The Peasant - Demons

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1) Terrain - Bad (2)
2) Trigger - Horrible (1)
3) Minor Error - Horrible (1)
4) Major Error - Average (3)
5) Replay Value - Average (3)
6) Fun factor/gameplay - Average (3)
7) Use of imported material -
8) Single player -
9) AI support -
10) Camera - Horrible (1)
11) Originality -
12) File Size - Superb (6)
13) Internet/LAN Friendly -
14) Balancing -
15) Packaging - Average (3)
16) Credits -
17) Storyline - Bad (2)
18) Theme -
19) Protection - Excellent (5)
20) Quality - Average (3)
21) Description/Information/Detail - Average (3)
22) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)
23) Game Mode -
24) Function -
25) Unit Placement -

Total Accumulation Point : 41/70 * 100 + (-7) (Review) = 51.57

[+] - Smallest files size I ever seen for a cinematic.
[+] - The most hillarious part is about the cages, but I won't reveal it since it would be a total spoiler.
[!] -
[-] - The camera runs through several doodad/destructible and it is not done at purpose to give a better effect.
[-] - Conversation dialog at certain point goes too fast.
[-] - Fade filter could use improvement as it fade in too early.
[-] - Camera sometimes zoom too quick at the wrong time.
[-] - Should set it to skip dialog and scores.

Review : This is probably the smallest file sizes I could have possibly seen for a cinematic type map. Which is why I would give Superb for it.

However, there is a lot of animation at this cinematic which have not been run properly. This eventually kill the joy of watching it.

Not forget the bad timing about your camera, it move too quick at some scenario which it should not do so.

There is plenty of error you have committed as well such as making the camera run through destructible/doodad or unit, and it is not done at purpose to give it a better efect. Which is why I have to give the camera the lowest rating for it.

I have half the mind to give this map a rating 2, but there is 1 really good humor at this cinematic which perk me up and make me laugh real good and I already state it at the good point.

You certainly rush in making this map, but please don't do that again. If you create any cinematic in the future, test it before you upload it.

Another -7 points for this map.

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

Score - 52/100
Rating - 3/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

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[Amigurumi]

I know it's very short, but I hadn't much time (school :/ )
But I hope you enjoy it

 

[Slasher]

Grazy cinematic I'm still confused...

 

[Septimus]

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If you think this map review is not accurate or require another review, feel free to contact Alexis Septimus. But, map would only be review again for second time and also for the last time unless under certain circumstances. It would be selfish to request constantly a mod/admin to keep review your map as there is many other maps waiting for approval as well.

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1) Terrain - Bad (2)
2) Trigger - Horrible (1)
3) Minor Error - Horrible (1)
4) Major Error - Average (3)
5) Replay Value - Average (3)
6) Fun factor/gameplay - Average (3)
7) Use of imported material -
8) Single player -
9) AI support -
10) Camera - Horrible (1)
11) Originality -
12) File Size - Superb (6)
13) Internet/LAN Friendly -
14) Balancing -
15) Packaging - Average (3)
16) Credits -
17) Storyline - Bad (2)
18) Theme -
19) Protection - Excellent (5)
20) Quality - Average (3)
21) Description/Information/Detail - Average (3)
22) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)
23) Game Mode -
24) Function -
25) Unit Placement -

Total Accumulation Point : 41/70 * 100 + (-7) (Review) = 51.57

[+] - Smallest files size I ever seen for a cinematic.
[+] - The most hillarious part is about the cages, but I won't reveal it since it would be a total spoiler.
[!] -
[-] - The camera runs through several doodad/destructible and it is not done at purpose to give a better effect.
[-] - Conversation dialog at certain point goes too fast.
[-] - Fade filter could use improvement as it fade in too early.
[-] - Camera sometimes zoom too quick at the wrong time.
[-] - Should set it to skip dialog and scores.

Review : This is probably the smallest file sizes I could have possibly seen for a cinematic type map. Which is why I would give Superb for it.

However, there is a lot of animation at this cinematic which have not been run properly. This eventually kill the joy of watching it.

Not forget the bad timing about your camera, it move too quick at some scenario which it should not do so.

There is plenty of error you have committed as well such as making the camera run through destructible/doodad or unit, and it is not done at purpose to give it a better efect. Which is why I have to give the camera the lowest rating for it.

I have half the mind to give this map a rating 2, but there is 1 really good humor at this cinematic which perk me up and make me laugh real good and I already state it at the good point.

You certainly rush in making this map, but please don't do that again. If you create any cinematic in the future, test it before you upload it.

Another -7 points for this map.

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

Score - 52/100
Rating - 3/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

The map might not be fully tested, if any user of the map found bug/error or anything else.
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[lord_ken]

I was... Confused. 4/5

 

[3rgytr54]

Not as good as you other two, in the flying scene it is a little "unsmooth" and you can see the edge of the map

 

[Zelda.Alex]

This may contain spoilers

>>Suggested players & the description thing same as before.
>>The camera went through mountain part when the demon was telling about mini-game
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=ztu61x
>>Flying doodads
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=pr9wf3
>>Bad camera angle
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=abxxg5
>>the peasant came out of the portal before the portal appeared. Weird. Work on timing.
>>He survived the stone?
>>The camera moved sometimes very fast.

This was humorous but there were many bad things camera being one of them & running through doodads another.

My rating : 2/5 I hadn't thought that I will make my rating down as this series progresses but the quality is forcing me.
Try to improve this.

 

[deepstrasz]

I'm curious how much thought this thing had to spare.