Huge file size because of imported music.
You have imported FullScreen.blp file but you miss
LoadingScreen.mdx file for showing it...
Instead of war3mapMap.blp use war3MapPreview.tga (without wc3imported\)
Payload Size: 4053976 bytes
Header found at: 0 bytes
Length: 169 seconds
MPEG-1 layer 3
192 kbps, approx. 809 frames
44100 Hz Joint Stereo
CRC: No, Copyrighted: No
Original: No, Emphasis: None
Shrink file pls, for mp3 file without voice even 32 kbps can do (size will be around 6 times smaller)
Now about terrain, very very bad, I like only ogre house inside or whatever. Clouds look horrible, trees are placed next to each other (we don't create melee map here)... Use rise and lower tool a little, add shrubs rocks, flowers and so on...
Background with river, lake and waterfall always look awesome!
Import glowing effects as well as some fog effects and replace clouds... (Ultimate terrain map or check THW resources)
Camera movement is really bad, camera should not stop, anytime (there are some cases when it should but forget about it for now)...
Few tips and tricks ->
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/cinematics-268/tips-tricks-cinema-39854/
Story is bad without more info...
You need to explain battle between humans and ogres a little more...
Add trigger that will end cinematic if we hit ESC button.
Sorry buddy, to many errors for now... Please if you decide to improve map just update this one and send message to us, we will unlock thread for you once again!
I attached file to post, use it for loading screen!
Map status:
Rejected