Brazil 1.0b (Larger Version)

[Moderator]

00:57, 1st Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Raziel_br]

have some trees imported, but I don't know how to use it, I edited some things on the rivers to the boats can be used better
=D

 

[Cweener]

Are those rivers there in real life?

 

[BRO388647]

Fortaleza-CE! =D

 

[Raziel_br]

Are those rivers there in real life?

yes, but i change some little thinks, like, all of then, pass for "Pantanal"

 

[Cweener]

well at any rate, Improve your description.

These should help

 

[Raziel_br]

??

what?

 

[Cweener]

Well fine, I will put it in plain English.

The description is lacking. Use some of these to help with the ugliness.

If you'd like some examples of a good description try the following links, and maybe give rep to the authors for being so awesome

Shining Waters by R.Gaming_Strike
Avatar by dj0z

Seriously, Presentation(description) is very important in a map. O:

 

[Raziel_br]

well...
I talk portuguease, I -- don't-- know --talk --much ---english
-------------------------EU -- Não --Sei -- Falar--Muito -- Ingles

and this is one terrain map, there don't have much to talk

 

[Cweener]

That sucks because this is an ENGLISH site.

Go here.

 

[Raziel_br]

but I not talking portuguease, I talking english
¬¬'
If my english is bad, my descriptions will not be very good, and as I was talked, this is only a terrain map, don't have much to talk about it....

 

[Cweener]

Your English is very bad, that's why I gave you that tutorial.

 

[Raziel_br]

no, I will not read, I have english class on my school, I but hate study
^^

 

[Vengeancekael]

Well that ain't good, any how, I've already contacted a mod because you've broken a rule :

Presentation
Maps must have adequate spelling and grammar. Maps must contain a valid author and map name. Maps must contain a proper description of what the map is about.

How to improve it :

-Screenshots
-Info
-Credits
-Changelog

Status : Rejection