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C0x3_Iron Jaw.BLP

Submitted by cavite000
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
First time making something other than iron armors bunch in together... tried making a skeleton now... It's hard xD Dunno how to make one... so... instead of calling this guy a skeleton.. let's just say his a ghoul... or some kind of monster that's not related to skeletons... welp his my "another attempt" on skeletons as the previous and very first skin I made was... soooo... out of this world....

Screenshot:
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In-Game portrait:
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First Attempt:
Obviously this is going to be rejected (stupid me in the past). This was made in 2011...[​IMG]


And as always pls do credit me if you're going to use this thing in your map xD

Updates:

Update 1: Tried to add some highlights... defined the armor and its nails...

Update 2: Placed shadows in the skull...

Update 3: Darkened the armor parts... removed some things and improved some minor details...

Update 4: Lessen dark lines on the skull... (Not Noticeable In-game)


Keywords:
Skeleton, Iron, Jaw, Soldier
Contents

Iron Jaw (Texture)

Reviews
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14:05, 5th Feb 2016 ~Nightmare: The skull looked weird as it doesn't have much highlights and shading. The only thing that's bothering me here is the shield, I think you can still find or come up with a better design. Like a metal shield that looks...
  1. 14:05, 5th Feb 2016
    ~Nightmare: The skull looked weird as it doesn't have much highlights and shading. The only thing that's bothering me here is the shield, I think you can still find or come up with a better design. Like a metal shield that looks like the armor. But it doesn't really matter, because that is just my personal preference. The metal boots could have darker shading, so it means that the bottom should be darker and the upper should be lighter. You could also try to add more highlights as it looked boring a bit. If you'll make this changes, I will be sure to approve this. Overall, I love the design and concept and please do more.


    11:32, 13th Feb 2016
    ~Nightmare: Changes were not made. I'm setting this to 'Needs Fix'
     
  2. Warseeker

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    Well I don't know what to say? 67chrome already created a skin like that, those two look like each other except the head a little, the shield, why did you use bone for the shield ?

    Edit : the first attempt look better, you should post it as an attachment file here :)
     
  3. cavite000

    cavite000

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    @Warseeker
    I thought someone would say that... yeah it's kind of like 67chrome's skeleton skins... didn't do it on purpose though...(actually tried my best to make this not similar to 67chrome :( sad result) but if someone gets angry, i'm willing to take this skin down... as for the shield I happen to enjoy making his rib cage.. so uhh.. yeah... placed it on his shield too...
     
  4. Ginufe

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    Don't listen to Warseeker. It's far from being helpful. I'd recommend you getting some more highlights on the bones and some more contrast for the armor, other than that it looks real good. Also, I don't know if Warseeker didn't put on glasses, but the first attempt is hardly better than what you just did. So good job and don't listen to people like this. They try to sound smart, but sadly enough have no idea what they're talking about.
     
  5. Skyfira

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    I vote to keep this skin. It may be similar to 67 chrome in some aspects but its still unique in its own way. On top of that there are people like me who are very picky about which resources they use. Sometimes the difference in textures or coloring can make me choose a certain skin/model over another. Point in case, this skin has merit and should stay.
     
  6. i'd like to see how the portrait looks like :)
     
  7. It needs shading on the skull thus the detailing.
     
  8. cavite000

    cavite000

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    @Warseeker
    Sadly I don't have the previous file anymore...

    @Ginufe
    Thanks for the kind words :D I'll try to add some highlights to the bones...

    @Skyfira
    Thanks :D I'll let this skin stay here then xD

    @Wisdom
    Oh yeah... I should make it the post standards now xD Always forgetting to put portrait xD

    @Roland
    I'll try to work on it... :D
     
  9. Warseeker

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    @Ginufe

    Before you start questioning people, try to be more focus, I didn't say it's the same, And I didn't say it's bad, I'm just giving him some details, caracters, Well then, I appreciate his work on this skin, I know he worked a lot on this. But what I'm reffering most is the color (shading)
    In short words, I'm giving him my opinion that's all

    No need to tell me that :d
     
  10. cavite000

    cavite000

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    @FireTiger
    Thanks :D
     
  11. ~Nightmare

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    Looks good! However, you could add more shading into it as the metal parts doesn’t look like metal and the bones looked like an old paper or wood, but that’s just my selfish opinion.
     
  12. cavite000

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    @~Nightmare
    Thanks! :D I'll see what I can do...

    Edit: Sadly i can't do anything on the bone parts T^T I don't know what to do to it...
     
    Last edited: Dec 25, 2015
  13. -Grendel

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    The skull looks odd compared to the rest of the skin. Try making the black lines less prominent
     
  14. cavite000

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    @-Grendel
    Done :D
     
  15. Gismo359

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    His face looks awesome!
     
  16. Grey Knight

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    I think the Bones looks Good you know it just like a a mummy skeleton that there bone are Brownish
    but it need some little shade on the Texture
    anyway 5/5 +Rep
     
  17. WhiteFang

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    His jaw kinda reminds me of Deathwing :xxd: :xxd:
     
  18. ~Nightmare

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    Too bad this skin haven't got an update. It looks awesome and will be more if some changes were made.
     
  19. to be honest, this skin is quite better than some of skin that has been approved in here.
    but yeah, i'd like to see update for this though. still pretty nifty concept and i like the color scheme aswell. but the textures looks kinda milky makes me wanna to lick it :3