Hymnain - Land of Tears

[Celaquil]

"Uppon these ancient grounds have many battles been fought, people slain and and villages ravaged. It is thus vital to keep this once so war-torn place at peace, forever.. And ever.."

I made this terrain because I wanted to terrain a place in my Dawn of Life story, Hymnain, a place in the Elven empire with many rivers and overgrown nature, which uppon its raining almost constantly and there are Willow trees as long as the eye can see.

Enjoy

Update!

 

[~Void~]

Hymnain? What the fuck kind of name is that? No really, the terrain itself is pretty cool. It could use some more color variation though, yeah it's a gray and rainy day, but that's boring in my eyes.

 

[Celaquil]

Boaring you say? Hmmmz... Well, for this once I wanted to make a calm and peacefull terrain that is just relaxing to look at. Something wrong with that?!

And dont diss my choice of name, it do have a meaning you know

 

[Super-Sheep]

Oh no its boring! Go on and add humans and orcs fightning? ><

In my opinion the terrain is just fine, but you dont really have to make a name like that. Dunno you could have used some fishes and bushes coming out on the water.

 

[~Void~]

Boaring you say? Hmmmz... Well, for this once I wanted to make a calm and peacefull terrain that is just relaxing to look at. Something wrong with that?!

And dont diss my choice of name, it do have a meaning you know

Well it's not exactly relaxing, it seems gloomy, dreary and full of whatever the opposite of contrast is. What I'm trying to point out here is that I think the use of colors is not so great simply because using gray to compliment green (or any color) is not always such a good idea, especially if you don't have anything from the other end of the spectrum. How about a pale blue fog? That might give a more tranquil look.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

It looks boring, add more variation and such like the rest said.

 

[Belgarath]

It looks sad, not tranquil IMO. Not boring either. Looks quite cool in my opinion. Nice contrast of grey/green.

ALSO
Hymnain is a better name than "squigglylinevoidsquigglyline" I mean COME ON

 

[Celaquil]

Alright, I will update it then. And hopefully make it appeal to more folks.

 

[Sephalo]

It's good!
Not boring!
Yes it's sad!
I don't care about names imo, it's all about the terrain.

Little suggestion: less rain. You used heavy (ashenvale?) rain, but I would go for light rain.

 

[Celaquil]

No Teuncreemers, I didnt use heavy rain. I use my own technique for rain.

And now I has updated the terrain, there are two shots, since I cant deside which one looks best, with or without the lights glowing.. I'll let you guys decide

And if you got any form for ideas and more feedback, feel free

 

[oh_snap]

I really do love this terrain. I'm not sure exactly why, but I just really like it.

~Snap

 

[Megafyr]

Looks nice. Maybe higher trees would make it look better?

 

[~Void~]

Looks much better now.

 

[Billy the Cat]

I like the terrain

 

[ArcticInferno]

The one without light just seems to work better. The lighted up one looks pretty unnatural, like there's an excavation at that archaeological site or something.

+rep

Anyway, they both are great.