The Lion of Stormwind

[Forsaken]

The Lion of Stormwind will be a Single-Player Campaign that features many custom units with custom models.

A new enemy

a new threat is covering the lands of Stormwind,the regional defenders do th best,but,the "gren-shin" kill them all.
Now they begin attack Agaisnt Stormwind.

Who are they?

After defeating some "green-skin," the threat is covering the lands of Stormwind, then the king sent some of its best champions to protect Stormwind. ...

Sir Lothar 'Farewell ..

Lothar and his warrior while returning to their homes ...

Defend yourselves

With the disappearance of Lothar, now a young paladin named Uther leads an army to protect Stormwind.

Dead Mines

With rumors spreading, Uther decides to get it ...

Whath of Kobold
with the cutting of trees, the inhabitants of a cave, behind the forest devastated by humans, they regrouped and are attacking in waves, not to make matters worse kill their leader

...

Bad news

with the rescue of Lothar, many other things are come by ...

...and those who live, always appears...

Inside the tower of Medivh, Karazhan ...

Kill Them All

With the death of Medivh, they took Garona to Northshire,
and now are ready to kill the generals of the Horde at all costs ...

Fall of Stormwind

A large fleet of Orc are heading to Stormwind ...

Exodus

With the fall of Stormwind, even with some survivors, now an exodus of human has to start.

With the arrival in the lands of Lordaeron,
they went to the Capital to resolve something important

...

The Images

1-Need someone that can make loading screens.
2-Need a modeler/reskinner to make a Campaign's starting screen.
3-Need a quest maker.

Forsaken:Storyliner and Map Making

 

[Sin'dorei300]

I can help u with ideas!

 

[Forsaken]

I can help u with ideas!

tell me one of your ideias

 

[Sin'dorei300]

U need ideas(spells, units, heroes, etc.)for ur map? And what model you'll use for Anduin Lothar?

 

[Forsaken]

I'm thinking of using some of these:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...rev=search=footman%20elite&r=20&d=list&page=4

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...4741/?prev=search=footman%20elite&d=list&r=20

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...rev=search=footman%20elite&r=20&d=list&page=2
what do you think about the models?


I've done almost all the units and heroes, but still do not know if I use custom spells. and I needed someone to make a film, I really do not know, however much I try! D:

 

[Sin'dorei300]

They don't fit, imo. Lothar doesn't have a helm.

If u want, use this simple model that i created for he, here: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=ljdidn

Just attach a sword!

 

[Forsaken]

They don't fit, imo. Lothar doesn't have a helm.

he have a helm,look my signuture.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

The guy on ur signature is Arthas!

 

[Forsaken]

no,is sir anduin lothar in war with the orcs.
and Arthas don't use helm until become the lich king

 

[Deleted member 177737]

THe project idea seems alright, but you should re-do the OP It looks like it was a hit-and-run victim.

 

[Forsaken]

THe project idea seems alright, but you should re-do the OP It looks like it was a hit-and-run victim.

What is OP ?
do you join in the project?

 

[rcshaggy]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/lothar-47445/?prev=search=Lothar&d=list&r=20

Here has this link to Anduin Lothar a actual model that looks like him. Oh and I support your campaign and I'm working on a campaign of my own so I wish I could've helped you.

 

[Forsaken]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/lothar-47445/?prev=search=Lothar&d=list&r=20

Here has this link to Anduin Lothar a actual model that looks like him. Oh and I support your campaign and I'm working on a campaign of my own so I wish I could've helped you.

thank you, then you will help me make the campaign, right?
you could help me make the film?? why I do not know D:

 

[Deleted member 177737]

OP is the first post in a thread.

 

[Forsaken]

OP is the first post in a thread.

thanks.
and what you mean by "It looks like it was a hit-and-run victim."

 

[Deleted member 177737]

thanks.
and what you mean by "It looks like it was a hit-and-run victim."

(Making observations, not being bashful.)

All of the font save for the first two lines is exactly the same size which leads the reader to have a hard time figuring out what is a title, headding, sub-headding, description, etc...

Nearly the entire post is in the exact same color of font which along with the previously mentioned size problems leads to confusion when reading,

The information provided in the OP consists mainly of a rough outline of the maps (as far as I can tell) and shouldn't be the main focus of the post but instead an addition to the post.
The post lacks a proper description; Consider removing the current description and adding some information on what the project is actually about.
(Side Note: People don't care about the amount of custom skins, models, units, etc... that are in a map as long as the end result is good.)

I've forgotten what else I was going to type, but I think most of what I was going to say has been written down.




PS: That dark blue color is hard on the eyes.

 

[AntoMarc]

(Making observations, not being bashful.)

All of the font save for the first two lines is exactly the same size which leads the reader to have a hard time figuring out what is a title, headding, sub-headding, description, etc...

