A thing i've made

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The single tree is a bit weird... you should add moar and others.

But the lightning and sky are so lovely!
 
The horizon is too high, and it looks like there are clouds behind the sun, making it look close by and ugly. The single tree looks good, but it would be better to shove it a bit to the right.

Correct these things and it will look better I think.
 
The single tree is ok imo. It's just the view that is wrong; makes the tree look wrong, because it's too marginal in the picture. Same goes for the horizon.

Don't lose the edge of that hill. Get the sun over to the foot of the hill, get the tree slightly more centered. Too much emptiness in the right side of the picture, but the tree wouldn't fit there. Maybe some more objects, like a person or a tree stump ^.

Don't know how the clouds could be fixed, but looks pretty good anyway. Nice, make more!
 
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