W.I.P plox by Mr.Goblin

[Mr.Goblin]

and..... an other wip... fiou! CRAZY PEOPLE! I'M TELLING YOU CRAZY!

I've been drawing for the past 5 hours now D:..

it's awesome

although, I better get some sleep soon

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who made these emoticons? they are awesome
MOUhhahaha

 

[Deolrin]

Damn Goblin, that's insane! Any backstory for that one? You said 'second WIP' without any first WIP.

EDIT: I just realized... That's for the concept art contest. Err, why do you post the WIPs in your WIP thread?
Instead of in the contest thread, that is.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Damn Goblin, that's insane! Any backstory for that one? You said 'second WIP' without any first WIP.

EDIT: I just realized... That's for the concept art contest. Err, why do you post the WIPs in your WIP thread?
Instead of in the contest thread, that is.

not feeling like it, beside I don't want people to go

''THAT'S IT! FUCK THAT!'' = emo quit

happened alot of times in the past, and no I'm not always the one caussing it. just think of Supa- or TDR when they were around in modeling competition, or me and Viiva in Icons context..

so yeah :\

if people want to see my wip, they come here..

I'll show my final product there tough

 

[Deolrin]

Dude, don't be so overconfident, other people have nice entries too, just look at viiva.
Seriously though, people like to see WIPs in contests, I'm sure no one will quit just because someone has a very nice looking WIP.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Dude, don't be so overconfident, other people have nice entries too, just look at viiva.
Seriously though, people like to see WIPs in contests, I'm sure no one will quit just because someone has a very nice looking WIP.

it's not being overconfident, it's about, letting people draw and participate... and indeed viiva has an awesome entry , didn't expected less from ''Bananahunt ''

anyway.. new wip

 

[Deolrin]

Damn sweet.

Imo, you should make the tentacles a different color, like a slimy shiny black or something, to break the monotony of the green beast.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Done bitches!

 

[Pharaoh_]

Oh damn, you must be the most 2D professional babe around here. Well well done. You are manipulating photoshop, as if you are cutting pieces off of real pictures.

 

[Deolrin]

Goblin... That's nice. But I see you didn't take my idea for the tentacles D:

It's just way too much green atm IMO.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Goblin... That's nice. But I see you didn't take my idea for the tentacles D:

It's just way too much green atm IMO.

I'll see about it, but honestly, does it really mather?

I mean, humans look monotone to me if you ask me?
Gorrilas too... so are a few dogs type... and a fuckload of fishes

but I see what you mean... but I don't think it,s important.

I think the only thing I should change, is to change the bright green for a darker green, just to make it abit more scary and ''lives in the deep'' fealing.

 

[Arowanna]

Amazing Mr.Goblin!
But I've to agree with Debode, the tentacles are very "monotone-ish".

Edit
I just looked up some squid and octopus pictures and the "monotone-ish" thing actually works fine.

But what about the suction cups on the tentacles?

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Amazing Mr.Goblin!
But I've to agree with Debode, the tentacles are very "monotone-ish".

Edit
I just looked up some squid and octopus pictures and the "monotone-ish" thing actually works fine.

But what about the suction cups on the tentacles?

Look wise, it would look better, but concept wise it would be damn stupid..

octopus have cups, because they eat with it, they capture their pray into these tentacules with these suction cups, to be abble to slowly eat the fishes by leading them into his mouth (under the head, the jonction of all the tentacules)

so.. adding suction cups on the tentacles, would obviously mean that the Leviathan eats by his ________

so... I see your point, but again, concept wise it's just...WRRRRoooong...

I'll see what I can do tough, I might add some skin designs like snakes have or fishes etc. again, I see what I can do, but lets all agree, it's not fun to rework something you've took 8 hours to make and youtough it was done..

bawwhh.. will see honestly, I see myself more working on a new drawing and taking these tips into consideration than to rework this one.

Will see, beside, this is far from being the only under water creature concept I'll make.

This one is just 1 creature from a X number of one that will be part of my ''conceptual world''

 

[Deolrin]

Btw; if this creature lives in cold\northern water, you might want to make it blue instead of green. Or perhaps black. I just think it fits more; but you see for yourself.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Sooo.. I,ve been building the Mok'notor slowly... and here's 1 of their primal ''farm beast'' even tough they don't really have farms :\

anyway, I present you the Equa'losk
In Mok'notor it means ''Ground stumper''

The idea comes from 3 sources of inspiration.
- Rhinoceros (basic shape and facial horn)
- Bears (Fur design)
- Bison (Fur design)
- triceratops ( Skull shape)

So than, you can know from where I'm inspired

 

[Deleted member 157129]

That really puts the Mok'notors in perspective to humans. I mean, that's one buff animal they got there compared to our horses. Nice work!

