Warhazard - part 1

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Moderator: -Kobas-
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Date: 24-Jun-13 (16:53:08)

Personal Comment:
-> Here you go
Map Status: Approved

(3/5) Acceptable

 

[Orcnet]

swag yolo

 

[AwzomeWulfzz]

Yolo swag, I can't see the screenshots.

 

[Orcnet]

in a minute!

EDIT: done

 

[Binsu]

Yolo!!! A map from the boss. I'll give my review later for I'll be going to mall right now.

 

[Almia]

WTF
Y u has poor description? No boxes!
We hates Orcnets' descriptions!

Gollum! Gollum!

 

[CroMoX]

I really enjoyed this, the voice acting was very good, I liked the name of the Ork Douchebag made me chuckle a bit. It gave me a real Fable 1 vibe at the beginning when he is sent on an errand from his Uncle. The writing was good, I didn't see any errors, but don't take my word for that, since I wasn't paying close attention to it

Only problems were;
- While the voice acting was great, sometimes it didn't sound realistic, but I can cut you slack for that since I cannot voice act, and know how hard it is to do good voice acting
- When the Villager Lady said they were invading she just stood there, and it just didn't seem right cause she didn't run which usually what people would do.

5/5 in my opinion since there were only minor errors and it was done very well.

 

[Daffa]

A Map from our BOSS

 

[TaShadan]

I never new WC3 had unofficial addons.
Good luck with this.

 

[huy60vn]

Maps by map mods
So good, I'm trying to interested to you.

Hidden

(Maybe you not know me)

 

[Binsu]

Ok, I have played the map and this cinematic is really good. You used transitions through different events very well and also nice way of using special effects. So here:

[+] Good Points:
-It has a good terrain. You mixed tile decently and you used different trees size to make random scalings to it. Good job!
-I like voice acting, sounds fit for a human and also for an orc.
-You used special effects very well, such as when a house got destroyed, it will burn suddenly. Your timing for that part is quite good. But what I like the most is the transition between the night and day in the part of the cinematic.
-Has some humourus aspects such as naming an orc MasterHaosis and also naming an orc also Orc Douchebag...lol xD!
-Smooth Camera movement

[-] Bad Points:
-It has a decent terrain but what I notice wrong is it is flat and also I didnt notice very much doodads to give details to the terrain itself.
-Voice acting is a job well-done but I must also put some letdowns... what I notice is their laugh is kind of not done well...

[] Suggestions:
-You can still improve the terrain by raising the ground a bit as I noticed that it is flat and also you didnt much givedetail to the terrain, I suggest add some proper doodads to do the job.
-You should make the laugh voice acting better, there is no real feeling putted into the laugh voice acting if you will ask me.

Overall, this is a good cinematic but only probem is the laugh voice acting and also the terrain. Still, I will rate this 4/5 and a +3 REP to the...... BOSS!

Voting also for Approval.... but wait, who will approve this!?

 

[Orcnet]

thanks guys and lol that's splendid! about the voice actors they are actually some British/German people who actually worked with the real game however I'll try my efforts to deduct the bad dialogues

 

[Binsu]

thanks guys and lol that's splendid! about the voice actors they are actually some British/German people who actually worked with the real game however I'll try my efforts to deduct the bad dialogues

Yes, not to be harsh but you should also try to improve the terrain as it adds more realistic and beautfiul quality to the game. I suggest add some proper details into it by adding proper doodads but use them wisely and dont spam them and also I noticed you spam the houses too much. Lessen them and put them wisely.

 

[Orcnet]

will do it then, but maybe for the second map that is the gameplay now since the whole camera settings is just straightforward and just a fast cinematic but will improve em

 

[Binsu]

will do it then, but maybe for the second map that is the gameplay now since the whole camera settings is just straightforward and just a fast cinematic but will improve em

Thats good, boss! Hope someone will approve this already. This is really worth of thousand approvals! Good luck with part 2 and I hope I can already rate it 5/5!

 

[Magtheridon96]

Wonderful map my friend!

