Temple of (insert element here)

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Personally I think it's incomplete, but it's an old terrain I don't really feel like continuing.

 

[Dr. House]

The Timple itself doesn't look that bad but evrything else around it needs so much work since it looks like its supose to be inside a cave right? yet the model you used to create that makes it look crap dont know what you used but ok . Besides that the water makes me bored its not that intresting and somhow it feels to me that those Pilars or whatever they are named should be lowerd or somhow have more variation with smaller rocks or stuff like that. Sorry if i sounded offsensive but i just try to give feedback.

 

[Oziris]

The temple is good. But the rest, bad. The water looks ugly and I don't like the big ugly low quality rock spam in the background. The lion on the left side doesn't mach the one on the right side. The Blizzard cliffs suck, you should have just raised the ground and tiled sand. It would have looked a lot better.

 

[Belgarath]

underground dome is a terrible background. if you were continuing it, i would:
- make a background (eg a sea/some islands/other shit), probably tint the water, raise it up into a natural form (for example in little tiers, maybe make the angle lower too, so you're looking up at it) so that it's kind of like a half ruined/half sunken temple thing which springs from several tiers up to that big pillary thing

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

The temple is good. But the rest, bad. The water looks ugly and I don't like the big ugly low quality rock spam in the background. The lion on the left side doesn't mach the one on the right side. The Blizzard cliffs suck, you should have just raised the ground and tiled sand. It would have looked a lot better.

underground dome is a terrible background. if you were continuing it, i would:
- make a background (eg a sea/some islands/other shit), probably tint the water, raise it up into a natural form (for example in little tiers, maybe make the angle lower too, so you're looking up at it) so that it's kind of like a half ruined/half sunken temple thing which springs from several tiers up to that big pillary thing

Those are essentially the rushed unfinished parts. The problem with the background is the sky doesn't work at the distance I work with, so I had to cheat a bit and work in an underground dome. Same for the sea, I just haven't bothered populating it yet.

Blizzard cliffs are terrible, yes, forgot about them. As for the lions, I have no idea what you mean by "they don't match". If you mean they're not aligned, I don't see how that's a problem.

Thanks for the feedback, I just wanted to get this terrain out already.

 

[Belgarath]

use a stormsphere instead of the underground dome. could work quite nicely with dramaticizing (eerrrr??) it with a low angle at night time, maybe with a nice lightning bolt shooting it.

 

[elredir]

maybe u could make the background look something like the walling caverns...but dont use the underground dome make the walls out of rocks...
besides that the temple really looks great

 

[Deleted member 177737]

It looks like an Aztec version of the tower of babel =/ Cool.

 

[Celaquil]

Unfinished terrain is probably the right word here yes, and since you seem like you wont be working any more on it, there really is no point in my pirking around at what I would like to see improved. Personally, I like the part (the temple) that is already done, and I would love to see a finished terrain of this. For the few terrains I have seen you do WILL I am really impressed by your overal talent for it.