Ghan_04: This map should be completely converted to English.
Also, this map's file size is HUGE! You should see if you can reduce that.

well i think there is possibly a way to make a "non-french" but english version to give it to an international community? even hungarian, russian, serbian ppl here try to translate it into english, it was not that uber-omg-i-cant-live-without-it important in this case to understand the loadingscreen, but i found it just rather unmannered

the plot/story of ur video get s a 1/10 (0/5) it made even for a short story (especially without understanding the preview screen) absolutely no sense to me, the character's actions were not comprehensible and ...sorry but.. just made no sense. the camera work was ok, the surroundings... hm simple but ok (many imported modells but not used in their best possible way) and u should fix the appearing and disappearing of objects, just avoid it
the dream- or awaking-scene was nice made, just the pictures, and mb the brightest moment in the short clip - also u got a nice timing of hits and camerawork (even tho it were only about 2-3 cameras)

overall it was ok for the first time - mb i could help u a littl bit

contact me for ur next (if there will be one) video