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Cryptbeast.blp

Submitted by sacridshadow
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
Noting the lack of Undeadness the crypt fiend have, I decided to make it more "dead looking". Critique and feesback is appreciated.

Please do not distribute or edit without my permission. And please give credit to sacridshadow if you use this.

Keywords:
crypt, fiend, nerub, nerubian, spider, undead, dead, bandages, monster
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Cryptbeast.blp (Texture)

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15:37, 27th Jun 2008 Werewulf: Look, all i see is cnp and poor shading, the skin doesnt look that different from the orignal besides the odd extra bandage and red stuff. The skin section is for complete skins, do not use them as a critique thread.
  1. 15:37, 27th Jun 2008
    Werewulf: Look, all i see is cnp and poor shading, the skin doesnt look that different from the orignal besides the odd extra bandage and red stuff. The skin section is for complete skins, do not use them as a critique thread.
     
  2. varsaigen

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    Nice. I like the bandage textures u gave it. Makes it look older and appears to have decay. I see a bold line on his abdomen that I think needs to have two bandages to get rid of the slash in it. It's just a bold, black line from what I can tell.
     
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    Not bad. I don't really understand who would bandage a giant spider, but this skin looks good.
     
    Last edited: Jun 23, 2008
  4. Grog50

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    looks good! I love the hairs! 4/5
    the shading on the bandages look kinda wierd
     
  5. Kimbo

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    Right..so you added more bandages? so what?
     
  6. FrIkY

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    You did not 100% freehanded it as you said, there are some bandages that are cnp and his spider body is the same

    2/5 this needs more work then just more bandages
     
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    this a nice skin ! and it's original =D
     
  8. Deolrin

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    Make him decay and bloody and i will use it.(dont worry im not sadistic!)
     
  9. GrimmReaper_VI

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    Awesome! Just what I've been looking for :wink:
    An even more dead-looking version of the crypt fiend! Good work! 10/10 :thumbs_up: :thumbs_up: :thumbs_up: :thumbs_up: :thumbs_up: :thumbs_up:
     
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    I think that thing is an automatic message or something that managed to get attached because it says, "Please give credit to sacridshadow if you use this in your map"
     
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    I think that he just CnP'ed it from the read me(which nobody reads) :slp:
     
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    Yes it does seem more undead, but not that much of a difference.
     
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    God damn, why do people keep spamming smilies? As I said before, two smilies are enough.
    Anyway, the skin is lacking, 3/5 from me.
     
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    well, I found that he did copy from the read me claiming "It makes it look better". >.>

    But instead of just saying "it's bad" why not also tell him what to do to make it better?
     
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    Please tell me how I can improve on this. I also found out that the readme is automatic. And yes, I looked at the model again and saw some CnP parts from sections I had finished. I will fix that if neccessary.

    And PLEASE give feedback, I need to know what needs improvement so you guys will like it.

    Edit: Sorry for the gray background. I have changed he fur on the abdomen and the tusks and feet have been given a "cracked" look. Persoally, it looks like dry dirt, but, that's just what I see. Please give me ideas of what and how to improve. Thx!
     
    Last edited: Jun 24, 2008
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    The readme isn't automatic, sacrid. I don't see it in mine. And you should redo the CnP parts, like the hairs by followinga hair tutorial. Trust me. If you do it right, it would look awesome.
     
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    Sigh*
    Its been said, adding more bandages isnt going to make this skin get approved. Add more and make it look distinctly different from the original or i wont approve it.
     
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    He is tring to improve it. But he also wants to know what it is that he should improve. :/
    So far, he hasn't been told what needs improving other than "his skin".
     
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    Maybe make it more with flesh blood and gore? that will sure improve the skin.