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Vengeancekael: Too low quality.
Vengeancekael: Too low quality.
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Dead World
- Author(s)
- Shadowz123
- Tags
- Cinematic
- Size
- 49.01 KB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 735
- Created
- May 12, 2007
- Updated
- Dec 3, 2011
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
This was a map i started off in Notepad as a small story, now i made it on Warcraft 3! Hope you guys will like it. Mainly a Comedy cinematic!
Hope you Like!
Hope you Like!
Contents
Reviews
- Joined
- May 7, 2007
- Messages
- 84
i like the cinematic!
- Joined
- Dec 7, 2008
- Messages
- 823
There are many grammar mistakes in this cinematic here and there. Nothing serious though.
At the last scene after the person kills the other 3 why does he just stand there for that time? I started thinking the cinematic stuck. But then he killed himself(i think).
What was the small zombie thing that killed the other one?
It was a bit.....lacking any sense. Wasn't it?
Little comedy not much.
Needs some improvement.
My suggestion:
1....Fix the grammar.
2....Take out the time lag in the last before he kills himself
3....That small zombie was said to be a hand. See if you can find a model for that.
What do you think?
My rating to this 2/5.
At the last scene after the person kills the other 3 why does he just stand there for that time? I started thinking the cinematic stuck. But then he killed himself(i think).
What was the small zombie thing that killed the other one?
It was a bit.....lacking any sense. Wasn't it?
Little comedy not much.
Needs some improvement.
My suggestion:
1....Fix the grammar.
2....Take out the time lag in the last before he kills himself
3....That small zombie was said to be a hand. See if you can find a model for that.
What do you think?
My rating to this 2/5.
Last edited:
- Joined
- Feb 3, 2006
- Messages
- 326
Hehe yeah, this was only a small thing i did, didnt really put too much effort into it, but thanks anyway.
- Joined
- Aug 25, 2009
- Messages
- 1,224
Shadow, you have some map skills. Put them to use in one project 
Go back to work on your World of Warcraft map
Go back to work on your World of Warcraft map 
- Joined
- Jul 13, 2010
- Messages
- 101
funny, especially Zombie Twister and the end. "I got my gun! woohoo! Tiem to die!" *shoots other 3* that was hilarious!!!!
5/5
5/5