 

[Daffa]

how to approve this if we don't have more than a mod for maps? Orcnet shouldn't approve his map right? well, unless many people says approve it
just approve this

 

[Orcnet]

lol I might just ask another mod to approve this

 

[Daffa]

^whos the other mod? Kobas?

 

[sonofjay]

Just finished watching this and is indeed a good watch. Here is a short review from me.

First of all the terrain could use some improvements, its flat and empty save the forest. Some recommendations I can give to you is to experiment some default doodads and think out of the box for ways of you can use them, well I recommend that if you don't like importing a lot of stuffs. Also a illusion of depth in the terrain usually helps the terrain not too look flat, there are a lot of ways to this and some of them are the heigh tools, cliffs or even doodads.

Here is a nice example

Click

Of coarse it might look tough at first, but to improve, you need to do some practice.

Also the camera movement is monotone most of the time its stuck with the same angle and turns sharply. You should also check where the unit walks, they sometimes collide with the house and rocks putting pathing blockers on their path usually makes them walk on the right path.

The voice acting adds a lot of spice for this cinematic, I really love the voice of the Ork Sorcerer and the Villager Womans voice made me laugh. Well its seems interesting, hoping to see more.

3/5

 

[Daffa]

This map is stuck forever......

Wait a sec :

I got an idea

what I want to say for the map :D

EDIT :

-Kobas- is back!! Time for him to do his first moderation

EDIT 2 :

Why it's taking sooooo long?

 

[Almia]

And still waiting.

 

[Binsu]

This will be in the depth of Forever Pending... noooo!

 

[Daffa]

Kobas, we need you here!!

 

[UndeadImmortal]

Ehem... Wai dis still no approve?

 

[Binsu]

Becuz mods no actib.

 

[-Kobas-]

Don't you think that village/town looks empty.
Just look at this image -> http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/members/194715-albums6351-picture69387.jpg
Send me map or improve that yourself, don't be lazy

 

[Forsaken]

Wow very nice, good story, voices
just the terrain need be improved, so poor ( no offense )

4/5 + rep can wait to see the other part

 

[Doomguy80]

This looks awesome! I am very excited to test it when I find the time!

 

[David]

WORST MAP EVER BOOO 1/5 work harder you fool !

 

[Binsu]

OH My God, first worst review in the map....lol! Why 1/5... why u do that ;_;

LOL!

 

[David]

I bet you can see my rating from below my comment

 

[Binsu]

And yeah I know, its just a joke. XD

 

[David]

No its not a joke this map is beyond terrible 1/5 BOO

Just kidding Orcy, 5/5 amazing.

 

[Orcnet]

WORST MAP EVER BOOO -1/5 you should die somewhere right now BOOO

how could you! I sold my soul to some dinosaur model to get DC rating and this is the result

 

[Binsu]

Muahahahha..... thats what you get for solding too much and is that Rarity from MLP?

 

[HammerFist132]

Orcnet, just approve it, we wont get angry .

 

[Daffa]

But if he approve it with a DC will you not get angry

 

[UndeadImmortal]

 

[Daffa]

*apocalypse come*
The end.

 

[neo_sluf]

When this get approved?..

 

[Almia]

When this get approved?..

When someone acts like DSG.

 

[Da Fist]

What to say. It's pretty good, no, it's great! Saw/played this a week back, and expected it to be approved. Eh. Just approve this. It's too good for pending.

 

[Daffa]

@Almia
Lol, you mean like when DSG approve his stuff?

@Da Fist
I agree, but -Kobas- doesn't want to approve it yet ;_;

 

[Almia]

@Almia
Lol, you mean like when DSG approve his stuff?

@Da Fist
I agree, but -Kobas- doesn't want to approve it yet ;_;

Now you know XD

 

[Daffa]

Now you know XD

You know, I only read Hive History and found this stuff about DSG
-Kobas-, approve it please!!

 

[Almia]

You know, I only read Hive History and found this stuff about DSG
-Kobas-, approve it please!!

Where did you find that Encyclopedia?

 

[Daffa]

I found it somewhere in the archive

 

[Orcnet]

Guys its all cool from here, I'll update the village setting by adding more doodads, village material, a pony taking a shower, and barrels.

I'll contact -Kobas- once I update it and soon it will be approved