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18:59, 30th Mar 2009 by bounty hunter2:
Generally not bad, but still not really good. The terrain was satisfying, yet the tiles you used in the village, actually the only tile you used, dirt was terribly misplaced and ugly.
The cameras were average to lacking, with a lot of to fast ones, such as the one shifting between the skeleton and one of the guys, and some of the cameras were static.
The dialog was fine, I guess. Man don't have breast, they have chest. A few other typos and grammar time mistakes. The beginning was "over made". "Let us kill him! Yes! Let's kill him! Let's kill him my friend!" I don't know exactly how it went but it didn't do the effect you wanted it to do.
To continue, you overused the effects. Really, it's not all in the effects you use. The part where the guy shifted among arrows was odd. Why would he shift among them when he could just blink out? It made my computer lag (Effects) a bit and it wasn't really that special.
And as Septimus had written, it's a bit unreal that they stop in the middle of the combat and chat a bit.
To conclude, a average/lacking cinematic, after some thinking I decided to give it a 2/5 (Lacking) rating but still Approved.
I was rethinking should I give it a 3 perhaps, but I gave a 3 to much better cinematics. Anyway if you are willing to improve I am always willing to re-check it.
Generally not bad, but still not really good. The terrain was satisfying, yet the tiles you used in the village, actually the only tile you used, dirt was terribly misplaced and ugly.
The cameras were average to lacking, with a lot of to fast ones, such as the one shifting between the skeleton and one of the guys, and some of the cameras were static.
The dialog was fine, I guess. Man don't have breast, they have chest. A few other typos and grammar time mistakes. The beginning was "over made". "Let us kill him! Yes! Let's kill him! Let's kill him my friend!" I don't know exactly how it went but it didn't do the effect you wanted it to do.
To continue, you overused the effects. Really, it's not all in the effects you use. The part where the guy shifted among arrows was odd. Why would he shift among them when he could just blink out? It made my computer lag (Effects) a bit and it wasn't really that special.
And as Septimus had written, it's a bit unreal that they stop in the middle of the combat and chat a bit.
To conclude, a average/lacking cinematic, after some thinking I decided to give it a 2/5 (Lacking) rating but still Approved.
I was rethinking should I give it a 3 perhaps, but I gave a 3 to much better cinematics. Anyway if you are willing to improve I am always willing to re-check it.