Nearly the entire post is in the exact same color of font which along with the previously mentioned size problems leads to confusion when reading,

The information provided in the OP consists mainly of a rough outline of the maps (as far as I can tell) and shouldn't be the main focus of the post but instead an addition to the post.
The post lacks a proper description; Consider removing the current description and adding some information on what the project is actually about.
(Side Note: People don't care about the amount of custom skins, models, units, etc... that are in a map as long as the end result is good.)

I've forgotten what else I was going to type, but I think most of what I was going to say has been written down.




PS: That dark blue color is hard on the eyes.

This, also change the font.. comic sans ms hurts my eyes.

 

[Forsaken]

(Making observations, not being bashful.)

All of the font save for the first two lines is exactly the same size which leads the reader to have a hard time figuring out what is a title, headding, sub-headding, description, etc...

Nearly the entire post is in the exact same color of font which along with the previously mentioned size problems leads to confusion when reading,

The information provided in the OP consists mainly of a rough outline of the maps (as far as I can tell) and shouldn't be the main focus of the post but instead an addition to the post.
The post lacks a proper description; Consider removing the current description and adding some information on what the project is actually about.
(Side Note: People don't care about the amount of custom skins, models, units, etc... that are in a map as long as the end result is good.)

I've forgotten what else I was going to type, but I think most of what I was going to say has been written down.




PS: That dark blue color is hard on the eyes.

thanks, I'll try my best to improve, is that I'm new here on the site and still do not know many important things.

 

[Forsaken]

As I put it all together the images to open as a tab?

 

[Sin'dorei300]

The terrain isn't the best, it could be better! And i suggest to replace gunnies with archers. Also, i think these archers(link: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...-48304/?prev=search=archer&r=20&d=list&page=2) will fit more for Stormwind!

 

[Forsaken]

The terrain isn't the best, it could be better! And i suggest to replace gunnies with archers. Also, i think these archers(link: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...-48304/?prev=search=archer&r=20&d=list&page=2) will fit more for Stormwind!

I already have archers
I'll use this http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/human-archer-65541/?prev=search=archer&d=list&r=20
but this showed me that you seem to be better

 

[David]

3-Need someone that's good with triggers.
Um i can help with that and all of the cinematick's...Any way im glad to be helping for this campaing its going to be so awesome!

 

[Forsaken]

ook
i'm stay so happy with your help

 

[Forsaken]

someonde know one tile like this:

Image

 

[Deleted member 177737]

Don't double post. Pic looks decent and the OP looks a lot better.

 

[David]

I think the best model for sir anduid lothar is Levigeorge1617's Footman
If you dont like the head make his head like uther

 

[Forsaken]

i already have a model http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/lothar-47445/?prev=search=lothar&d=list&r=20
but thanks

 

[AntoMarc]

Ok I got some suggestions for the description.

First you really improved the aspect of it, but now you should change what's in it if you know what I mean. If you want to post the storyline, post just a little of it like a little teaser, don't spoil the fun by posting the description of all chapters. Also add a "Features" tab besides the storyline, where you post what makes your campaign different from other campaigns. Below that, add a "Screenshots & Videos" tab (videos are optional), I don't think there is much left to explain here. Also below that, there should be the "Credits" tab. There are hundreds of good examples on map development section, you could get some ideas from those. Those "tabs" I mentioned are just some examples, you could get far more in depth.

 

[Deleted member 177737]

Ok I got some suggestions for the description.

First you really improved the aspect of it, but now you should change what's in it if you know what I mean. If you want to post the storyline, post just a little of it like a little teaser, don't spoil the fun by posting the description of all chapters. Also add a "Features" tab besides the storyline, where you post what makes your campaign different from other campaigns. Below that, add a "Screenshots & Videos" tab (videos are optional), I don't think there is much left to explain here. Also below that, there should be the "Credits" tab. There are hundreds of good examples on map development section, you could get some ideas from those. Those "tabs" I mentioned are just some examples, you could get far more in depth.

He already has images, and credits are normally put into the map not in the forum post. A features tab would be a good addition though.

 

[Chaosy]

I like what I see so far, GL with your project here. From the screenshots it looks very good

 

[Forsaken]

Ok I got some suggestions for the description.

First you really improved the aspect of it, but now you should change what's in it if you know what I mean. If you want to post the storyline, post just a little of it like a little teaser, don't spoil the fun by posting the description of all chapters. Also add a "Features" tab besides the storyline, where you post what makes your campaign different from other campaigns. Below that, add a "Screenshots & Videos" tab (videos are optional), I don't think there is much left to explain here. Also below that, there should be the "Credits" tab. There are hundreds of good examples on map development section, you could get some ideas from those. Those "tabs" I mentioned are just some examples, you could get far more in depth.

thanks, I'll try to improve

 

[David]

i already have a model Lothar
but thanks

That model is nice to

 

[Codric]

it looks interesting

 

[David]

Wait where are my cinematics maps ?