[Cinematic] War (First Cinematic EVER)

[Far Aldazar Din]

As the title says, this is my first Cinematic map ever. Umm, it is a small battle against the Alliance and the Horde. About 20 on each side.

 

[GeKiller]

hm is a bit simple but you should do it that they aren't in the first seconds in the screen it's better if they walk in your Cinematic i like it more

But nice for your first ever

 

[Bob27]

Ok here are a couple of my suggestions:

• Terrain, you need better terrain. At the moment it is just plain Lordaeron Summer Dirt Tile. No doodads or anything, so you need to work on your terrain a lot more.
• The camera was way to slow. In action scenes you should move the camera fast, and keep everything at a fast pace.
• You should work on your battle a bit more, do more then just have 30 units just attack move at eachother.
• Change the camera more often.

 

[CMarket]

As Bob said, the terrain is too flat, it uses 1 tile, no doodads, no nothing.

The camera should be moving more often and you should make it a bit faster.

The battle should have some spells in it and not just normal attack like a melee map.

My suggestion is you add a short story before the battle, put the battle in some kind of a valley, add doodads, tile variation, a nice fog, some custom sounds possibly, some fast passed battle music and work on some spells and systems.