deepstrasz
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The description is a bit hard to read. Would you mind making it more eye friendly?
You could differentiate the creeps at the Goblin Laboratory from those at the Merchant. Now, the exception is that the groups in the south and north have a troll instead of a gnoll like those in the west and east. Would be nicer in terms of aesthetics and melee symmetry.
Why not a tenth level Green Dragon instead of that Red Dragon over the Green Dragon Roost? (just a question, not a problem).
Overall it's a decent melee map.
Set to Awaiting Update.
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You could differentiate the creeps at the Goblin Laboratory from those at the Merchant. Now, the exception is that the groups in the south and north have a troll instead of a gnoll like those in the west and east. Would be nicer in terms of aesthetics and melee symmetry.
Why not a tenth level Green Dragon instead of that Red Dragon over the Green Dragon Roost? (just a question, not a problem).
Overall it's a decent melee map.
Set to Awaiting Update.
==============================================================================================
Always check/recheck the Map Submission Rules! (Map Submission Rules)
These will help make a better description:
Screenshots could attract more players to download your work. Make the best of them.
A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
If you want more reviews, come here:
The Grand Review Exchange!