The beach!

[Grave_Digger_]

Here's a littl beach with a ship at the time of sundown

I know i must work more on it! But i dont know what i shall do... Please give comments to help me .

 

[TheBlooddancer]

The fail.

I can see the end of the world, and the ship there oughta be REALLY large, if that's the horizont.

Make it smaller, and place it so you cansee the texture.
Also, add some sunlight, and lightning.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

The fail.

I can see the end of the world, and the ship there oughta be REALLY large, if that's the horizont.

Make it smaller, and place it so you cansee the texture.
Also, add some sunlight, and lightning.

You mean lightning like STORM lighting?

 

[raid1000]

lol you are on a terraining rampage?

 

[Leeroy]

TheDancer has right. I know all the theory to make terrains, I just don't have fantasy.
That's a pretty simple terrain, I know how you feel right now. You've learned a nice hobby, you like rep and to show your work around. But slow on! Making not detailed terrains, with no fog or with limits of the map seeable (if this is the right spelling) won't make your terrains better neither your rep.

This is meant to be constructive and not flaming. Hope it helped you. I've seen your terrains and some of them looked nice.
Take a look at mine (the first) "Elven Forests" and feel free to comment. Thank you.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

lol you are on a terraining rampage?

Yeah, Kinda =D Can you help me by telling me what i can do to improve it?

And btw, blooddancer did you mean lightning like this?

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Lightning as in light sources, and such.
Its called that in Wc3.

 

[Leeroy]

Yeah, Kinda =D Can you help me by telling me what i can do to improve it?

First of all you must add details, and by details I don't say spamming woods or things randomly. Place some rock, corals, you could also download some better ship model.
Second, you should choose a better camera angle and make the limits not seeable (2nd time, if this is the right spelling ).
And fog. Fog makes everything looks good. You should take a look at the tuts section, there are some of them (if not all of them) which are great to begin. Don't forget lightning!
Good luck .

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Theblooddancer, did you mean light source like moon/sun?

 

[Oziris]

Yes he did.

 

[Megafyr]

I like this terrain of you better than the other ones. Keep working on it.

you should increase the view distance so the boat doesn't sail at the end of the world. : )

 

[BearMan]

I like the path the leads into the sea but right at the end it is somewhat a "hole" so it looks like it's below sea level. (In my opinion)

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Here's a new one, It's raining and suddenly a lightning strikes down in the sea! That lightning doesnt look very good in my eyes. Hope you like it more =/

 

[Mr.100]

Uww that lightning looks awful!

 

[Darkyvm]

I have to agree with Mr.100, that lightning looks terrible, also, you can see the end of the world in the picture.
Adding some fog would also help make it a bit better, and imo the sky doesn't fit the picture, perhaps the foggy sky would make it look better.

It's decent,but has a lot of room for improvement.