17:49, 19th Sep 2011
Vengeancekael:
Status: Approved

Review:

Camera:

The camera work is excellent, it's constantly moving and you can see everything that's going on. However it may not be that smooth, I don't think you've used timers to make it smooth.

Story:

Story-wise, there is almost no story whatsoever or any lore and it's really not that original, it's basically a guy fighting for his people and then he gets their powers through memories or something. A little background story would have been nice in the beginning.

Dialogue:

The dialogue is horrifying, not a lot of expressions have been used, the 2 main characters say very stupid and cliche things, like, 'No... I'll' long pause..... '... kill you!'

Fights:

Some of the moves were really cool, although it did get a bit boring after a while, since some of the moves really were too slow, like the kael illusions going through Illidan, you should make them faster and smoother.

Other:

Add a map description in-game.
The warcraft soundtrack is still being played.

Rating: 2/5

It's a nice cinematic, but you should improve a bit your description.

The cinematic is so big...

here's a little cinematic review of mine since I don't do reviews about it.

The story was all about the guild members who got killed and the vice-captain, avenging their death by defeating their former friend. I really don't believe the music of FF7 was just the only thing I notice in the cinematic, but also the story line, and the plot itself were also similar to the Final Fantasy series.

the animations were somehow very slow but the output of how they react to each other were fantastic! effects was great too.

the most funniest observation that I've seen was that "Sun Death" scene were you shown a text about earth and the sun blowing up which end up like a comedy

Review:

Camera:

The camera work is excellent, it's constantly moving and you can see everything that's going on. However it may not be that smooth, I don't think you've used timers to make it smooth.

Story:

Story-wise, there is almost no story whatsoever or any lore and it's really not that original, it's basically a guy fighting for his people and then he gets their powers through memories or something. A little background story would have been nice in the beginning.

Dialogue:

The dialogue is horrifying, not a lot of expressions have been used, the 2 main characters say very stupid and cliche things, like, 'No... I'll' long pause..... '... kill you!'

Fights:

Some of the moves were really cool, although it did get a bit boring after a while, since some of the moves really were too slow, like the kael illusions going through Illidan, you should make them faster and smoother.

Other:

Add a map description in-game.
The warcraft soundtrack is still being played.

Rating: 2/5

Also I suggest you improve the description a little bit with colors and some screenshots.

Thanks for comments, but it's true about lack of story, and bad dialogues. I m just bad on english, and I don't care about story, I just want show a battle, nothing else !

1. Nice use of Special Effects +1
2. Lacking of cinematography.
3. Music and sound well suited +1
4. Could have used characters with 50% transparency to show souls of his* friend could help in understanding who is speaking.
5. +1 for efforts of making it.
Overall 3/5

I think the right term is the Traitor.

2.5/5.
Cameras and effects are well put but that's it.