The Fallen Paldin

[Moderator]

21:39, 8th Jan 2011
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[RedClaw]

testing....Wtf 8.67 mb? xD

 

[Tleno]

Yeah, the map is quite beefy... I mean the size... what did you put in it?

Oh, and I'd like to see BB codes used in description and maybe some terrain screenshots.

 

[RedClaw]

Things i like:
+Cinematic
+Idea
+Execution
Things to improve:
=Terain!
=Terain!
=Terain!
Things i don't like:
-TERAIN!

 

[ap0calypse]

Before I give you the main list of problems in your map, I'd like to point something out:
Whenever you see a percentage like this:
Chance to [...]: 20.00
Then it rounds up to the nearest 5.00%

So that means that a bash with a 1% chance actually will NEVER bash.
That means that the bash-skill Arthas gains sucks big times.
Even a 2.49% chance will never activate.

The only level of the spell that's really worthwhile is level 10 of the spell.
Level 1-2 never activates.
Level 3-7 is all % chance
Level 8-9 is 10% chance
And finally, level 10 is 35% chance.

You couldn't know this, but watch out with such percentages! Critical strike has it as well.
What percentages can you trust? If it's a percentage like "0.12" (which is 12%).
How can you make a bash with 12%? Triggers...

More information about this.
Also, more information

Bugs/problems/notes:

• You imported a 3.2MB song without even using it (because it's .wma instead of .mp3, probably).
• The triggers are extremely inefficient and almost all of them leak.
• The terrain is bad: you've overused the blizzard cliffs, didn't use enough various tilesets, overused cinematic doodads, didn't use enough other doodads etc.
• You've imported too much random files which really don't help make the map any better (RPG males as villagers, some hero-model as escaped prisoner etc - remove all those files, you can do perfectly without them).
• The captain bugged during the cinematic.
• A locked camera can also be a negative thing, in your map it is.
• Some bad grammar/spelling.

 

[Artelium]

I know the terrain kinda sucked. Im redoing the whole map from scratch, it's gonne be a lot better when I but some extra work into it.