Dota PaloStar

[Moderator]

17:02, 2nd Jan 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[light bolt30]

Don't double upload but instead use the update button. Improve description, tell us about the map and how to play(maybe include screenshots).

 

[VampireofBlood]

This is some bad upload.
You have no Description and you are 2xUploading
The only thing we know is that you made some kind of Dotamod.

 

[FrozenFenrir]

this isnt epic war *****.
u cant upload your map in different versions and in such a short time.
u have to use the edit button.
also this map contains not rven a slight description and is clearly a dota clone(a single peek at the map preview is enough to tell this...)
1/5+ vote for rejection for BOTH uploaded maps.

 

[Palostar]

ok... i will not be a idiot next time... help me fix..

 

[Lag_Reviews]

Helping you fix your map

Good to see you are willing to upload a map you have made to Hiveworkshop.

But first there are a few things in making the map stand out from the rest and making people say "Wow it sounds good" I better try it.

Although Do not lie about your map or people will get so angry no1 would download your map.

Okay how to make a good description of your map:

Adding a youtube video of some of the features in your game can make wanting to play or download a map even more worth it.

Adding in-game screenshots to your description can make people feel like they are actually playing the game and makes them want to download the map.

Screenshots of map

Just adding a description of the game can tell people what it is about, so they are not left worrying what the main objective is.

The aim of the game

The aim of the game is to get a hero and work your way up to the enemy base and destroy there citadel or tree depending if you are on scourge or sentinel team.

Here is another example of the description of the game:

Description

Dota Palostar is an AOS type map where 2 teams scourge and sentinel of 5-8 battle it out to destroy there enemies main building and stop creep production for ever.

Adding a How to Play description tells the person a brief overview how to play the map.

How to play

First you choose a team sentinel or scourge.
Then when the map has loaded you choose a hero.
Then you go an level up your hero by killing creeps/other heroes in an attempt to destroy the enemy citadel or tree.

Adding features to the description can help people understand why they should download it and what makes the map unique.

Features

This map has 200 custom heroes
400 custom items
500 custom spells and upgrades
30 custom unit
70 custom models
a new inventory interface
a unique attacking system

Including a change-log can help people understand why you updated the map and what updates are there.

Change-log 6.65

In this update we have added 10 new heroes and changed the death lightning spell so it would look better when casted and not poison you. Plus we have added a few new terrain features to make walking around the map even more exciting

Adding updates to come can see what you have installed for the next version and can make people want to keep downloading n playing your map.

Updates to come for version 6.66:

3 new models, 5 hero reworks, 6new heroes, 10new spells, 56new items, price rework and manor regen interface.

Always include the credits or people will think you made the whole map when you didn't and then some1 who contributed to the map will be real angry cuz you took all the credit.

Credits

Credits:
Dell.CC - for models
[H]ell.[M]aster - for spells
sls.Fail - for interfaces
Mls.Noobs - for terrain
Palostar - Main Creator

For now until you update the description, I will assume this map will be rejected with no time. Also if you are not the creator of the map plz do not say you are.

To make me download the map change the description and I might download it and review it.

Hope this helped you understand how to make a good description for your map,
Lag_Reviews

PS: Always edit your map do not re-upload it as you can only upload one version of a map, but you can edit the latest version into this map.

 

[Goosebearslug]

Just add in a decription of what you do in the map to tell dlers what its about.

 

[krisserz]

this isnt epic war idiot.

This wasn`t needed...

 

[light bolt30]

Description needs improving; doesn't tell me anything about the map except the heroes.

 

[Yoghurt69]

Why do you use dota as base? If u can make good map based on this, u can make your own aos but different, and without "dota" in name...

 

[Ryoko]

This map ... do not having most dota item, the circle of magic do not have drop item and pick item skill... the creeps remain its same hp until end of the game.. except mega creeps.. roshan dammage and amor same like any old dota...

 

[Palostar]

Wat name shoud i use as ??? need idea...

{EDIT}
This is a very good idea...

 

[ACdestinydream]

dont double post lol.

ways to really improve ur map:

change the terrain. really. after playing dota, this doesnt stand a chance if its a dota-look-alike.

name could be palo's star.

 

[X-OMG-X]

Isnt this an unprotected-and-edited version of dota?

 

[Palostar]

nope.. this is protected... =.=''

{EDIT}
i rili need tester,, no 1 to help test... Test Map button i pristed like 10000 times !!!

 

[ACdestinydream]

i can help u test. pm me.

 

[X-OMG-X]

nope.. this is protected... =.=''

Wtf. I mean. You did unprotect dota and made a few changes. Then protecting it again.
Like "your" two spells.

 

[Palostar]

nope..

 

[VampireofBlood]

Dude, it may have been alot of work to do this stuff, but believe me, every single dota fan won't play this, because there is a dota homepage itself, where icefrog himself is updating his map, permanently and it's way better then your stuff.
So just try yourself on new ideas...

 

[Ryoko]

Hei guys,after playing this map .. i am making an map that have special pet system.. get an item call pet potion then kill an creep.. after that the potion will auto capture an spirit of the killed creep inside... u can summon it as pet and upgrade its hp amor and damage.. after use it will cooldown... during cooldown... the potion will not capture any creeps.. any better susgestion??