The Fallen Forest

[Moderator]

07:07, 12th Aug 2013
Orcnet: my review

 

[sonofjay]

Overview screenshot please. Also whats with the filesize? You might want to mention something concerning that.

 

[Palderian]

Dont know how to upload pictures :S

 

[sonofjay]

Make a album on your profile or put it on the pastebin.

Then get the image link and use this bbcode:

[img][/img]

The code should be like this:

[img]http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/28/maps_27283_minimap.jpg[/img]

And it will look like this:

 

[Palderian]

Thank you

 

[Binsu]

The minimap image resembles my first melee map...lol weird but nice job!

 

[Palderian]

tnx the only problem is that i cant upload pictures.I`v tried but i cant.

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Well let's review this one.I'm tired from swimming but w.e.

-Almost symetric map(the purple and red starting are bigger then others)
-Well placed expantions and creep sites
-Good size 128x128 in my opinion the best for 2v2 or ffa maps
-An average try cause needs a bit work

-Why 2 neutral buildings so close?
-2 taverns? what for? 1 is enought
-Too many neutrals...
-Terrian needs more work

-Dude remove many of the neutrals cause there are too many...
-Remove one tavern(asap!)
-A better descreption will make your map more attractive
-Smoother terrian edges and its too flat make it less by making small hills and addind doodads.

Rate:
Units 3/5
Terrian 2/5
Doodads 3/5
Descreption 2/5

Grand Total : 2.5/5---->Pending

Note: Nothing to say

 

[Remixer]

Like sonofjay asked, why that huge filesize? Something big imported?

 

[Palderian]

yeah models

 

[Palderian]

the map is upgraded with more Nature,doodads hills 1Tavern and more cool stuffs .

 

[Twilight]

Comment

The map is very good, It is a gr8 melee map, I like it, but description needs work
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Rating:
3/5

Terrain

Terrain is flat, but still nice
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Rating:
3/5

Gameplay

A regular melee map.
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Rating:
4/5

Final Rating:

Terrain:3/5
Gameplay:4/5
Comment:3/5

FINAL RATING:
4/5

Suggestions
-Fix Terrain
-Fix Description

 

[Palderian]

thank you

 

[Twilight]

no problem

 

[Palderian]

I`ll get with the terrain tomorrow,promise

 

[Twilight]

alright, tell me wen it is ready.
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+1rep

 

[Orcnet]

Map should suppose to be called an Altered Melee due to different model changes of some units in-game, but such idea is too basic and throughout the game they don't even have changes at all just the models.

Creep difficulty in the game is a bit weakened, this ends up as creep rush to some players, it will only take them a few minutes to wipe out all existing creep camps in play this is a bad idea, while all main bases has no creep camps installed this also ends up as an unfair match. Why waste drudging to expansion sites if you can just build a TH on main gold mines with no players?

Terrain is too wide just for a 4 player match, while most of the space is for filling doodads, much of the decorating is spam looking and not appealing at work(bad cliff making, random placing of vegetation, building doodads look unnatural)

In short, improve more, follow much of my revision and soon you'll understand how things get accepted.