 

[M0rbid]

This really is a nice idea. However there is one smaller issue I would like to point out, the hair on the downside on the face could be solid aswell, I'm not sure, what you try to aim for here. Maybe making this a bit clearer would be good.

Apart from that: lovely!

 

[Mr.Goblin]

That really puts the Mok'notors in perspective to humans. I mean, that's one buff animal they got there compared to our horses. Nice work!

Thanks mate!

This really is a nice idea. However there is one smaller issue I would like to point out, the hair on the downside on the face could be solid aswell, I'm not sure, what you try to aim for here. Maybe making this a bit clearer would be good.

Apart from that: lovely!

It's actually just fur attached to their chin, just like goats have, because since they live in Cold temperate weathers, they need a lot of fur to protect them from the cold.

 

[M0rbid]

It's actually just fur attached to their chin, just like goats have, because since they live in Cold temperate weathers, they need a lot of fur to protect them from the cold.

I guessed so aswell. Fits better! So: Good job! I really love how you pull that out!

 

[Mr.Goblin]

and an other beast concept that is builded around the Mok'notor..

I present you the Qualak'talouk
in Mok'notor it means ''Giant of the mountain''

not so sure about it's concept. I mean look wise, I'll keep the creature, but they might not be the ''biggest beast around'' I'm looking for... so perhaps in the futur they will be smaller and called differently, and a new beast concept with the same name and same description will be replacing it.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

and an other beast concept that is builded around the Mok'notor..

I present you the Qualak'talouk
in Mok'notor it means ''Giant of the mountain''

not so sure about it's concept. I mean look wise, I'll keep the creature, but they might not be the ''biggest beast around'' I'm looking for... so perhaps in the futur they will be smaller and called differently, and a new beast concept with the same name and same description will be replacing it.

These are some really unique concepts you're throwing out! The face looks kind of like a camel with horns and whatnot.
Not sure I like the squirrel tail, though, but it does add uniqueness to it.

I want to see a movie where a Mok'notor fights one of these.. oh, I'll keep dreaming for a while. :3

 

[Mr.Goblin]

These are some really unique concepts you're throwing out! The face looks kind of like a camel with horns and whatnot.
Not sure I like the squirrel tail, though, but it does add uniqueness to it.

I want to see a movie where a Mok'notor fights one of these.. oh, I'll keep dreaming for a while. :3

The day I'll have over a month of spare time and that I'll be a beast in drawing things in motion, I promise you I'll make a drawing of how the ''hunting looks like''

 

[CRAZYRUSSIAN]

Ok my quick review.

The satyr bard is ok. The chest area is too high. the legs need clear anatomy, because they are all the way in front.
The leather satch is too strait, bend a little as the bad slumps on the ground.

DO! construct the horns, so they look like two same shaped horns in different perspectives! If you know basic 3D, u can model quick horns and take a screen shot, just for the correct. shape


Now for the beast creature. I did a quick edit.
Basically all light, highlight, shadows on the beast are all the same! Same tone color and value on every part of the creature making it flat.

Choose the most important area, make it stand out, push the unimportant things in the back, and the parts that are closest need to be brighter.
Variate the color, texture, value, tone, ets.
So, in that edited version I done zero painting. I have placed a watercolor filter on some parts, brightness and contrast, color balance, and hue/ saturation slider.
Just modified the colors and values of the image a bit.

Hope this helps!

Best! Keep at it! U are almost there. Make some of that next level shit!

 

[Mr.Goblin]

ok my quick review.

The satyr bard is ok. The chest area is too high. The legs need clear anatomy, because they are all the way in front.
The leather satch is too strait, bend a little as the bad slumps on the ground.

Do! Construct the horns, so they look like two same shaped horns in different perspectives! If you know basic 3d, u can model quick horns and take a screen shot, just for the correct. Shape


now for the beast creature. I did a quick edit.
Basically all light, highlight, shadows on the beast are all the same! Same tone color and value on every part of the creature making it flat.

Choose the most important area, make it stand out, push the unimportant things in the back, and the parts that are closest need to be brighter.
Variate the color, texture, value, tone, ets.
So, in that edited version i done zero painting. I have placed a watercolor filter on some parts, brightness and contrast, color balance, and hue/ saturation slider.
Just modified the colors and values of the image a bit.

