This looks interesting judging from the screenshots (good amount of them!), and I will ceratainly play it after you update your description!
While I like that it is being short and to the point, it also lacks structure. You should check out map description template in order to make it look better.
Putting your e-mail adress in the description really isn't neccesary, but you can keep it there if you wish.

Also, since this is an english only website, you shouldn't include the snippets of spanish in the description.
EDIT: Additionally, I would suggest you change the preview picture here on the hive. the current one, showing the pre-game screen isn't really attractive.