1) Terrain - Horrible (1)
2) Ingenuity - Not Available
3) Minor Error - Horrible (1)
4) Replay Value - Horrible (1)
5) Fun factor/gameplay - Horrible (1)
6) Use of imported material - Good (4)
7) Single player - Poor (2)
8) AI support - Not Available
9) Camera - Poor (2)
10) Originality - Average (3)
11) File Size - Horrible (1)
12) Balancing - Poor (2)
13) Packaging - Horrible (1)
14) Credits - Horrible (1)
15) Storyline - Average (3)
16) Theme - Average (3)
17) Protection - Excellent (5)
18) Quality - Poor (2)
19) Description/Information - Poor (2)
20) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Horrible (1)
Total Accumulation Point : 36/90 * 100 = 40
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[-] - No loading screen at all
[-] - The major bug at chapter 1 still occur. If I go to the left side of the map, it would bring me to chapter 2 map. However, it get disconnect the moment chapter 2 begin.
[-] - At chapter 1 cinematic, the camera movement is too fast.
[-] - At chapter 3 cinematic, the camera just stay lock at the same position all the time.
Review : This is a very poor quality campaign.
First of all, the terrain doesn't give me a good impression at all. Just look at the first chapter terrain, the whole terrain completely blank with just 1-2 destructible/doodad on it.
Second, you fix the major bug at chapter 1. Yeah right, by switching the bug from right side exit to left side exit.
Third, this map does not have any loading screen at all. Go and view every campaign, who ever seen a campaign where every chapter doesn't have any loading screen ?
Fourth, the file size is totally ridiculous considering the amount of chapter currently available. 3 chapter and yet it consume up to 22mb ?
Fifth, the balancing is very poor especially at chapter 3. There is no way you could had possibly defeat the overlord with just a normal attack and there is only 1 spell currently available.
Sixth, you did not give any credit to the original author at all although you use import model. I did not see any detail/description/information at your map quest log or neither at hiveworkshop map description that indicate you give credit to the author.
Seventh, there is no quest log indicate what is the mission objective. Go and play all warcraft 3 campaign, see how they develop those map.
Eighth, your map violate the rules of hiveworkshop. Why ? Because you upload alpha stage campaign. Where is chapter 4 and the rest of the chapter? Upload incomplete/alpha stage map/campaign is totally unprofessional.
Ninth, your campaign does not have difficulty setting. See most of the campaign, they do have difficulty setting available.
However, although this map is between the edge of rejection and approval. I would just be generous to you this time by given you approval. And you better improve your map drastically if you want it to remain approve.
Approved
