Dead Rising Revengeance v1.01

[Rufus]

This game was above expectations, actually!
I just wrote down a few things about the game here:
-Simple yet fun concept.
-I really liked that you were chased by that giant infernal for a while. It would be fun if it chased behave chased me further though.
-When you pick up the moon key, a gate opens automatically, so you don't really "use" the key.
-I liked being able to "refill" your mines when you visit the shop.
-The waiting time before the enemies came was a bit too long. you could shorten that.
-I wasn't defeated when the wave of enemies destroyed my turret.
-Fun idea with the tower mini game!
-The waiting time after all enemies were dead was quite long too.
-I played with health bars on, wich means I saw the health bar of all coins even if they were hidden behind a house. (Setting their selection size to -1.00 will fix this.)
-The player should not be able to autoattack. I coulc just attack move towards an area and kill everything in my way like that.

There are loads of things to improve, but for a first map this is good.

 

[deepstrasz]

Spoiler: rev

1. Author name and your user name are different.
2. Thread's map description is somewhat lacking and looks disorganized.
3. I suggest black mask instead of fog of war.
4. Land Mines have no hotkey.
5. Creatures might turn back to their initial position and when they do they don't respond to being attacked. Should make them not lose interest in attacking you.
6. Feels like a tutorial map.
7. After loading the game, the Flamethrower changes places with the Land Mine (icon position issue).
8. When the tower is destroyed, there is no defeat condition and neither is there after the Rifleman appears and is killed/removed.
9. I suggest a countdown timer before the enemy start appearing; I thought they would come form the northern gate
10. I feel like the gold should get right out of the Sludge mini boss and not somewhere near it.
11. Flamethrow doesn't have a hotkey (at least in it's description/title).
12. The fire doesn't kill the mutated scorpion. The creature walks in a staccato manner if shot at instead of hurrying to hit the Rifleman.
13. Avoid using one tile on terrain like in the last part of the level; why not make more of those stars instead?
14. Why not and ending scene when you've made an intro?

Pretty nice map though the replayability value isn't really there.

Left to Pending for now.

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EDIT: Awaiting Update.

EDIT 2: well this is almost borderline substandard to me. I hope you improve it: Approved.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

I played it a bit. It was totally fine in my point of view. I am waiting for the next update 4/5 for now. I'll see what you can do in the next update

 

[Lt_Hawkeye]

Is Zombie hunter one of your inspirations?

 

[linknukem]

Is Zombie hunter one of your inspirations?

Didn't really get inspired by anything. Just thought it'd be cool.