Caelum.

[Celaquil]

My latest work, was trying to make a peaceful hanging garden in a sky tower, far above the earth. I do personally like it very much. Hope you enjoy it as well

 

[FrIkY]

Overall, it looks beautiful but the only out-of-place part are those tiles that you used as walls. I dunno, something just tells me that they are weird and they do no belong in there. Oh and, try adding some statue of a women or something in the middle of that garden, I think it will be better.

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Walking out on a ledge like that far above the earth doesn't seem safe.... though admiring the terrain from a distance shows that it looks pretty impressive. The birds were a nice touch

 

[takakenji]

looks like naboo.

 

[Celaquil]

Overall, it looks beautiful but the only out-of-place part are those tiles that you used as walls. I dunno, something just tells me that they are weird and they do no belong in there. Oh and, try adding some statue of a women or something in the middle of that garden, I think it will be better.

Somehow I knew someone would comment about those tiles Yeah they sort of contrast to the otherwise singular color of the structure, but personally I like it. Unless I am going to make any major changes I wont do anything about it.

 

[Lexandritte]

Idea is good but the choice of material is poor. You have high-res platforms contrasting badly with overstretched low-res "Naboo" walls, wooden and clay roof on the stone walls... The half-arc supporting it just kills me, there are so many ways to make a better support... And if my eyes do not deceive me, you've used only 1 type of vines out of 3.

My proposal -- leave the hexagon platform in the center intact, remove roof from corridor and completely delete that thing in foreground. Then spend a few days tinkering and make something complex.

 

[Celaquil]

Ahh.

I got to thank you Lex, I needed that one
Some of the things you are saying doesnt completely make sence, but I will surely change my terrain when I get time to do so ^^

 

[Pharaoh_]

I like it, but you really shoud consider adding some lands beneath and a huge sunset. In that case, it would really be as if it comes out of a fairy-tale. Right now it seems more like a WIP.

 

[Piwlady]

I like it, but you really shoud consider adding some lands beneath and a huge sunset. In that case, it would really be as if it comes out of a fairy-tale. Right now it seems more like a WIP.

I agree.

 

[Celaquil]

I disagree muchly.

I want this to feel like it is very high up into the air, and personally like the lack of lands beneath, and I MIGHT be a bit lazy

 

[Pharaoh_]

Yeah, I'd say boredom is your main excuse
Anyway, then add a bit of a fog (the eerie fog model, not the WE's).
I'd say some birds would be cool too.

 

[Spoontoobig]

Nice!

 

[Oziris]

You should add some cool light like Megafyr does (The sky looks plain ATM) (Don't add lands beneath, would look bad but, maybe a dragon flaying). You could add flowers at the window, that would be lovely. Other then that, it looks decent, i like it

 

[Megafyr]

I think that orange roof sticks out too much. Also it has been said, but the textures don't look that good. I like the hanging plants though.

 

[Celaquil]

You should add some cool light like Megafyr does (The sky looks plain ATM) (Don't add lands beneath, would look bad but, maybe a dragon flaying). You could add flowers at the window, that would be lovely. Other then that, it looks decent, i like it

Truth be told, I've never understood how Megafyr and raid makes those light effect, talking about rays comming from the location of the sun, like in raid's "Cogs" terrain. If SOMEONE could fill me in on this matter, I might just see if I can do something about it

 

[Megafyr]

The light from above models pitch angle changed to -1.57 in the right location, or a well placed/scaled star model(s) would do the trick.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

i like the structure very much. its unique and well placed.

only thing is that i can see the bend of the Cloud model, and it looks strange. Perhaps expand the cloud model or something so that the clouds dont seem so arcked in the appearance of a circle.

and special effects would be nice =)

 

[Celaquil]

Update.

Worked a lot on it, so I hope you like it better now
Apparently I suck at lighting, so this is the best light effects you will get, for now.
And it also seems like I cant edit it any further, for reasons I dont care to explain.
So this really is the final one.

 

[Piwlady]

Woah, it looks a lot better! Very, very good!

 

[Lambdadelta]

I'm wandering how you got the sky looking like that? Did you just get rid of the terrain and untick all editor boxes or make them fly REALLY high up?

Your peice has inspired me to make something random ;D

 

[Pharaoh_]

I think he is using alpha tiles (invisible, in case you don't know what alpha is)

 

[Lexandritte]

It is better, but I think you need to add something on the background... I dunno, floating island, other towers, some flying things... Plain sky just doesn't fit the picture.

 

[Oziris]

The floor in the building looks frozen, fix it

 

[Celaquil]

And it also seems like I cant edit it any further, for reasons I dont care to explain.

ffs guys >.>

And even so, I love how that floor is, so fuck off

 

[Lexandritte]

No one cares about your comments unless they are red and triple underlined ^_^

 

[FrIkY]

Aah, looks even better now and I like the statues you added!

 

[PurgeandFire]

Those statues are from WoW. =)

Nice job, I personally think it could use a bit more atmosphere but that's just me. =P

 

[Arlach]

Looks magnificent!

 

[Sephalo]

I feel sorry for that city's gardener

 

[madcd]

i have to say i have a feeling of Prince of Persia: Sands of time coming out in that but i like it though the only thing i don't like is the table and chairs it just seems some what not needed . . . but other wise really nice

 

[xDeathKnightx]

You couldn't get much f*cking better than this, Omg it's amazing!!!

 

[Celaquil]

i have to say i have a feeling of Prince of Persia: Sands of time coming out in that but i like it though the only thing i don't like is the table and chairs it just seems some what not needed . . . but other wise really nice

Hey, the people who built this tower should want to have SOMETHING back for building it, the least they get is a nice place to eat their dinner, inside.