Sunset.

[Belgarath]

'The sun set like a ball of flame, as if someone holding a torch had gotten a tired arm ... everything was beautiful.'

 

[Oziris]

Uh....i cant see anything the water is ugly the palm is ok the sun is bad and the sky is nice....

 

[Belgarath]

If you couldn't see anything, you couldn't see anything. The water is blurry though :/

 

[seruk]

Beautifully made water.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

The sky is wicked, the palm seems to come out of nowhere, water is kinda blurry, but the sun is kinda nice

 

[Mechmap]

Dont really like the palm, is seems to stick out of the water.

 

[Celaquil]

Yeah, everything is partly great, just make some land in the foreground, not much, just so that we get the feel if being on a beach, or in the forest or something...
Appart from that dont think you should change anything.

 

[Oziris]

Ah mybe making a beach in front of the picture becous it looks like the palm is coming out of water!

 

[~Void~]

I don't like the water. It doesn't look like water, it looks like fake water... it looks like plastic.

 

[PurgeandFire]

It looks like a painting.

Good job.

 

[Gilles]

Alright then, just take mine and beat it. Thanks.

 

[Belgarath]

U r welcams. The water looks so much better in the UTM...

 

[Gilles]

Really though, it's awesome. I'm jealous mine didn't turn out like that.

 

[Just_Spectating]

nice boat touch.

 

[Belgarath]

JELOUS LOLOLOL
I think the best part about it were the parts of the sun how I (accidentally...) added in the flares at the front as well as the stack at the back
BLUE GEM ))))))))))))))
(HALP ME GET ONE TOO KKKKKK FOAR FREE FOOD)

 

[Gilles]

+rep .

 

[Belgarath]

Lawl, now Im where you were before.
UPDATEZ
B3W4R3 M4I U13E12 H4X 1M4G3 3D1T1NG 5K1L1Z

 

[Gilles]

How did you make the water?

What is happening to your English? God...

 

[Belgarath]

I ate some waterplane models then I pooped it out and it had received a 255-100-100 or similar tint.
I know, I have mega good spelling at times.

 

[seruk]

n1.

 

[Belgarath]

I'm scared :O.
I need new curtains now! Anyway, more work after school.
Has noone noticed the h4x3d sand? I made it dark.

 

[Celaquil]

Now thats nicer, some grass though at the edge close to the palm would be nice, and some shells leying on the ground and maybe some waves?

 

[Volvox]

I like it a lot, but maybe you could try to move the flare a bit aside, so that it is not directly in front of the sun, maybe that would look better.

 

[Belgarath]

(the sun is a flare ))) )
Yeah, detail to the sand is needed

 

[Volvox]

Aww, that complicates things XD Well, then it's perfect!

 

[Just_Spectating]

needs some lapping waves on the shoreline.

 

[Belgarath]

I'm back from AWOLity, and I'll work on this soon ... soon.

 

[Belgarath]

Updated again. Needs more work, I know.

 

[Gilles]

Looks worse if you ask me. The grass is ugly, maybe add variation with a couple types. Add in larger shrubs and whatnot. That rock is kind of ugly. The texture isn't great, and it takes away from your terrain, which almost doesn't look like wc3 graphics.

 

[Belgarath]

It does definitely look worse. I think I'll stick to an empty shore, maybe with a couple of barely seeable shells.

 

[Gilles]

Good idea .

 

[Oziris]

Wow awsome improvment!!! +rep

 

[Belgarath]

Updated again. Intensified light.

 

[PurgeandFire]

I think you let too much sand be visible in sight, it distracts attention from the focal... But it does look pretty awesome. Good job. Nice improvement

 

[Belgarath]

That's a really, really good point, thanks!

 

[Just_Spectating]

mmm, no.. those shells... kinda too big.

 

[Belgarath]

They're not very big. Really.

 

[Gilles]

Only thing I would suggest working on is the flare. Take a look at some of 2-P's. He's pro with them.

 

[Belgarath]

Good enough point, I'll check on that .. although I'm not 100% sure what I'm working on

 

[ghenjis]

The colors you used are perfect.

 

[Nbah]

Nicely Done. I really like it. Water is perfect as well as the sky. The sun is really great and I too suggest to look at 2-P's terrain. I think you can find it in the Legendary Terrain's topic.

 

[Belgarath]

Liek updated. Tell me what you think.

 

[Just_Spectating]

dont like the firepit.

 

[Gilles]

Firepit is a no for me.

 

[Belgarath]

Mmmh, I just felt like putting something new in it. Checking if things work

 

[Belgarath]

Update, removed the firepit and screwed around with the light a bit.