Zeth'Celon

[Celaquil]

This is a terrain I did where as I got inspired by a book named "Lies of Locke Lamora" and made it into my own idea, it is meant to be a part of the grand city of the Life Elves in my Dawn of Life story.

" This city; home to thiefs, gamblers, corrupt warlords and murderers. A place of nobility and powerlust, ahhh... My good old home. "
- Khaine Lifeheart.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

You can see those gay layers of that water model D:
Also what is that green blob at the back?

 

[Celaquil]

The first thing is something I cannot do anything about, just look past it

And its a roof you moron

 

[Megafyr]

I like it alot. : O

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

THAT is a roof? You sure we talk about the same blob? D:

 

[Celaquil]

Just gtfo XereX Its there, and it wont change

 

[Nbah]

I would definitly tint the water model a little, it's too blue atm.

 

[~Void~]

It's kinda cool... the water is a little too transparent though; try reducing its Z value a bit or even placing another layer of water under it. And I think the sky around the sun could be a little less yellow and a little more purple and orange.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

it's really nice, but the sun ray, is not in front of the sun, it's a tad too much on the left of the image

 

[Celaquil]

It really isnt, considering the position of all the high structures around where the sun is. <.< AND even if it is, I personally dont see it as a problem, its not THAT off

 

[raid1000]

o wow no rain?

 

[BlinkforFear]

either there is a wall just under the sun or the sun is in a wall i dont know which one... those sun rays are off a little bit but its fine you dont really notice it at all, but there too yellow i think

y dont you change things up a bit and instead of having a whole sun make it blocked by some of your walls so you only have like half of the sun or something like that, everyone's terrain seems to show the whole sun.

 

[Celaquil]

Because I can.

 

[MeKC]

I really like it. I have never seen anything like this. You got more screens?
+rep

 

[Celaquil]

Of this terrain? Nay.

Other terrains? Check out my sig

 

[Oziris]

The sun looks like a ball that doesn't shine at all. Try tinting a glow model into yellow and placing it where the sun is, making the sun more realistic. The reflection on the water looks really nice.

 

[Jirinal]

The Models and everything looks way to bright in my opinion maybe you can tint them abit darker?

 

[madcd]

i'ts nce but i would sugest maybe a slightly more deeper fog or a diffrent color varation as you are kinda losing some of the depth of the map as you cant see the diffrent layers that well, and i agree the yello of the water is too much,

also just a thing when people are giving critasisim try and take it constructivly rather than just lainly ignoring anything they say . . . . . tho at the same time if you think its right then dont change it