WoodElfAssassinVII.blp

[Moderator]

Misha 24th Jun 2013

Moderator's Review:

so.. as i said before, it looks a lill bit too bare.. i'm sure that crotch could use a totally different covering design that's not so exaggerated.. and also you would do nicely if you cover a part od her chest and perhaps abdomen in fishnet-like weave.

and.. do get rid of the knife and belt on her thigh, on the model it looks like a horrible blob

Review by request - Kwaliti - Jun 26 2013 12:20 GMT+1

This skin seems fine, however, only one technical aspect is detrimental to the overall quality of the skin. The cape is in a lot of contrast with the rest of the skin because it lacks definition and clarity. Right now some places seem oversaturated and smudged and the part of the cape shown on the front looks really smudged, and that's the main culprit. Normally, this wouldn't be much of a problem if the cape wasn't taking up most of the model's surface, but in this case it's the first thing that comes into your view when you look at it. If you could work just a bit more on the clarity it's going to turn out as a great skin.

EDIT: Looking much better. Great job!

Considering you're a new member, don't let approval stop you from further updating your resources - improvement is always encouraged!

 

[FRENGERS]

Can you make it naked??

 

[Legal_Ease]

Probably, but I'm not going to. She's got too much self-respect to do porn. She only stars in action video games. Her parents didn't approve until she bought them a matching set of beamers. Someday she hopes to leave the biz and retire in the south of France, somewhere with a view of the ocean.

 

[FRENGERS]

Just PM me for that

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Can you make it naked??

Anyways, the skin needs more work.

 

[Simooy]

I do not expect a lot of bare skin

 

[Roland]

For some thoughts, I think this skin is kinda Re-colored including the Icon too. but this resources will await rejection when a Moderator deletes it.

 

[Adaethus]

Alright, it looks like at least some effort was put into this skin, therefore I'm going to give some suggestions:

1: Change the eye colour, it currently looks exactly like the skin colour.
2: Perhaps do more with the skin colour as well, currently it looks like one shade of colour and it lacks shading at the knees for example.
3: Overall add more colours, a wood elf surely shouldn't look like a brown blob, leaves, vines etc. would add a lot.

 

[Binsu]

Looks decent but adding some designs should also be done because it is near from being recolored or litlle changes.

But nice try and +4 REP!

 

[Forsaken]

nice skin

 

[Legal_Ease]

Anyways, the skin needs more work.

Could you be more specific?

Looks decent but adding some designs should also be done because it is near from being recolored or litlle changes.

But nice try and +4 REP!

Thanks for the rep Hell_master! I don't usually do this, but I have to disagree with you on a major point. Though I have honest respect for you and your opinion. You are not even close to being correct. Please look at the original. She now has bare legs, the eyes and lips have been changed, the cape is from scratch, legs from scratch, added mid-riff again from scratch, added ear (which still isn't right, talk to Chrome67, its a bitch to get it right) and yes its been recolored otherwise it would be purpleish grey. All that remains of the old skin is the boots, shoulder pads, quiver and the bikini bottom. This is 70% original pixels. This skin should be approved. I know it looks less flashy, but its supposed to, its her style. I was going for a rogue, ranger type of night watcher type of look. This is intentionally not flashy or decorated. Has anyone even tried it in game? It looks better than the original there is not reason to reject it. I agree with you that a design or tattoo might be an improvement, and I would be happy to add it if I thought it wouldn't get rejected anyway. I don't want to do work for no one to see.

Alright, it looks like at least some effort was put into this skin, therefore I'm going to give some suggestions:

1: Change the eye colour, it currently looks exactly like the skin colour.
2: Perhaps do more with the skin colour as well, currently it looks like one shade of colour and it lacks shading at the knees for example.
3: Overall add more colours, a wood elf surely shouldn't look like a brown blob, leaves, vines etc. would add a lot.

I hate vines and I removed the leaves on purpose, but good point, I see what you mean. I have an Idea, I think she would have a knife strapped to her thigh, and maybe a bandage wrapped around the other leg, like this...

warning hot female

How can I know it won't get rejected even with these chages?

 

[Lichkings slave]

Maybe you can play around with her cape?
It looks not colorful :/ although I think its good

 

[Legal_Ease]

Maybe you can play around with her cape?
It looks not colorful :/ although I think its good

Thanks!
I think maybe it could use a trim along the side edges, like the one I put along the bottom, and maybe some extra straps or something. Its not supposed to be colorful, but I agree detail is important. I also like that you made a suggestion. I like suggestions!

-General Rant, not directed at anyone-
I might just let people see the others in my map. I'm tired of all the rainbow looking spells and fashion show outfits, the theme in my next map is dirt, blood and steel. Many of the spells use physical models like axes, cages, nets and glaives. This skin fits in perfect in that world, but maybe not here in the land of my little pony and care bears. Not that there is anything wrong with rainbows or ponies. Some of my best friends are ponies.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Could you be more specific?

1. Eyes' color is same as skin's.
2. Needs more colors.
3. Too litte freehand.

 

[Mgeterno11]

Nicely modified, but needs a bit more colors, especially on the legs. Good luck. 5/5 to encourage you.

 

[Legal_Ease]

Nicely modified, but needs a bit more colors, especially on the legs. Good luck. 5/5 to encourage you.

Thanks!

