Elenai's Terrain Gallery

[Elenai]

This will be my official Terrain showcase.

I decided to try my hand at terraining.

And now Featuring my latest Terrain Work, the Cathedral of Despair. This was the terrain piece I was making for the Terrain competition..but I missed the deadline by an hour...cursed stupid GMT time thing.

Anyways..please enjoy my latest work.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

It looks good! A little simple....But better than I could do.

 

[donut3.5]

It looks cool right now, but I think it would personally looks better if the building was in focus, like less shaded white, and then you can see the ground near the front of the screenie. I really like the light beam though.
--donut3.5--

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

It looks okay but the rocks don't fit.

 

[Craka_J]

Looks similar to MadseN's piece. In my opinion this is way too plain. The light beam is a really good touch though. You should place a lot more trees, animated grass, shrubs (Maybe) and possibly populate it with small people. I also believe that there should be more of buildings such as towers or something more in the center where the building is. It's just not as amazing as it can be.
~Craka_J

 

[Elenai]

Gallery Updated. I have not updated the Cathedral though. I will wait until I have a better Floating Cathedral terrain to update that one.

The ground terrain on the Church is a little plain, but the main focus is the church itself and the inside.

 

[EatShrooms]

I think it looks great. The focus as you said, is obviously on the church, the short ground gives it an unrealistic feel, almost like a cartoon. If that's the style your going for then it looks awesome.

 

[Gilles]

The new church need a lot of work. Looks really good for a start, but so plain all around. The inside looks really nice! Is that whole thing a big doodad? I don't see how you could have made that with doodads (unless they are all custom)

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

The new pics are worse than the first one, they are very plain and lack tile variation, height variation and the okay church just doesn't lift this up.

 

[Craka_J]

I'm sorry to say, but I agree with Ragingspeedhorn. If you improved your skill on tile-variation, it'd be a lot better. But at the moment, it's way too plain.
~Craka_J

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

I like the inside of the church, but the outside is kinda plain.

 

[Mor)L(unE]

Hey i see you used my version of the ultimate terrainign map. it looks abit messy from the inside though

 

[Elenai]

My focus was not the ground terrain. My focus was the church alone. But wait and see. I have more terrain ideas. The next series will be outdoor terrains. Focused on the outer environment.

And yes I used the UTM 2

 

[Gilles]

Ahh, please finish it! I like it, but the outside needs so much work. I really encourage you to finish it.

 

[Craka_J]

I too encourage you to work on your terrain more. It's not very good to just quit on an unfinished piece, reputation-wise at least. You need to get into the habbit of finishing your work before you begin another.
~Craka_J

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Or atleast not show unfinnished work then.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

I would say it was excellent if the user that posted them wasn't you.You are Elenai and if you want to be -The Epic- then you must make it far more than excellent

 

[Forsoki]

Very Nice

I really like the terrain. Why can't you release a Diablo 1 map it would own.

 

[Craka_J]

Ah yeah, you should definately make a Diablo II campaign!
Got the right doodads to make places like the Cattacombs and so on.
~Craka_J

 

[Elenai]

I think that making a Diablo Campaign.....using this map might be a bit difficult...considering that its already loaded with custom stuff and a large filesize.

But I am considering making another terrain...so stay tuned.

Probably the same idea...but brighter and more Chapel of the Light oriented.

 

[Gilles]

Sounds cool! Just make sure to finish the outside as well as the inside!

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

On the first one,the sky doesn't fit well.Else are good.

 

[Elenai]

Gallery Updated, I removed the old Church (my early work) and replaced it with my current Cathedral piece.

 

[~Void~]

I missed the deadline by a few hours too... because I woke up too late :\

 

[Elenai]

Yeah..it made me sad..All that work, And I cant compete.

 

[Naze]

You just removed a church and updated with a cathedral...
You really like Catholic's stuff, then.

But yeah, Cathedrals sounds epic...

Anyway, I liked the indoor terrain more then the outside terrain. The indoor terrain is very well-decored (you could add more stuff, but ok), and the main thing I liked at the outside terrain is the tower.

Oh, and in my opinion, I don't think that the waves you added around the altar fixed good.

 

[Elenai]

well..I had them set to flow out at the same time..but it kinda stopped doing that when I took the screenies.

 

[Gilles]

I quite like the one for the contest. Really too bad about the deadline. Although it wouldn't have gotten my vote, it would have been in the top 3.

 

[Belgarath]

I think your cathedral's too .. orderly. You should have some type of clutter on the ground, not just doodad here and one here, but that's my opinion.

 

[Rui]

Your last screenshot reminds me of a Tomb Raider 5 Chronicles mission.

 

[Elenai]

Is that good or bad?