15:37, 27th Jun 2008
Werewulf: Look, all i see is cnp and poor shading, the skin doesnt look that different from the orignal besides the odd extra bandage and red stuff. The skin section is for complete skins, do not use them as a critique thread.

Nice. I like the bandage textures u gave it. Makes it look older and appears to have decay. I see a bold line on his abdomen that I think needs to have two bandages to get rid of the slash in it. It's just a bold, black line from what I can tell.

Not bad. I don't really understand who would bandage a giant spider, but this skin looks good.

looks good! I love the hairs! 4/5
the shading on the bandages look kinda wierd

Right..so you added more bandages? so what?

You did not 100% freehanded it as you said, there are some bandages that are cnp and his spider body is the same

2/5 this needs more work then just more bandages

this a nice skin ! and it's original =D

Make him decay and bloody and i will use it.(dont worry im not sadistic!)

Awesome! Just what I've been looking for
An even more dead-looking version of the crypt fiend! Good work! 10/10

FrIkY said:

You did not 100% freehanded it as you said, there are some bandages that are cnp and his spider body is the same

2/5 this needs more work then just more bandages

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I think that thing is an automatic message or something that managed to get attached because it says, "Please give credit to sacridshadow if you use this in your map"

I think that he just CnP'ed it from the read me(which nobody reads)

Yes it does seem more undead, but not that much of a difference.

GrimmReaper_VI said:

Awesome! Just what I've been looking for
An even more dead-looking version of the crypt fiend! Good work! 10/10

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God damn, why do people keep spamming smilies? As I said before, two smilies are enough.
Anyway, the skin is lacking, 3/5 from me.

well, I found that he did copy from the read me claiming "It makes it look better". >.>

But instead of just saying "it's bad" why not also tell him what to do to make it better?

Please tell me how I can improve on this. I also found out that the readme is automatic. And yes, I looked at the model again and saw some CnP parts from sections I had finished. I will fix that if neccessary.

And PLEASE give feedback, I need to know what needs improvement so you guys will like it.

Edit: Sorry for the gray background. I have changed he fur on the abdomen and the tusks and feet have been given a "cracked" look. Persoally, it looks like dry dirt, but, that's just what I see. Please give me ideas of what and how to improve. Thx!

The readme isn't automatic, sacrid. I don't see it in mine. And you should redo the CnP parts, like the hairs by followinga hair tutorial. Trust me. If you do it right, it would look awesome.

Sigh*
Its been said, adding more bandages isnt going to make this skin get approved. Add more and make it look distinctly different from the original or i wont approve it.

He is tring to improve it. But he also wants to know what it is that he should improve. :/
So far, he hasn't been told what needs improving other than "his skin".

Maybe make it more with flesh blood and gore? that will sure improve the skin.

sacrid isn't the best (by far) at making blood effects. His ribbons look like a sand tecture (very well done I might add)

Well, right now it look like a mummy crypt fiend >_<

lol. exactly what I thought. XD needs more colors.

Sorry for the gra background. I have changed he fur on the abdomen and the tusks and feet have been given a "cracked" look. Persoally, it looks like dry dirt, but, that's just what I see. Please give me ideas of what and how to improve. Thx!

Please give us a close up. We can't even see any details.

K, I added grey fur on the abdomen but I want to know if I should add the same fur to the legs. Please help me make this better. Plus, I changed the picture for a close up.

it needs more colors. lol, try giving the skin (not the bandages) more color. like red

I don't get it. If that's blood, you need soem smaller circles around it. And the fangs (if yoy're dripping blood, need to look like it A.K.A splothces of brown where the blood isn't.

zombie2279 said:

Not bad. I don't really understand who would bandage a giant spider, but this skin looks good.

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I would ^-^ :S

lol. really? Maybe if it were an egyptian nerubian, which in that case would require more gold. :3

Egyptan nerubian

varsaigen said:

lol. really? Maybe if it were an egyptian nerubian, which in that case would require more gold. :3

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Ooohhhh, that sounds like a really good idea. Thx! I'll try that. lol

yeah... and all the great ideas in my head you want to use? XD uh huh... right...

<bump> Pwned! Xd

REJECTED? omg...

sadly. Werewulv said that it wasn't enough changes. Luckily I still have it on my computer, so I could show sacrid where to make changes (earlier). If need be, you could ask him or me for it. I know the Hive's operations better than he does. XD