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Draconian Blademaster

Submitted by Dentothor
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is my first ever model. It was a model i made with magos and oinkerwinkles tools.
the idea just came to me.

Enjoy!

Changelog

v1.0 Original Concept
v2.0 Redid Wrap and reconstructed face
v2.1 Fixed minor connection mesh flaws
v2.2 Fixed Portrait


Keywords:
Dragon, Blademaster, Fire, Demon, Awsome, Red, Dentothor
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Draconian Blademaster (Model)

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00:28, 8th Aug 2009 General Frank: You have exactly 48 hours to fix the extremely messy wrap, the horrible alignment of the vertices, the holes in the model and the geoset animation. if you can't do it in the given time I'll have to reject it....
  1. 00:28, 8th Aug 2009
    General Frank:

    You have exactly 48 hours to fix the extremely messy wrap, the horrible alignment of the vertices, the holes in the model and the geoset animation. if you can't do it in the given time I'll have to reject it.

    08:39; 10th August 2009
    General Frank:
    No the model is still very poor and the wrap also is.It lacks everywhere. Rejected.
     
  2. DonDustin

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    1. : fix the models internal name(in magos under: edit-->model properties)
    2. : fix the geoset animations
    3. : improve the unwrap
    4. : I think you should also change the position of the horns.
    5. : remove the part in the blue circle on the attached picture

    Oh and I like the concept of the model, but you still have to clean it up.
     

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  3. Dentothor

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    i know how to fix everything else but how to i fix the geoset animations? and i think i should delete the horns.
     
  4. DonDustin

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    OMG if u can fix the problems with this, it will fit PERFECTLY in my map, +rep
     
  6. HappyCockroach

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    dragonblademaster.JPG

    There are countless mistakes at the wrapping...you need to start it over, most likely... also the geoset anims are wrong, the corpse will show constantly.
     
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    HappyCockroach, good sense of humor. Else you are cyborg if you can notice THAT in game... :p

    But model overall looks like it's not finished. You have done it, but forgot to make "dirty work" like cleaning it up, optimising etc...
     
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    Wow, awesome....
     
  9. Misha

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    it is bugged and doesn't work ingame.

    fix the geoset animations or just remove 'em all.. along with the corpse and decay bone anim.
     
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    Looks a bit messy...
     
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    Messy. Fix the messed parts of it.
    On my personal oppinion, make the head look better, it certainly doesnt fit the model.

    2/5 - not approvable. (imo)
     
  12. Dentothor

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    ok im finished. i just need to find out how to fix the portrait animation and then ill upload it.
     
  13. Thrikodius

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    Awesome!!! I tried to do this once with the green dragon skinn but I didn't get it right the first 10 minutes so I grew tierd at it.

    Me luves dragons!!!
    :crazz:
     
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    wow, i really love it.. but like everybody else said, you need to fix it..
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    General Frank, dont be so mean.. seriously, 48 hours?!?! poor Dentothor
     
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    In my experience, 48 hours is generous when it comes to Frank.
     
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    i agree. XD

    UPDATED

    Removed the fire on the sword, redid the wrap, fixed the neck
     
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    better now but these parts still have to be improved.
    blue cirlce=wrap
    yellow circle= mesh
     

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    updated

    btw how do u zoom in in magos?
     
    Last edited: Aug 10, 2009
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