Short review Hurrrr...
- Fix the minimap preview. Make sure it has the correct filepath (war3mapPreview.tga) and correct file type. Note the capitalized P in preview and the .tga filetype.
(Note before reading the rest of the review: I used iseedeadpeople. No whining about that pls.)
- There's barely enough space to move a couple of units. Let alone an army of two players. The base at the top has way too much space and I'd suggest you utilize that space.
- You're using the default AI which is stupid in custom made maps. I won't blame them about not being able to reach my base though, the portal in their base doesn't seem to be a two way portal. (Refer to Next attachment and text)
- As I've said. The portal doesn't seem to be a two way portal. I way testing stuff so I made my hero go to the portal. At first it didn't seem to work so I tried right clicking the portal. After a few tries, it probably worked since my hero was moved to the next portal. However, I wasn't able to do that again... Soo... my hero got stuck there and died a miserable death with the undead and their stupid towers.
- Everything seems to be destructible? Again as I was testing stuff, I found out that the walls can be targeted via attack ground of the mortar team, so.. I made myself a Grand entrance and surprised the undead.
- Overall, for me, this is a melee map with custom units & doodads and super small space with preplaced buildings & units. You might have meant to add a storyline of your own but heck I don't get any plot at all here.
- Credit the people who made the models.
- Credit the people who made the models.
- Credit the people who made the models.
- Credit the people who made the models. That can't be said enough. I did not see any trace of credits at all but I could see these particular custom models being used in the game. (and BTW, I won't take "Authors were hard to find" excuse because I found these rather quickly.)
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/demonobelisk-155836/ ,
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/forsaken-catapult-243517/ ,
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/slaughteredvillager-245133/ , and
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/witch-king-252177/
Finally, I'd vote for rejection with a rating of 2/5. But if you fix these things, I'm sure I can increase the rating.
EDIT: It looks like my screenshots has that weird transparent space at the bottom. Magos conversion issue? :/