Copies - Part 1

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16:39, 27th Oct 2014
StoPCampinGn00b:

Version "Part 1 release"

	Copies - Part 1 by Tolist85 RATINGS [COLOR=white [COLOR=white Scores[/COLOR]] Story: 13/25 Visuals: 13/25 Total Score: 26/50 Explanation[/COLOR]]5 Stars: 94%+ (47+/50) 4 Stars: 65% - 93.99% (35-47/50) 3 Stars: 45% - 69.99% (20-34/50) 2 Stars: 20 - 44.99% (10-19/50 1 Stars: 0 - 19.99% (1-9/50) CRITIQUE Story: (No spoilers in the words below!) It's quite an interesting cinematic. It's not too short, but I believe most would prefer it longer. I like the premise, it isn't exactly humorous but it is amusing. I do feel attached to the humans, they seem so innocent, defenseless so far. The villain is like a classic villain, just wanting to wreck havoc for power. The ending was okay, atleast it makes me want to see part 2. Overall, the story is above average for my liking, and the dialogue is average. 13/25 ​ Visuals: Well, most of the terrain and doodad placement looks alright, you could be using more custom environmental models. The cinematic movement and actions itself aren't bad. But, some of the camera angles are a bit close, I would prefer some to be zoomed out to see more of the action. Nice soldier models, good job on giving a close-up on them. 13/25 ​ VERDICT The only way a map can be approved is if it follows the map submission rules. The map description was updated, therefor I have chosen to APPROVE the map. NOTES Overall this cinematic is semi-entertaining. Feel free to contact me about this review on this map page OR message me about anything. (+2) Reputation points for taking your time to upload this map to Hive. PS. It's spelled 'cinematic'

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Version "Part 1 release"

	Copies - Part 1 by Tolist85 RATINGS Scores Explanation Story: 13/25 Visuals: 13/25 Total Score: 26/50 5 Stars: 94%+ (47+/50) 4 Stars: 65% - 93.99% (35-47/50) 3 Stars: 45% - 69.99% (20-34/50) 2 Stars: 20 - 44.99% (10-19/50 1 Stars: 0 - 19.99% (1-9/50) CRITIQUE Story: (No spoilers in the words below!) It's quite an interesting cinematic. It's not too short, but I believe most would prefer it longer. I like the premise, it isn't exactly humorous but it is amusing. I do feel attached to the humans, they seem so innocent, defenseless so far. The villain is like a classic villain, just wanting to wreck havoc for power. The ending was okay, atleast it makes me want to see part 2. Overall, the story is above average for my liking, and the dialogue is average. 13/25 ​ Visuals: Well, most of the terrain and doodad placement looks alright, you could be using more custom environmental models. The cinematic movement and actions itself aren't bad. But, some of the camera angles are a bit close, I would prefer some to be zoomed out to see more of the action. Nice soldier models, good job on giving a close-up on them. 13/25 ​ VERDICT The only way a map can be approved is if it follows the map submission rules. The map description was updated, therefor I have chosen to APPROVE the map. NOTES Overall this cinematic is semi-entertaining. Feel free to contact me about this review on this map page OR message me about anything. (+2) Reputation points for taking your time to upload this map to Hive. PS. It's spelled 'cinematic'

 

[tolist85]

Updated.

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

See the moderator comment for the status of the map.

 

[creyzi4zb12]

I saw it. I think it's just a plain cinematic. I'll say you're pretty good with the basics but that's just it.
I did enjoy the story tho', wished the humans was able to put up a better fight.
I'll give it a 3/5 for now

 

[Ralle]

I see some missing images above "Map Info".

 

[deepstrasz]

...........
1/5.