Draconian Captain

[Moderator]

Frankster :
Nice model edit and good use of in-game textures.
Works in-game and performs well.
Approved.
Good job!1

 

[DESTROYER123]

Nice model. Me likes it.






5/5

 

[Sin'dorei300]

The axe is bigger than the horse, and the model is meh...

 

[-Peper-]

The axe is bigger than the horse, and the model is meh...

No it doesn't.
*checks* IT DOES! Well.. He's powerful.
And please give constructive comment about where is the 'meh' part and why, instead of just stating it.

 

[JesusHipster]

Eh i don't know why.. But i finished it for you Hope it's ok.
Added a real portrait, optimized, changed dissapate animation, sounds, bloodsplats and etc etc.. Just test it ingame.

 

[Megatron666]

cool useful for my lizardmen army

 

[rcshaggy]

I really like that horse so damn epic, and the rider is alright.

 

[Chaosy]

4/5 I dont like the head part

 

[ArconosBlade]

i like it, think it could be dagonkin from the black dragonflight

 

[Misha]

dude, you gotta rework the legs and the tail of the animal thingie. you can't really wrap a decorated peace of cloth to something that moves like legs do

EDIT: oh, and delete 'walk fast' anim.. doesn't look that good

EDIT2: something should adorn the helm of that guy that's riding.. maybe some horns? atm he's a bit bland, as if a soldier only

 

[trolman]

This is a horse:

Pay a detail to the legs, now look at your model...its anatomicly incorrect...take care of the rider and the axe, which is really big.There is no way that he could ever lift that thing let alone kill someone with it!

Please work on it more, especialy on the points i've mentioned.

 

[snowman990]

I can't download to see it in my model editor (since I'm in my handphone) but judging from the picture, I think his helmet could be better than that, and also fix the horse legs, it look like it wears human shoes o.o you might want to change the axe into lance too, or just make the axe smaller. Draconian are actually has wings, so you maybe have to add it. Haven't see the anim though.
3/5 from me, don't give up! ;D

 

[Misha]

'ey trollman, you're reported for being rude and not really helpful :/ you're insulting the maker more than explaining things to him, as well as demanding changes

now that he's done with.. let's see.. that axe could really use some more draconic touch to it, and, what's obviously a wolf, could be re-wrapped into a land-drake of a sort. would be unique, methinks

 

[-Peper-]

dude, you gotta rework the legs and the tail of the animal thingie. you can't really wrap a decorated peace of cloth to something that moves like legs do

Gonna change that

EDIT2: something should adorn the helm of that guy that's riding.. maybe some horns? atm he's a bit bland, as if a soldier only

I was thinking of a cape.. But I think horns gonna work.

Pay a detail to the legs, now look at your model...its super anatomicly incorrect...

According to your pic then wc3 horse is also anatomicly incorrect. But you're right on this part.

the rider is just a bland face copy

Nope, it's a body swap.

while the axe is the worst part. Look at how fucking big it is.There is no way that he could ever lift that thing let alone kill someone with it!

I know.

The only thing he could probably do is plow the crops so even your name is wrong, it should be Draconian Farmer.

You said above that he could never lift that thing, how can he plow the crops then? Lol

Draconian are actually has wings, so you maybe have to add it.

The contest version has wings, but I removed it since it's mumbled-jumbled, random, and somewhat sucked.

what's obviously a wolf, could be re-wrapped into a land-drake of a sort. would be unique, methinks

I'll try for that. I can't think much about making his weapon 'draconian' enough. If I resize the axe, it wouldn't reach the enemy. If I only resize the axe's head, it'll be ridiculous. Maybe runesword or such?

 

[trolman]

Hey nothing wrong about some spicy critique.

You said above that he could never lift that thing, how can he plow the crops then? Lol

He will drag it behind him ofc (if the wolf/horse) is strong enough to actually pull it.

 

[TheWhiteWolf]

#1 - Idea
A draconian with a giant axe riding a horse, Lord-Garithos-Style. Really?
#2 - Execution
Axe is way too big, horse a little deformed, and you could definitely retexture draconian with Dragonspawn textures, or perhaps Dragon texture.

 

[-Peper-]

Alright, I changed the weapon into halberd (u happy guys?) and added a pair of cool horns in the helm. Haven't updated though. I still had problem changing the horse. Snap dragon texture looked damn ugly and dragon riding dragon would be funny. Maybe I should change back into wolf or try dragonspawn texture on the horse?

 

[TheWhiteWolf]

Definitely dragonspawn

 

[-Peper-]

The wolf/horse's too way low-poly for other skin to wrap flawlessly. Dragonspawn, Myrmidon, and Snap Dragon's texture didn't work.

 

[Gen Bloodhorn]

i laughed when i read -"ed" all the page 1 comments
HAHAhahah

 

[-Peper-]

Actually, I updated it with Naga Myrmidon textured ride. It may look random or what at first, but it's better than before. Screenies haven't updated.

 

[Mgeterno11]

Looks awesome and performs well in-game. But you should make the axe a bit smaller. 5/5

 

[Misha]

Actually, I updated it with Naga Myrmidon textured ride. It may look random or what at first, but it's better than before. Screenies haven't updated.

much better :] and kudos on the helm horns

maybe you could rework the crotch/legs of the rider a lill, they seem a lill blurry, and maybe have something cover that stretch on the beast's back (largely neck part)

 

[snowman990]

Damn, still stuck in my phone
If anyone don't mind, can someone post the image of the new model, please :'(

 

[Hell_Raider]

Looks cool... is the spell him slapping his mount on the back of the head?

 

[-Peper-]

maybe have something cover that stretch on the beast's back (largely neck part)

That one's already fixed, thanks to RetroSexual. I just have to rewrap the crotch, the rider's neck and others before updating.

Looks cool... is the spell him slapping his mount on the back of the head?

No! He's throwing energy ball! *looks again* Actually, yes.

 

[TheWhiteWolf]

Way better now. But I still have some suggestions:
#1 - Make the halberd shorter. The size is okay, but it's kinda too long in my opinion.
#2 - Retexture the captain himself with dragonspawn or red dragon textures so it fits Frankster's models.

 

[Misha]

Retexture the captain himself with dragonspawn or red dragon textures so it fits Frankster's models.

but i like the black dragon

 

[Lord Vanaduke]

Nice concept, but the texture wrapping is bad. D:

 

[Kgg123]

Hmm...really nice! 8.9/10

 

[Misha]

so.. approved, eh? *opens a champagne bottle*

 

[snowman990]

This look pretty good :O 5/5

 

[Gen Bloodhorn]

now better

 

[Moises08x]

It is perfect