay is to ostraightforward, bad triggering and bad terrain

 

[Vengeancekael]

Add a category, type and a description, it's a rules violation!

 

[Vadim 647]

it was fairly interesting (or maybe i was bored?), but we got defeated at middle-right part of map (you know, too many archers, too many swordsmans, so hard to survive).
3/5
I look forward future updates that may include ressurection of heroes.

 

[fire-lord95]

ill see to that if they allow it >.>

 

[Aesthetics]

- Bad Description
- Many memory leaks
- Lack of polish

This is just one of those newb "place units and slap on some minor triggers" maps. Don't worry, I used to do that too (except I didn't embarrass myself by uploading them )

 

[fire-lord95]

i dont rlly care what you think or say, i only care what non-******* people think of my map

 

[Aesthetics]

i dont rlly care what you think or say, i only care what non-asshole people think of my map

You could try to fix the stuff I mentioned instead of insulting me.

This isn't epic war. If your map is uploaded, then you prepare for harsh* feedback.

 

[fire-lord95]

okay, then what you mean with memory leaks, and i cant make good discription or ill be saying were you need to go and such

 

[Aesthetics]

okay, then what you mean with memory leaks, and i cant make good discription or ill be saying were you need to go and such

So you were able to provide a decent reply. So I won't give up on you.

Memory Leaks Tutorial

As for your description, you really have to think about what your map is about, and write the aspects of gameplay, features, object, heroes, units, etc. If your map has modes or commands, you could post that also.

Finally, try your best to use almost flawless grammar and spelling. It makes your map look professional and well done.

Hope this helps.
~Aesthetics

 

[fire-lord95]

hmm strange tho, youre acually the only one bringing it up
and im busy on my largest map ever
and i dont wanna loose any time.
perhaps: you could fix it

 

[ap0calypse]

The terrain is very similar to your other map (which I have just rejected, sorry about that ^^).
The description is a bit of a downside (perhaps read my tutorial, it can be found in my signature).
The gameplay is a bit too straightforward and the triggers are bad.

 

[fire-lord95]

aw man

 

[Aesthetics]

and the triggers are bad.

I'm not the only one mentioning that your map has memory leaks, ap0calypse is somehow saying that your triggers have leaks because leaks make bad triggers.

 

[fire-lord95]

alright but i looked at that anti leak thing
i dont get it completely

 

[Aesthetics]

alright but i looked at that anti leak thing
i dont get it completely

Go ask in the World Editor Help section. You might find me answering your questions there.