World of Mystics

[Moderator]

21:37, 12th May 2013
Orcnet: as for Hell_Master's review:

I have played the map and no offense but this is quite a bad map, I always get lost here but still I will give a proper review:

[+] Good Points:
-Cool attachments for hero
-Love the auto level where it adds +Stats

[-] Bad Points:
-Terrain is bad, it is so empty and flat. I suggest fill the terran with proper doodads and use the Raise/Lower Tools to give different levels to the ground.
-Dialog when talking are so fast, I cant even catch up with the talking.
-I cant understand quite the story here. It doesnt give that much detail where to go
-Lots of typos.

[] Suggestions:
-Improve your terrain, as I said the map is flat and also empty.
-Make dialogs not that fast.
-Give more details on stories on where to go.
-Fix the typos such as when using "too", its not "to". ALso capitalize the "I"s

So far this map is bad. I would rate this 2/5 and vote for Rejection because of the bad gameplay and also put proper description to this map. It is in the rules to get your map Approved but you will still have to improve this game. Thats all and dont take my reviews as offense to you.

as well as a poorly made map description

 

[KingLich]

After I died at the Arena, a note appeared: ''The End'' and I was never resurrected back again. Nothing else happened, I wasn't even defeated (Defeat Condition, if there's supposed to be one)

 

[jdo]

The end happens on occasion its a risk of the arena and of dieing in general. But theres only a 10/35 chance of it happening.

 

[Daffa]

Voting for :
N/A

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Reasons :
>>Improper Description : VK's Description Generator
>>Resources aren't credited
>>No Screenshots

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Comments :
Credits are missing, No Screenshot of the game in play and Description is lacking.

 

[jdo]

Credits are updated and i can't describe the game in detail because the story changes alot, Please refrain from commenting and giving vote feedback until you have acually played the game.

 

[KingLich]

The end happens on occasion its a risk of the arena and of dieing in general. But theres only a 10/35 chance of it happening.

You should notify (in any creative way you want) the player that there's a chance the Hero might not come alive. If that should happen, add a defeat condition, so the game definetly ends

 

[Daffa]

Actually, I comment now because Screenies ENCOURAGE people to dl your map.
also, your description kinda make many people confused, it's DISCOURAGING people from dl the map.

 

[jdo]

KingLich read the Info at the top it will tell you what i said and daffa i know but i have no way to upload screens :/

Also if you want to revive your hero anyway i put in a cheat so all you have to do is say -Revive.

 

[Daffa]

Okay, will be reviewing the map

how to upload Screenshots : Go to your UserCP, create an abum, upload the SS, then copy the link of SS here

 

[Vinz]

I vote for rejection.

 

[jdo]

why elite?

And ty daffa

 

[Daffa]

I vote for rejection.

Any nice reason Elite?

Forgot, you haven't fix your description yet Jdo : http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/map-description-generator-1-2-a-224558/

 

[Binsu]

I have played the map and no offense but this is quite a bad map, I always get lost here but still I will give a proper review:

[+] Good Points:
-Cool attachments for hero
-Love the auto level where it adds +Stats

[-] Bad Points:
-Terrain is bad, it is so empty and flat. I suggest fill the terran with proper doodads and use the Raise/Lower Tools to give different levels to the ground.
-Dialog when talking are so fast, I cant even catch up with the talking.
-I cant understand quite the story here. It doesnt give that much detail where to go
-Lots of typos.

[] Suggestions:
-Improve your terrain, as I said the map is flat and also empty.
-Make dialogs not that fast.
-Give more details on stories on where to go.
-Fix the typos such as when using "too", its not "to". ALso capitalize the "I"s

So far this map is bad. I would rate this 2/5 and vote for Rejection because of the bad gameplay and also put proper description to this map. It is in the rules to get your map Approved but you will still have to improve this game. Thats all and dont take my reviews as offense to you.