Can I get some imput on what color eyes a wood elf should have? I don't think they should be green. I went with slightly pink. I know it looks like the skin but if you look close its actually bright pink. Maybe organge?

Thanks for the encouragement!
I will go ahead and add the knife and bandage.

 

[Footman16]

How about a golden/yellow for the eyes like a cats to give that natural night warrior look?

 

[Legal_Ease]

How about a golden/yellow for the eyes like a cats to give that natural night warrior look?

Perfect! It shall be done!

UPDATE: Done!

And Hell_Master thanks!
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[Binsu]

Ok, point taaken with that Legal_Ease. =) and in the second look I think it looks really original to me so I think this could get some Approval =)

 

[Mgeterno11]

You should draw knee-lenght trousers to te legs, it should be grey or green, with textures. Good luck.

 

[Binsu]

Also, I did noticed the legs to be quite blurry. Or is it just me but you can work on it. Rated 4/5!

 

[Legal_Ease]

Also, I did noticed the legs to be quite blurry. Or is it just me but you can work on it. Rated 4/5!

I did notice that. Its funny because its not blurry in the .png or the .blp when I made it. Its not blurry in the picture here where I posted it. Also, when I enlarged the scale size to 4x to take a screen shot, its not blurry. I think it happens because its both shrunk in size and the stretched around the leg. I dub this the "shrink-wrap" problem. Some angles and animations look great other more ...eh. I think its just the nature of skins. For the best quality, enlarge all units by 2 and move the camera back. =) I don't know.

You should draw knee-lenght trousers to te legs, it should be grey or green, with textures. Good luck.

You don't like the bandage?

 

[Misha]

this looks a lill too revealing to me. especially you-know-which area you should cover that up a bit.. maybe in fishnet-like pattern?

looks okay-ish for a color tweak and such

 

[Binsu]

Oh I see, I think thats how they work. So no problem with that, bro.

 

[Roland]

Legal_Ease, Since you updated your skin, I'm starting to like it... The shading is very terrific and Spectacular, But you should add more sick details about it. 5/5

 

[Strydhaizer]

Another new Brown skin that fits in medieval , thanks for sharing

 

[T. D. W.]

Congrats on your approval

Rating

 

[Mgeterno11]

Now it looks even better, it is awesome. 5/5

 

[Razosh]

It's a really nice skin even though I doubt that armor of hers will shield against any blows. 5/5 and + rep.

 

[Lord_Marrowgrath]

Naked Girl 5/5 +rep

 

[Legal_Ease]

Oh I see, I think thats how they work. So no problem with that, bro.

I have to qualify my earlier excuse. It is true that resolution is lost in a "shrink-wrap" effect, the truth is the shading was too close to skin color. I overcame this issue in the new version by using solid black with no highlight for the knife.

 

[Binsu]

Okay got it. =)

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Nice Skin or Nice Skin. Heh, get it?

 

[Bloody Wolf]

ok she turned me ON there is something wrong with my mind 4\5
add some tattoos on her legs!

 

[TheWickedWitch]

excuse me, how to use this?

 

[Footman16]

Import the attached file into your map through the import manager then select it in the import manager and set custom path to the one provided.

Creeps/units/assassin/assassin.blp

 

[TheWickedWitch]

Thanks footman16

 

[Today is a Day]

Nice Skin!

 

[Deleted member 219079]

5/5 got my attention immediatly after entering skins section. Goes instantly to my map. Nice work man!

 

[Vinz]

Downloading.. Review after try.
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EDIT: Oh my. Is it
- just me
- my computer is bugged
- this skin is bugged
?

Well, I thought I was doing the wrong thing when I use my skins so it doesn't appear well, but when I tried this I think something's wrong with my computer.

 

[Binsu]

Downloading.. Review after try.
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EDIT: Oh my. Is it
- just me
- my computer is bugged
- this skin is bugged
?

Well, I thought I was doing the wrong thing when I use my skins so it doesn't appear well, but when I tried this I think something's wrong with my computer.

Wrathion, its either you used a model too for the Warden that mized with the skin or I also experience that there is a rare case that when you use skins frequently, there is a chance that it can alter MPQ to that skin and every other skin you'll give into it will bug and also a high chance it will not change properly to the said skin.

Its not a problem with the skin maybe itself but maybe on MPQ but rememmber I have not proved my idea about this problem same I experienced with yours so this is is just an idea.

 

[Vinz]

It happens with every skin I use, so I doubt it's the MPQ..

 

[Binsu]

Yes, same as me.

 

[Legal_Ease]

It happens with every skin I use, so I doubt it's the MPQ.

MPQ file is not a bad guess. I would wipe your PC of everything Wc3 related. And re-install everything.

Obviously no need to remove maps or anything, I just mean your whole C:/Program Files/WarCraft III folder.

 

[JFAMAP]

Model added to JFA Orpg

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/map-development-202/jfa-orpg-265565/

 

[JFAMAP]

Nice model my friend.
Model added to http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/jfa-orpg-v1-3-a-273725/

 

[deepstrasz]

Naked chicks can't really pose too much of a threat in battle.
2/5.

 

[Warseeker]

Naked chicks can't really pose too much of a threat in battle.
2/5.

Not really a fair way to win battles, xD!

I do like the details on this skin it was well made, Good Job
5/5

 

[Storm River]

how do i add this...

to my game