Death's Healing Grasp v0.4 (Fixed)

[Moderator]

12th Dec 2015
IcemanBo: Too long time as NeedsFix. Rejected.

10:52, 6th Aug 2010
hvo-busterkomo: The spell leaks and is not MUI

 

[Cihparg]

Lol wha?

So, I see you made a spell.
And here's what I got to say.
1. Nice Idea, honestly!
2. Bad Implementing.
3. Good Eye-Candy!
4. Bad Triggering
5. Welcome to Hive Spell Section! - Lolz.

 

[Maestros]

whats bad about triggering :/ ?

 

[Klingo]

whats bad about triggering :/ ?

Well, Let's start
#1: your spells does leak, you should watch this.
http://world-editor-tutorials.thehelper.net/cat_usersubmit.php?view=27242

#2: the event "finishes casting an ability" isn't good. "start the effect of an ability" is better

#3: your spell isn't MUI (Mui mean that more than one unit can cast the spell whitout any bug) probably due to the function "TriggerSleepAction" known as Wait. Those Waits can be replace by different way depending on the situation. there's some link about MUI:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/trigger-gui-editor-tutorials-279/dynamic-values-storage-121558/

alternative choice:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/trigger-gui-editor-tutorials-279/hashtables-mui-133407/

#4 In GUI you don,t need to null your variable so remove this

• Set DKdummyunits[Integer] = No unit

 

[Maestros]

so i should set the point of the dummy units spawn as a variable as well as the unit group? and the remove the unit group variable and then i would have prevented those leaks huh? thnx

 

[Maestros]

*Updated*

I believe i have fixed all the leaks -.-

i didnt know anything about them sheesh ;/

check it out now !

 

[Klingo]

*Updated*

I believe i have fixed all the leaks -.-

i didnt know anything about them sheesh ;/

check it out now !

Your special effect leak , just destroy it right after creating it.
plus it still require MUI to be accepted

edit: there's more point leak

• Set ofpoint = ((Position of (Triggering unit)) offset by 600.00 towards Real degrees)

the position of triggering unit leak

• Unit - Create 1 Death Knight Dummy Unit for Neutral Passive at ofpoint facing (Angle from (Position of (Last created unit)) to (Position of (Triggering unit))) degrees

Position of last created unit leak and position of triggering unit too

 

[SoD.GoDLike]

^^

All I can say for the Idea is "Unique", now for a starter (like I am) it's common to not know MuI,Jass Scripts,leaks etc.^^
Deserves a 5/5 rate and acceptance once it's fixed!
*TIP:Set Coil's Range to 9999999999 so If u move the Dreadlord.Death Knight's won't hunt u and will just coil you ^^ *

 

[Prince.Zero]

The dummy death knight doesn't have to be a hero.
Make it a unit instead.

when the death knights dissapear, the effects are always spawned at the middle of the map.

It leaks a lot, it's not MUI

nvm, i hate GUI anyway

 

[Prince.Zero]

The dummy death knight doesn't have to be a hero.
Make it a unit instead.

when the death knights dissapear, the effects are always spawned at the middle of the map.

It leaks a lot, it's not MUI

nvm, i hate GUI anyway

 

[Prince.Zero]

The dummy death knight doesn't have to be a hero.
Make it a unit instead.

when the death knights dissapear, the effects are always spawned at the middle of the map.

It leaks a lot, it's not MUI

nvm, i hate GUI anyway

edit:
Can someone delete my post?
I don't know why it double posted -.-

 

[Vengeancekael]

@Prince.Zero, please don't triple post, you're breaking the rules. Use the

button.

I'm gonna post the triggers:

Open

• Deaths Healing Grasp
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Deaths Healing Grasp
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 12, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Set TriggeringUnit = (Triggering unit)
        • Set ofpoint[2] = (Position of (Triggering unit))
        • Set Real = (Real + 30.00)
        • Set ofpoint[1] = ((Position of (Triggering unit)) offset by 600.00 towards Real degrees)
        • Set ofpoint[3] = ((Position of (Triggering unit)) offset by 600.00 towards Real degrees)
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect at ofpoint[1] using Abilities\Spells\Undead\DeathCoil\DeathCoilSpecialArt.mdl
        • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
        • Unit - Create 1 Death Knight Dummy Unit for Neutral Passive at ofpoint[3] facing (Angle from (Position of (Last created unit)) to ofpoint[2]) degrees
        • Unit - Make (Last created unit) face (Triggering unit) over 0.00 seconds
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_ofpoint[1])
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_ofpoint[2])
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_ofpoint[3])
    • Countdown Timer - Start Timer[1] as a One-shot timer that will expire in 1.00 seconds
    • Custom script: call DestroyGroup (udg_unitgroup)

• Deaths Healing Grasp Copy
  • Events
    • Time - Timer[1] expires
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units of type Death Knight Dummy Unit) and do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Set ofpoint[2] = (Position of TriggeringUnit)
        • Set unitgroup = (Last created unit group)
        • Unit - Order (Picked unit) to Undead Death Knight - Death Coil TriggeringUnit
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_ofpoint[2])
    • Custom script: call DestroyGroup (udg_unitgroup)
    • Countdown Timer - Start Timer[2] as a One-shot timer that will expire in 1.00 seconds

• Deaths Healing Grasp Copy 2
  • Events
    • Time - Timer[2] expires
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Set Real = 0.00
    • For each (Integer B) from 1 to 12, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Set ofpoint[2] = (Position of TriggeringUnit)
        • Set Real = (Real + 30.00)
        • Set ofpoint[1] = ((Position of (Triggering unit)) offset by 600.00 towards Real degrees)
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect at ofpoint[1] using Objects\Spawnmodels\Undead\UndeadDissipate\UndeadDissipate.mdl
        • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_ofpoint[1])
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_ofpoint[2])
        • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units of type Death Knight Dummy Unit) and do (Actions)
          • Loop - Actions
            • Set unitgroup = (Last created unit group)
            • Unit - Remove (Picked unit) from the game
    • Custom script: call DestroyGroup (udg_unitgroup)

Suggestions:

Please rename the triggers
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[Prince.Zero]

i didn't triple post, the site bugged and showed me that stupid asteroids game. When i hit refresh i came back here and saw my post tripled.
You think i'm stupid or what?

 

[Septimus]

i didn't triple post, the site bugged and showed me that stupid asteroids game. When i hit refresh i came back here and saw my post tripled.
You think i'm stupid or what?

every forum have the delete button for the user to delete their personal post.

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

i didn't triple post, the site bugged and showed me that stupid asteroids game. When i hit refresh i came back here and saw my post tripled.
You think i'm stupid or what?

then just delete it by yourself rather than blaming the hive site for making your post tripled.

for the spell, I think it is too simple and judge from the description, it has nothing special just another heal version with different effects.
but it is not bad as a first spell

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Great idea, and good spell, but... you should make it more unique, because at the moment, this doesn't seem very special, Although, for your first trigger based spell, Very creative, 5/5.

 

[Don-Para-]

In addition to what everyone else said, I'd recommend making the deathknights transparent.