ZombieLand v.1.2C

Moderator · Oct 10, 2010

ap0calypse: Rejected

09:30, 12th Oct 2010
Cweener: Rejected (until updated)

NoMoreChallenge · Oct 11, 2010

-Poor description
-Bad Terrain

Please put more effort and work on your map. Uploading the map early while it is not finished, you will only receive the REJECTION message instead of feedback.

Crave. · Oct 11, 2010

Agreed NoMoreChallenge.

Lebsoljah · Oct 11, 2010

I also agree :/

light bolt30 · Oct 11, 2010

Vote for rejection;
-Terrain is poorly made
-Description doesn't tell us anything about the map (not enough detail)
-Doesn't seem completed
This map doesn't fit for approval any time soon. More effort and work needs to be put into this. Even though it'll have no chance of approval.
RATING: N/A REJECTION

Ironside · Oct 11, 2010

light bolt30 said:
Vote for rejection;
-Terrain is poorly made
-Description doesn't tell us anything about the map (not enough detail)
-Doesn't seem completed
This map doesn't fit for approval any time soon. More effort and work needs to be put into this. Even though it'll have no chance of approval.
RATING: N/A REJECTION

Review Marked.

Pourquoi · Oct 11, 2010

Rejection.

Eldubs · Oct 11, 2010

I would say, REJECTED!

Goosebearslug · Oct 11, 2010

Ok to start off it seems as though u spent half an hour creating this map -_-. This requires alot of changes if you want it to be uploaded on the Hive. You spelt Rifleman Rifelman on all the buildings and units in the rifleman base. At the moment it is way to simple and there are only 3 spells for your hero. The game only takes 5-10 minutes and for the whole game you are just basicly killing the same zombies.

Marcin013 · Oct 30, 2010

Added map Preview

light bolt30 · Oct 30, 2010

Fix those grammar mistakes in your description please.

Marcin013 · Oct 30, 2010

light bolt30 said:
Fix those grammar mistakes in your description please.

Ok

Sorry for me English Im Polish.

light bolt30 · Oct 30, 2010

Rifelmans should be riflemen. Baze should be base. Inteligence should be intelligent. Strenght should be strength. Frendly should be friendly. Some parts don't make sense or could be improved but I'll leave that to the other users to help you.

Marcin013 · Oct 30, 2010

light bolt30 said:
Rifelmans should be riflemen. Baze should be base. Inteligence should be intelligent. Strenght should be strength. Frendly should be friendly. Some parts don't make sense or could be improved but I'll leave that to the other users to help you.

Thank you

I will fix this :thumbs_up:

I can't English so good

Titania · Oct 31, 2010

So if your english is not good,you did not read the rules I guess

Marcin013 · Oct 31, 2010

Titania said:
So if your english is not good,you did not read the rules I guess

I have read some rules

Titania · Oct 31, 2010

So you were unaware of other rules that you did not read,right?

Marcin013 · Oct 31, 2010

New version coming !!!!!!!!!!

Eldubs · Oct 31, 2010

Marcin013 said:
New version coming !!!!!!!!!!

You need to read the rules.

Titania · Nov 1, 2010

Eldubs said:
You need to read the rules.

Either this guy have a brother or his just rep abusing,look at his rep

Marcin013 · Nov 1, 2010

Ok I have read rules

Eldubs · Nov 1, 2010

Titania said:
Either this guy have a brother or his just rep abusing,look at his rep

Are you talking to me? If you are can you tell me what this means

Titania · Nov 2, 2010

Eldubs said:
Are you talking to me? If you are can you tell me what this means

Go to his profile page,scroll down and see his recent reps

DoctorGester · Nov 2, 2010

Omg, i have a map with same name and preview -_-

Presley0402 · Nov 7, 2010

Rejection. This map doesn't even reach basic level.

Marcin013 · Nov 9, 2010

Presley0402 said:
Rejection. This map doesn't even reach basic level.

Lol , than show me your map ?

lux19 · Nov 10, 2010

I vote for a rejection for the following reasons:
1) Poor Originality.
2) Smallest rpg map i've ever seen. o.o
3) Terrain should be reworked.
4) I suppose that Detheroc (Don't know if i'm spelling him correctly) is a mini-boss, but he's stronger than the zombie king.
5) Rpg maps are not supposed to have only one dialog.
6) I seen that somme triggers are broken.
7) You should take your time. :/

If you want good comments you should work harder :/

ap0calypse · Nov 11, 2010

I wanted to give a proper review, but basically it comes down to this:

Poorly edited zombies en masse, a huge amount of leaks (bad triggering), poor terrain and very short.
On top of that, it's really easy to finish, there's only one item which can never be bought (costs too much), the objects are clearly very lacking (for one, the damage is incorrect because the dice values were never used and the projectile speed is too slow for the marines), etc.

I could continue, but I believe I made my point: 1/5, rejected.

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