Temple Of The Four Elements

[Moderator]

14:16, 13th Jan 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[krisserz]

The map is really bad. The terrain is good only in the middle. In rest of the map it`s... empty. You placed creeps in bad places, you have placed very small number of them and you have placed them in imbalanced groups (especially in the middle). There are only 4 gold mines (1 per player only). The map is very small like for a map for 4 players.

Overall the map gets 1/5 from me (mostly because of the imbalance of it) and I vote for rejection.

 

[Vengeancekael]

Also you forgot to add a category.

 

[GhostThruster]

Downloading and reviewing soon.

 

[Moon Lord Hawkeye]

I'll give you aces for the good description... but this is one of the worst Melee maps i've seen.

First off, there's barely any room. YOu start building yoru base and the center pawn creeps attack you... which sucks. Very, very poor terrain, and those waterfalls are, no offence, shit.

Also, change the Dragon Roost. A green roost being guarded by Red Dragons?


Spelling time....

It is rumored that a powerful demon, once a night elf, Illidan has set foot here, on the Temple Of Four Elements - Fire, Ice, Lightning and Air. Before leaving this temple,destroyed, Illidan left ancient tomes which grants ultimate power to those who gets them. The whereabouts of the sacred tomes can be traced to by following his demonic footprints. The temple is also known to have endless precious resources.

Nonono. That should be this:

It is rumored that a powerful demon, once the night elf illidan, has set foot here in the Temple of Four Elements - Fire, Ice, Lightning, and Air.
Before leaving this temple destroyed, Illidan left ancient tomes that grant ultimate power to those who obtain them. The whereabouts of these tomes can be tracked by following Illidan's demonic footprints. The temple is known to have endless resources.

See? You put too many comma's, and screwed up a few words and scentances. Sorry, but 1/5 is this maps score.

 

[GhostThruster]

Here's my review:

Bad points:
Tiny map size for four.
Bad terrain.
Not enough gold mines.
Tomes get you to level three with no creep kills.
Uber-strong creeps in centre.
What's with the green roost?
Mass flyers can devestate players. Easy to defend hay?
No category.

Good Points:
Really good description for a melee game.
Good idea but it ended up bad.


Suggestions:
Get rid of tomes and replace with neutral buildings and creeps. Remove uber-strong centre creeps. Add more gold mines and increase map size.

Overall:
An idea/plan with good intentions that ended up bad. Keep trying and soon your map will be perfect. 1.5/5 rounded up to 2/5.

PS.

See? You put too many comma's, and screwed up a few words and scentances. Sorry, but 1/5 is this maps score.
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Nonono. That should be this:

See? You put too many commas and screwed up a few words and sentences. Sorry, but 1/5 is this map's score.

See? You spelled sentences wrong and misplaced apostrophes. Sorry, but 1/5 for your spelling.

 

[Eldrazor]

Rofl hypocrite

 

[rayapple]

i c... i'm still new at world editing

 

[Moon Lord Hawkeye]

Lol, you caught me. Hypocrite

It's not a bad map... not really. With a little work, this could be really great.