i saw your map
question? the terrain is yours, because even if is not yours , it will be judged.
there is when i use the proverv a melee should be approved as melee and then upgraded to altered melee.
-i found a melee unorthodox thing, is no good that the neutral buildings be to near each other, Creeps shouldnt be so near, and also you have to put them in camp mode.
-The tittle,
start with a preposition is not very nice, i made the same mistake in one of my maps, the first word should be atractive.Snow and Ice alone is more nice than the other Through Snow and Ice
also the rule of short and good twice as good.
Is like the preposition steals the Snow and Ice protagonism.
do you want some recomendations for beta test. I did tests in my melee maps so altered melee is the same way
i test 3 ways
1)All in the same team
this allows me to see if the AI expands well to all the gold mines and if is balanced the expantion of all races in optimal conditions wich means no war
2)Team battles
this is for see, if there are races with better game play than others, for example Human and orcs maybe wins against humans and nigth elves
AI usually figths in teams not only in battles, also they maybe go to the creeps in teams
3)Free for all
this, allow me to see the individual development of the races, is offen to see, a race lose faster than others, that could be the luck or terrain and other variables in game
hope my comments helps
screen with the melee not good issue