Hope this helps!

Best! Keep at it! U are almost there. Make some of that next level shit!

luv you! <3

 

[Deolrin]

Whoa. Goblin, if you can do what CRAZYRUSSIAN did on the Leviathan only more detailed\refined... That'd be pretty epic. :O

CRAZYRUSSIAN, that reminds me of StarCraft 2's shaders\lightning on various units e.g. corruptor. Looks awesome. :O

 

[Mr.Goblin]

sooo don't ask me where the fuck that idea came from, I just drew it, started from the mouth and everything involved by itself.. god I love to draw...

it's basically someshort of scavenger, that steal stuff and eat small animals.. and raw meat...it's a creepy character actually :\

I wonder if I'll ever work on it after this post :\

not so sure.. meeh.. will see.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

Cool. :3

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Finally... god... I have a 3 hours of spare time until going to bed.. fuck feels good..

anyhow.. here's a new drawing, made out of fun, and a bit by nostalgia (don't insinuate anything from this)

Goblin berserk, I might need your help on this one, I'm training my proportions..

/Mr.Goblin looks at shiik >.>

 

[NFWar]

Hmmm... let me see... proportions are... grrrrrEAT!

 

[PROXY]

Finally... god... I have a 3 hours of spare time until going to bed.. fuck feels good..

anyhow.. here's a new drawing, made out of fun, and a bit by nostalgia (don't insinuate anything from this)

Goblin berserk, I might need your help on this one, I'm training my proportions..

/Mr.Goblin looks at shiik >.>

Whoa, looks awsome <3

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Hmmm... let me see... proportions are... grrrrrEAT!

I fear you are wrong, I,ve talked with a friend of mine who's a professionnal artist, and there's a few things I have to do to improve it

 

[NFWar]

Well I sayed "great" not perfect
You could work more with left hand and shoulder.

 

[warhog]

the left leg looks weird somehow... perhaps it's the kneepad or the angle of his foot, i can't really figure it out :S

 

[Mr.Goblin]

so here's an update...

 

[warhog]

the leg looks better but now he lost that "hanging" feeling, compare the 2 pics to see what i mean, and I thought it looked much cooler in the first one!

 

[Mr.Goblin]

the leg looks better but now he lost that "hanging" feeling, compare the 2 pics to see what i mean, and I thought it looked much cooler in the first one!

I forgot to upload the last pic, he's less stiff now, and I know exactly what you mean...that's why I changed it

next WIP , I'll be starting to add the colors and shading.

Edit = Started to add colors

 

[Mr.Goblin]

New WIP!

 

[Deleted member 157129]

Looking sweet!

 

[PROXY]

/helpfull comment: looks amazing

 

[lexalex]

As allways you impress with your works Mr.Goblin - Would you mind if I ask you to make this Goblin a Wallpaper? I mean it's really impressive - and I would like to have this as a wallpaper xD...Maybe a background and it's 100% wallpaper

 

[Mr.Goblin]

As allways you impress with your works Mr.Goblin - Would you mind if I ask you to make this Goblin a Wallpaper? I mean it's really impressive - and I would like to have this as a wallpaper xD...Maybe a background and it's 100% wallpaper

that was my goal from the beginning

so sure!

 

[Mr.Goblin]

new wip!

 

[lexalex]

a lil ideea after you finish the character...for the background maybe..He can stand on a barrel or smth? not on a rock...well it's only my ideea maybe you will make your own

But by now this is so damn great

 

[Mr.Goblin]

new Wip

I think I screw up those pants

 

[lexalex]

maybe darker color for pants

 

[PROXY]

The pants look okay imo. just darken them a bit like lexalex said.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

New wip.

still have the arm and the mohawk to fix, and maybe add a few shadow here and there

 

[lexalex]

Niiiice....I like that tatoo on his head:X...it's awsome

 

[kola]

the right foot (talking about my point of view) is a bit wierd. The part of the shoe that is made to touch the ground when he walks isn't 3D.

it's abit complicated to explain when you don't know how to say it .

If you don't understan (cuz my explaination Sucks) i'll draw what i want to say.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

the right foot (talking about my point of view) is a bit wierd. The part of the shoe that is made to touch the ground when he walks isn't 3D.

it's abit complicated to explain when you don't know how to say it .

If you don't understan (cuz my explaination Sucks) i'll draw what i want to say.

you mean those spikes?

 

[kola]

not the front part. (not where the spikes are). just behind them.