War and Peace

[frostwhisper]

"May the Earthmother deal with these tools of disrupt, as we clearly cannot"
~ Tauren Wiseman on Tanks

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Hmm nice work as almost everytime you submit something, except those mini rocks in the water, but it just might be me thinking like that

 

[frostwhisper]

Otherwise it's really empty-looking, ergo it's worse :\

 

[Spudnik]

No, the rocks are not what bothers me. What does bother me is that you took the screenshot ffrom the frog perspective, meaning that you placed your camera low on the ground and then looked upwards. Theoretically there is nothing wrong with that, however, in this perticular picture, it is messing with your trees. The models of the trees are clearly meant to be looked at from above, while the look very, very ugly when looked at from the ground. you can see more of the trunk than you can see leaves. So I recommend that you should use a different tree model, one that looks still good when you look at it from below.

 

[FamousPker49]

Your inspiration did return, yet I am starting to see a common theme... Good Terrain though.

 

[~Void~]

Oh noes what happened to the background?

 

[ghenjis]

Some trees would be nice in the center background. You may also try putting some river rushes or gross or something of the like in the shallow sides of the water. Otherwise, pretty well done.

 

[Gilles]

Those rocks are really ugly frosty. I'd just put things along the banks, and make the river deep.

 

[frostwhisper]

Considering your crits, I'll revise this later today.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

The way you put the tank there is amazing!Good joB!

 

[Nudl9]

Looks really good, the only thing that bothers me is the little variation in water (or atleast it doesnt look all that good).
The grass is growing a bit to close to water maybe.
Else its pretty well done, nice color variation, the doodad placements makes sense, the tank does look old and rusty and pretty original idea.

 

[Parkietje]

Not bad, but the tile transition ruins it

 

[Lord_Nor]

jesus long time since ive been here....anyway did you just lift the terrain on one side of that tank or did you somehow rotate it on its axis....if you did rotate on axis ...how???

 

[Gilles]

Roll and the other one. Angle perhaps? Make them negative values.

 

[frostwhisper]

I used both actually.
Positive pitch and roll values, and lifted ground below the tank.